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Silent Wolf
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Post subject: [Teaser] The Lost Family  Posted: Tue Aug 01, 2006 10:49 am |
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Balto stared at this strange wolf. Who was she? What was she doing here? Why did she call him Difera? He shook his head. The wolf was all brown, almost a copper color, with her stomach, chest, eye, and an ear that were black, Her muzzle was also mostly black. He turned from the wolf and headed back towards Boris, who was waiting on the boat.
"Difera!"
Balto turned and looked at the wolf, "Do I Know you?" he said.
"You mean you don't remember me?"
"No. I've never seen you!"
"I'm Tiye. Your------"
And I'm going to cut off there, or I'll give it away. What do you think?
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rockyjet~ginga
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Post subject: Posted: Tue Aug 01, 2006 11:07 am |
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Looks like a good story. You should post it^^
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sleazye
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Post subject: I like your writing Posted: Tue Aug 01, 2006 5:56 pm |
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I really like your writing style, and your story, the only comment i want to make is one. Try and cut down on your WAS's and WERE's. These just bring your writing down. If you write around these you will find that your writing just feels stronger. Can't wait to read more.
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lobo1235
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Post subject: Posted: Tue Aug 01, 2006 5:56 pm |
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i like it
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I drew the signature picture and avatar myself.
Come check out my Art Gallery on lion king/Balto source.
Im getting a spirit & All Dogs Go to Heven one also.
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Silent Wolf
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Post subject: Posted: Thu Aug 03, 2006 1:18 pm |
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Thanx I'm not finished yet, but I'll get it done soon
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balto31
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Post subject: Posted: Wed Aug 16, 2006 4:39 pm |
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I love it I can't wait to read what happens next  .
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Silent Wolf
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Post subject: Posted: Sat Aug 19, 2006 5:40 pm |
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Thank you
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What an interesting question. Lets think about it while I beat you with a baseball bat.
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