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Roxas
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Post subject: One Dream, One Smile, Two Hearts Posted: Sun Jul 30, 2006 8:39 am |
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This just a small teaser for my upcoming story which I have not decided a name for.
I watched it burn, that is all I could do, as I watched the thick black smoke took over the sky like a blanket. My eyes roamed over the burnt pieces of wood with pieces of rubble, and too think these used too be houses, standing tall with pride. My paws ever so softly moved forward, feeling them sink through the cold snow. I only took a few steps before stopping. I gave small sigh and looked down, too someone who did not know me this would seem like I could not care that much, but deep down inside, my heart was cut in half, like a knife too butter. I closed my eyes and hung my head down almost in shame and shook it ever so softly. This was not meant too happen….not like this. He looked back up again and continued too move through the remains of the peaceful town. He finally stopped when he saw what he had feared the most, he saw the mark most would have passed it off as a scratch on the door. But he knew better, they were coming, the mark of the iron wolf. He was near and waiting for me. I must have known then what was going too happen too me, but even then it did not think about it, death was not really what I wanted too think about right now. I finally made my way too where the beach lay once, I winced and saw, that the thing that out of everything I wanted too have been left unmarked, had been burnt too the ground. But of course they knew I loved it so that was probably what they went for first. I sighed and a tear ran down my cheek. I lay on top of the remains of my father’s boat. I watched the now dying fire which had claimed the let over’s of my town. I watched as the last pieces of Nome were claimed by nature. This was my story….no….our story, my name is Kodi, and this the story of me, and my other half.
_________________ I support off the wall and original pairings, therefore I am a strong.
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Tough!
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Frightfull
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Post subject: Posted: Sun Jul 30, 2006 11:36 am |
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Joined: Sun Apr 23, 2006 3:11 pm Posts: 103 Location: In my own little world
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sounds cool. can't wait for more!
_________________ "Whenever i see someone less fortunate then I, and let's face it who isn't less fortunate then I! My tender heart tends to start to bleed." -Gelnda (Wicked)
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KodiackWolf
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Post subject: Posted: Sun Jul 30, 2006 11:51 am |
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Joined: Fri Jul 21, 2006 8:27 pm Posts: 338 Location: Virgina Beach
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Wow that was great but suspenseful I hope you get the story done quickly so I can read it.
_________________ "Neither snow nor rain nor sleet nor hail will stop the US Mail" -Kodi
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WhiteLightning
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Post subject: Posted: Tue Aug 01, 2006 7:50 pm |
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Joined: Wed Apr 12, 2006 12:25 pm Posts: 221
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please finish soon good so far.
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