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The Unexpected Meeting is a new Fan Fic that I have made. I only have a little bit of it done, but iIm just going to go ahead and post it, so you guys can hopefully give me some good criticism, and helpful tips, and/or compliments.

Chapter 1: When it All Began

Storm rose from her spot and walked out of the den. She sensed danger in the air. Then, the rest of her brothers and sisters came out, and felt it too. They all started to slowly back into the den again, but just as they did that, a shot fired from within the snowy forest.

Hunters were here, really here! She had heard about them, but never thought they'd really come. Her wolf instincts kicked in, and she lunged toward the supposed hunters in fear and anger. But before she could tear even the least bit of one of them up, a man shot her.

She looked down at where he had shot her. "Why wasn't there any blood spurting out?" she thought to herself. Then, she started to feel dizzy and woozy. All of a sudden, she went black.

When she woke up, she was in a dark, cold van, in a wretched steel barred cage. "Where were they taking her?!" she thought in fear. She thought she'd already have been dead by now. Maybe what she got shot with was a.. TRANQUILIZER!
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And that concludes the Chapter 1, hope you liked it! Please let me know your thoughts, and sentiments!

its a very good start but you should give more info about your characters for this fan fic
i have been waiting to see a fan fic or pic from you for awhile now so i cant wait to read the whole fan fic

Yay! Thanks for actually posting my board! When you say give more info about the characters, do you mean give the info in the fic? Or state it before I post the fic?

i guess maybe before the fan fic tell a little about each character like what they look like and their personality and stuff like that

Okay! There's only two characters in the story, so that shouldn't be hard.

good, i know its kind of early but do you know when you'll be finished

Uh, who knows? I have kind of a writer's block right now, it took me a week alone to get Chapter 1 down on paper. I'm really sorry, I hope I can get out of this meancing block soon, it's really ticking me off. X_X

huh i hate writers block it happends to me sometimes in school when im writing an essay, anyway cant wait to see the whole fan fic! im going to be the first to read it

Huh, thanks! I usually write pretty good essays in school, and my brain seems to flow more with ideas that shoot down in the pencil or pen. BUt since it's summer break, my brain has nothing in it except my name, age, sleep, pig out, and have fun!

im busy this weekend and most of next week but if its okay with you if you can give me some physical descriptions of your characters i might be able to draw them. but sometimes i cant get all of the detailes into the drawing and it looks bad so thats why i normaly just draw random wolves or foxes. But then i feel if i cant do it then i have dissapointed you again in not being able to draw you something. So im not sure what to do so just tell me what you think

Oh that would be lovely! It's a bit late where I am, so my mind's a little scrambled. I'll send you the stats and physical characteristics in a pm tomorrow morning as soon as I get on.

sounds great, remember this is going to take awhile and i might screw it up like i do sometimes but i'll try my hardest.
i think im going to log off now because my fingers are starting to hurt after all of this writing so i'll talk to you tommorow then

Alrightie! TYYL! ^^ Til morning! Oh, and I'm sure you won't screw it up, you're a great artist!

thanks

i dont mean to be a pest or anything but are you going to pm me about your characters info today because im not going to be on at all tommorow
or Sunday and i would like to start some of it today so could you just tell me on this forum topic when your going to pm me
thanks