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renegade_ratonga
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Post subject: Should I? Posted: Mon Aug 14, 2006 7:17 pm |
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Interesting yet plain title, no? Anyways, I am on the wanting to make a little story actually. The first main charrie being Nick below this and other charries. I have made the majority already but I guess I should say the plot and the rest so that I can get some yays or nays on whether I should write it out or not? Basically, it is the story of a war that has gone on between the wolves and the Ursus, or in other words Bears but I like latin. For years the Ursus and Dire wolves had fought for glory, territory, and power over the lands. The problem is, as the years go on, the animals get smaller, bears turning less powerful and splitting into many different species almost unable to work with each other with their short tempers and differences and the wolves lack of strength and almost numbers since man has stepped in to stop the wolves from eating what is left for them, which is livestock. Finally, traitors form and because of this, the downfall of the wolves come and the Ursus reign over the woods. Leading the Ursus is the Ursus leader and the leader of traitors, the once Omega Zemas. Now, in the terrible accident, many survived, including the main charrie Nick, but the rest have scattered save for few and now any wolf left is confused on what to do. As you can see of how fairy tales work themselves out, This is my story and I was wondering whether I should start it and put it on Fanfiction or just some sort of story as my own or should I just forget it? Hope I don't sound to idiotic...
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angryunicorn
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Post subject: Posted: Mon Aug 14, 2006 8:03 pm |
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Eh....not a bad idea...but it sounds too much like a comic I read not too long ago, only it was between Dire wolves and Sabertoothed tigers.
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KrazyArc075-cwp
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Post subject: Posted: Tue Aug 15, 2006 2:24 am |
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It sounds great! But I have to say so sorry for putting this side comment I think you should ad some complex things to the stroy. SOrry!  But I like the stroy keep it like to read it.
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