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 Post subject: Balto/101 part 2
PostPosted: Sun Jul 30, 2006 11:15 pm 
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wow it's been a month and a half since I posted part one of my fanfic viewtopic.php?t=5572
well here's the first two chapters of part two.

Part 2

Chapter1

Lucky had been walking for what felt like days but he knew it had only been several hours since he had left home. He wondered if anyone knew he was gone yet. The snow storm had stopped but the temperature had dropped drastically.
“I wonder how long it is until sunrise?” Lucky pondered aloud
“Sunrise is in 0400 hours cadet.” Said a very familiar voice behind Lucky
Lucky spun around to face the very short Lt. Pug. “What are you doing out here Pug?” Lucky questioned
“I should ask you the same question Cadet Lucky.” Pug fired back
“Look Pug I’m not in the Bark Brigade any more so don’t call me cadet got it!” Lucky ordered growling
“Yelling at a superior officer! I’ll have you court marshaled for that!” Pug yelled back “Cadet Tripod! Detain the traitor.”
“Tripod’s dead you war crazed psycho!” Lucky was furious now he drew he sword and took a fighting stance “Now leave or I’ll make you go!”
“Sorry Lucky can’t let you do that.” said another voice
Lucky looked over his shoulder and there stood Tripod,still with only one arm “Tripod you’re… you’re alive.”
“Yeah I’m not dead and Pug here’s the one who saved me.” Tripod said
Lucky fully turned to face his brother who was dressed in full military arctic combat attire.
“Cadet Tripod here is the only Bark Brigade Cadet not to go AWAL.” Pug said proudly
“AWAL! Look here Pug no one quit we were forced to leave!” Lucky yelled getting ready to slug Lt. Pug but as he pulled back his arm Tripod grabbed it and twisted it behind his back.
“Sorry Lucky can’t let you do that.” Tripod said releasing his brother
Lucky looked at his brother and could make out a very serious look in Tripod’s eyes.
A few miles off

Aleu, Kodi, Cadpig, and Rolly were searching for Lucky.
“LUCKY!” Cadpig called into the darkness
“Give it a rest Cadpig he has a good few hours lead on us his probably miles away.” Kodi said sighing slightly as they continued onward.
Rolly hadn’t moved
“Something wrong Rolly?” Cadpig asked
“No just thinking.” Rolly said he had a worried look on his face
“Hey, Aleu, Kodi shouldn’t we have brought flashlights or candles or something to see with?” Cadpig asked
“Naw we’ve been though these woods so many times we could do it in a snow storm right Sis.” Kodi said looking at Aleu
“Yeah, and there’s a road here now so if we get lost we can just follow it home.” Aleu said.
The small troop continued down the road ignorant to the fact they were being watched.

Chapter2

“You think there okay Pongo?” Perdita asked as she and Pongo stood on the front porch of there new home.
“Aleu and Kodi said they knew there way around and Balto and Jenna were pretty confident in them so I’m sure there fine, but it’s Lucky I’m worried about he’s never up and left before at least not like this.” Pongo replied with a sigh turning to face Perdita who was know crying, he leaned over and held her. “Now there I’m sure Lucky’s fine he couldn’t have gone to far.”
“I hope your right.” Perdita managed to say thru her sobbing.

Lucky
Tripod had begun to attack maliciously and Lucky did his best to dodge each attack but the darkness made it hard to see Tripod’s movements and his dodges often failed.
“Tripod! What’s wrong with you?” Lucky asked but his question went unanswered Tripod continued his onslaught.
Finally Lucky had had enough and drew the sword on his back. Once Tripod saw Lucky draw his weapon he hit Lucky in the stomach and when the punch landed Lucky fell on his back. He fell with a thud and had managed to draw the sword fully. Lucky regained full focus just in time to see Tripod’s foot slam down on his chest pinning him to the ground.
“Why? Tripod, why are you doing this?” Lucky coughed up Tripod’s foot crushing his lungs
“Because Lucky you weren’t the one who saved me from Hell.” Tripod replied a burning look in his eyes
“I…I would have…Tri b…but I thought…” Lucky was stopped mid sentence
“Thought what I was dead, oh no I was alive and miserable in that cold cell praying to be rescued and you know who saved me? Pug saved me and now you get to suffer like I did.” Tripod was fuming as he said this
Lucky looked back at his brother he could say nothing to ease the pain Tripod felt nothing to cool the fire that burned inside him, but at the same time he had to turn the tables on the fight in his favor. Suddenly Lucky took his sword and jammed it into Tripod’s leg. Tripod screamed and jumped off Lucky leaving a gaping hole in his leg from which blood was gushing out. Lucky quickly got to his feet and punched Tripod hard in face knocking out a few teeth and knocking him unconscious. Lucky looked over his now unconscious and very badly bleeding brother the blood had formed a pool of red underneath Tripod.
“Pug, you got a first aid kit.” Lucky asked Lt. Pug
“Of course.” Pug replied
“Bandage him up and take him to the nearest town and have a doctor look at him.” Lucky ordered as he walked around Tripod and then around Pug.
“And just were do you think your going?” Pug asked
“That was not a suggestion that was an order.” Lucky said darkly lifting up the hand that still clutched his bloodstained sword.
Pug stared for a moment and the turned to quickly bandage Tripod. Lucky continued on, sunrise was arriving as he walked.

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 01, 2006 10:51 pm 
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part of Chapter 3 should clearup some of who Pug is

Chapter3

Rolly, Cadpig, Kodi, and Aleu where continuing on after Lucky and as the sun came up Kodi noticed something off in the distance.
“Hey guys who’s that up there?” Kodi asked
As the stranger got closer to them Cadpig and Rolly instantly knew who was.
“Lieutenant Pug!” Cadpig and Rolly said simultaneously
“Looks like he’s carrying someone.” Aleu said
As Pug approached Cadpig recognized that someone as Tripod.
“Cadet’s! Remove Cadet Tripod from my arm!” Pug yelled out
Cadpig and Rolly quickly did as they were commanded Aleu and Kodi stood back and watched wondering who this Lieutenant Pug really was.
“Excuse me but who are you?” Aleu asked Pug
“I am Lieutenant Pug of the Bark Brigade who are you?” Pug said eyeing Aleu and Kodi
“I’m Aleu and this is my brother Kodi.” Aleu answered “ Just what is the Bark Brigade?”
“The Bark Brigade is a strict military unit specially trained by me to prevent against the invasion of cats.” Pug proudly answered
Kodi choked back a laugh.
“Is something funny Chuckles?” Pug growled
“No sir its just that an invasion of cats is laughable I mean be realistic.” Kodi said not knowing what he’d gotten into. Cadpig noticed Pug’s angry face and decided to jump in.
“Lt. Pug, Sir, don’t worry about Kodi he…um…hit his head and he’s never been the same talks all kinds of nonsense.” Cadpig said standing in front of Kodi.
Kodi was about to say something but Cadpig whispered “Just play along.”
“Fine but I’m watching you.” Pug said staring at Kodi

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