Hi, I was inspired by Lone Wolf_fanwriter to write my own fanfiction, sorry if it sounds the same
. I think his work is great. My fanfic is slightly more than 20% done. Anyhow, here's a preview. tell me what you think.
Jenna heard urgent scratching at her door. “Who is it?”
“It’s me, Balto. There’s something urgent going on. I need you to come.”
“But what’s the-”
“NO TIME TO EXPLAIN! Just move, fast!”
Jenna was bewildered. She wondered what could possibly be going on, it being 11:30 P.M. by human time. She was about to leave through the doggy door, but saw it was blocked to make sure Jenna wouldn’t run away. Rosie, woken by the noise, walked up to her and asked, “Jenna, where do you want to go girl? It’s late and it’s dark outside.”
Jenna replied with 2 barks and then a whine.
“Alright girl, but promise to come back!”
Jenna barked one more time as Rosie opened the front door. She dashed out after Balto, already far away and waiting for quite some time.
“What..was..so..urgent..?” Jenna said as she caught her breath.
“I wanted you to come with me on a midnight stroll by the beach…”
“Oh Balto, I thought it was an emergency!”
“But it is…” Balto paused to look Jenna in the eyes.
“You know Jenna, whenever I look into your eyes, I feel like you’re the only reason I live for…”
“Aww, Balto that was sweet…”
They looked at each other again. Then Balto took off, screaming in the distance “Catch me if you can!”
Jenna, finally coming to her senses, raced after Balto. Balto was headed toward a cluster of pine trees. She took a shortcut to the tree-cluster. Climbing on one of the lower limbs of a tree, she then waited until Balto would come to her. Precisely according to Jenna’s plan, Balto came to rest behind the tree Jenna was perched on.
Balto waited a few seconds then peered past the tree to the beach. Jenna was nowhere in sight. “Where is she?” Balto wondered aloud. Seizing her chance, Jenna carefully slid down the opposite side of the tree, her scent concealed a little bit by the aroma of pine trees. Then Balto said, “Hmphh…I guess I’ll have to go find her…” with a little concern in his voice. Jenna snook up behind Balto as he stood up.
Jenna pounced like a cat hunting a mouse. “Aaack!...” Balto yelled, and then threw what he thought to be a wolf over his back…
”Oomph…”
“Oh it’s only you Jenna. I was just about to go looking for you. Are you alright?”
Jenna barely stood up, holding her right front paw up in pain. “No, I think I broke my paw…”
“Jenna I’m so sorry! I never meant-“
“Gotcha!” Jenna pounced on Balto again.
The playful couple rolled about on the grass.
“You tricked me!”
“So I did.”
They stopped rolling around.
Balto said, “There’s something on your muzzle; let me take it off for ‘ya”
“Where?”
“Here.” Balto kissed Jenna for a long time. They got to their paws. “So are we actually going to stroll the beach?”
“Yes.”
“Alright…Let’s get going.”
“It’s so romantic here…Isn’t it beautiful how the moon reflects on the ocean?”
“Almost as beautiful as you.”
They kissed passionately as the moon sunk down and was replaced by the rising sun
The surroundings seemed all too romantic…Everything…The trees, the waves, the moon…Then Jenna scented something…
Jenna gasped.
“Jenna what’s wrong?”
“We have to get out of here, quick!” screamed Jenna, already running at full speed
“Where to?” said Balto playfully, thinking it was another trick.
“Anywhere! Just not here!” screamed Jenna.
A gunshot rang out.
“Aaaahhh!!!!”
And then Balto said,
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