Balto the lone wolf

LadyofTheWolves · **Posted:** Mon Jul 24, 2006 11:58 am

summary: Balto's wife Jenna dies and is all depressed...so Balto decides to find a new mate. But what will Jenna's spirit have to say about that?

A/N: Shall i continue the story?

Snickelfritz · **Posted:** Mon Jul 24, 2006 11:59 am

The idea sounds good, but just for future reference, try telling us more about the story, about he characters, what this is going to be rated, what type of story is it, etc.. :wink:

LadyofTheWolves · **Posted:** Mon Jul 24, 2006 12:02 pm

sorry...but can i make it pg? Is that aloud?

Kai~Wolf · **Posted:** Mon Jul 24, 2006 12:04 pm

thats something new, go for it.
like Shanecae said you should add more detail into who your characters are and things like that
if you want to do that now just hit the edit button in the upper right corner and add the info

Snickelfritz · **Posted:** Mon Jul 24, 2006 12:07 pm

Oh yeah! You could even make it PG-13!

LadyofTheWolves · **Posted:** Mon Jul 24, 2006 12:15 pm

Chapter one: Here without you

Balto the half/wolf dog is now all along and depressed in his boat, howling and crying from the thought of losing Jenna. He know that Jenna is about to die because she has cancer..but his heart cant take the pain anymore. It is now morning as Balto decides to go visit her, he perks up his wolfish ears as he hears the little girl crying. "She's dead! She's really dead!" Balto hears a wail from a girl but turns around to see who she was.

"Rossie!This isnt good..." Balto talks to himself as he rushes over to wherever she was going. "Jenna! Jenna!" Balto calls out to her but hasnt heard a normal responce.

Snickelfritz · **Posted:** Mon Jul 24, 2006 12:17 pm

Good job so far! Are you going to continue Chapter 1, or are you stopping there?

LadyofTheWolves · **Posted:** Mon Jul 24, 2006 12:18 pm

Im continuing...im just doing bits and pieces of it

Axel_Silverwolf · **Joined:** Tue Jul 18, 2006 1:49 am **Posts:** 1068

Sounds interesting so far....Keep on going!

Snickelfritz · **Posted:** Mon Jul 24, 2006 12:21 pm

Okay, can't wait to read the rest of Chapter 1!

Kai~Wolf · **Posted:** Mon Jul 24, 2006 12:27 pm

very good job, i like the beggining

LadyofTheWolves · **Posted:** Mon Jul 24, 2006 12:27 pm

Continuing chapter one!

"Man...if only i could talk to Rossie." Balto says but while fallowing her,he sees Rossies dad holding a montionless reddish/brown dog in his arms. "No...NNOOOOO!" Balto accidentally howls as Rossie stops crying to look at beind her. "Balto!?" She says his name in a shocked voice. Balto came closer to her and nudges her to pet him. "I miss her two boy!" Rossie squeezes him as she soon lets go of him.

Rossie's dad puts the motionless dog's body onto the snowy ground, and balto walks towards it with a broken heart and nudges the body to his face so that he could see it. "Oh no..no! NNNNOOOOO!!!" Balto howls again as Rossies comes over to him and hugs him.

end chapter 1

Snickelfritz · **Posted:** Mon Jul 24, 2006 12:28 pm

Good Chapter! Can't wait for the next!

LadyofTheWolves · **Posted:** Mon Jul 24, 2006 12:31 pm

thanks..i just bored

Axel_Silverwolf · **Joined:** Tue Jul 18, 2006 1:49 am **Posts:** 1068

This is good. But here is a tip. Try writing more before you post it here. :wink:

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