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This is only a teaser untill I finish my other two fics. Please tell me how I did for my first teaser!^^

Prologue:

A white wolf wonders through the snow white land of Nome. She’s looking for a meal, and finds something else, a human. She despises all humans, and would kill them if she had the chance. She noticed her was holding a shiny object that made a loud banging noise when a light flashes out of the front end. It fires and crushed a bullet in her right hind leg. She screeched from the pain and blood drizzled out of her wound. Thw wolf struggles to run, but trippes and trips on her own feet. The human aims again, reloading the gun. She then growls and attemps to try again. She gets up on three feet, able to slightly run towards her target. She looks for the enemy’s weak spot, the neck. The wolf spots the right part of the boday and aims her fangs onto the throat. She lunges, but got caught in a huge net, which she got tangledup in. She was taken away from her home, and to a place that wasn't meant for a wild animal, the city.

thanks, i might extend it, to make it more detailed and to make more sence... thanks for commenting!

thanks, but i know i can do better, and school is about to start, so this and the other fics i'm doing, may take longer than expected to finnish...

Splee! Great job are you going to post more?

Cool story! Love to read the rest of it!

sure! i'm keeping it saved in word, so can just paste it here. i might have some of ch. 1 by tomorrow or tuesday.

I can't wait til what happens next! Its great story so far wildfire