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Hawaii: A New Legend - Teaser
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Hawaii stepped out into the moonlight, panting. It had been a long journey, but it was worth it.

She had arrived in Nome, where her uncle, Balto, resided. She snuck around buildings carefully, approaching his boat. Then she took a deep breath and bolted across the snow. She stood at the boat's bow and jumped in.

Balto woke and perked up his ears,"Who's there?" he asked. Hawaii brushed herself off, and walked toward him. She replied,"It's your niece, Hawaii. I've traveled a long path to see you."

Balto stood up and walked over to her. "I'm glad you've come, but why?" he was confused. She sat down and sighed. "Kodi ran away from Nome and came to me. He said that you never pay attention to him anymore, that all you do is spend time with (Aunt) Jenna." Balto started to cry,"I know why he thinks that. It's because he wants me to teach him how to talk to the ladies." Hawaii sputtered a laugh,"HA HA HA!! Lady advice? I can give him that. But I have a feeling that there's more to his pain than that. Or maybe, you're hiding something.." She cocked an eyebrow suspiciously.
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So, do you guys like it so far? Should I continue? If you want pictures of Hawaii, I'll be posting more of them soon. The next one will be about her bio. Please give good criticism. NOT harsh, and/or rude comments.

good job Shanecae, so your doing to seperate stories right, this one and The Unexpected Meeting
one more question do you know when part 2 of The Unexpected Meeting is going to be done

I'm starting this one, but I won't continue this one until Part 2 of The Unexpected Meeting is done. And to answer your question, it should be done in a few days.

okay thanks

Anyone else care to read this Teaser? Please?

Thankies GreyWolf! *huggles* XD

Aww, thanks! That makes me feel really good.

Sure thing GW!