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Ninetalesuk
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Post subject: Posted: Tue May 24, 2005 12:34 pm |
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Wasn't bad as I thought it was... Phew... Good job! An amazing story! Hopefully, Flash will forgive Balto soon...
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Rotramel the Writer
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Post subject: Posted: Tue May 24, 2005 8:45 pm |
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Joined: Sun Jan 02, 2005 12:36 am Posts: 274 Location: Living with my Family in Arkansas
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Flash isn't one to carry a grudge, but....
Well, with this being his daughter, it may take a little longer.
As for everyone else, including Jenna, all is forgiven.
On the promise that he will NEVER do it again.
The trust factor between Balto and Jenna is a little broken
(Ha, a broken trust?) but, it will heal, just like anything else, though now, in the back of her mind Jenna will always have to wonder...
Glad you liked it!
Thanks for the comments, and my next one should be done if not this weekend, the next.
We get monday off, and I'm devoting the entire day to writing, so...
maybe I'll finish it.
I'll post it as soon as I do.
Thanks again!
- PFC Anthony E. Rotramel, USMC
(Rotramel USMC)
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Fuya
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Post subject: Re: Balto: When a Mistake is Made.... Posted: Fri Jul 09, 2010 10:41 am |
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Haven't read it yet, but plan to soon.
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