What do ya'll think?

Maiyun · **Posted:** Tue Jul 18, 2006 7:44 pm

Hey Guys, I was just wondering, I wrote three fan fics but my best one is Kodi's job. Can ya'll just give me some ideas to make it better? thanx and plz don't be too harsh

Tibbeh · **Posted:** Tue Jul 18, 2006 8:15 pm

I thought it was very good, but I did see a few gramatical errors that drove me nuts. (I'm just weird like that. lol) But the story is great.

Maiyun · **Posted:** Wed Jul 19, 2006 8:02 am

oh thanks for taking the time to read some tibb_Wolf. :lol:

sorry about some of the errors. I'm not the best at grammar. :lol:

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