Its ok, this stuff wont happen over night i'm currantly not getting verymany comments on my fics either but no matter what i'll never stop writing fics even if the one I worked the hardest on is not noticed. that aside here are some tips:
Befor you read the tips remember "good things come to those who wait"
-people like to read stories with a good plot.
Dont make a storie that you want to rush into. Take time for a good plot a cook up. Even though you might be excited of what you come up with and dont want anyone to "steal" your idea post a board about it.
-people dont like to read really short stories that all the action happens in one page then its over type thing.
Dont write a one-paged storie with all the action in it. Take the time to explain whats going on and make it easy for the reader to follow.
-people dont like to read these "hi ppl" or "r u comming"
These are really bad in stories and you should NEVER use them in a storie. They are extreamly annoying. enough said.
-people like propper puncuation.
people dont want to read "we was chassin a rabbit" instead make the character say "We were chassing the the rabbit" if english is not your native language then errors like that are understandable.
-Use interesting characters
People like to read stories with interesting characters and the things they do. Again take time to think of a character and what its like. It you have an art gallerie then put your character in there.
-Good derctiptions or the story
Put a good description of your storie sutch as no one-liners and make it easy-to-read paraghraph.
-complaments
If you comment on people's writing then they may comment on yours.Also comment on fics that you actually read and not a comment like "nice fic" instead be more honest with what you thought of the fic and give a smal critiqu if nessasary. like "Awsome fic but you seemed to be rushing things a bit." remember not to spoile it for the others.
-advartising
Advartise your fic. Post it on the boards, ask others to please read it. If it seems that everyone is waiting for fics by the "great" writers then dont be disscouraged and keep trying just dont keep making the same topic.
-Be literate
Be literate meaning explain whats going on like
He ran to the barn. instead say
He ran to the barn hastily his heart pounded and he was panting hevily