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Post subject: Jenna Gone Bad!?  Posted: Thu Jul 13, 2006 3:59 pm |
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This story happens when Steele returns to Nome (altough he is banned)
Chapter one: Uh Oh! I smell trouble!
After helping Aleu and Kodi out with their problems, Balto just seem to do nothing. Although he wants to be a sled dog, but nobody even wants him on the team 'cause he's half wolf. While wandering around the city of Nome, Balto decides to go to Jenna's house to see here. When he arrives there, Balto notices that she isnt home!
Shall i continue on wiht chapter one? or not?
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Post subject: Posted: Thu Jul 13, 2006 8:04 pm |
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Yeah, what they said^^...what did they say? I'm tired.
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Post subject: Posted: Fri Jul 14, 2006 11:20 am |
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Coninuing chapter one:
"Jenna!?" Balto says aloud as he sniffs the area. "I know that I havent been around to see her lately...but this!?" Balto says as he jumps out of the opened window to go fallow the scent of Jenna. After fallowing her scent, he finally spots her! She doesnt seem to be alone though...somebodies with her! While spying on Jenna's conversation, Balto now realizes who it is! 'Steele!' Balto thought as he bares his fangs but is no noticed by Steele.
"What are you doing here still, wolf dog!?" Steele snapped as his lovely wife Jenna comes up from behind him, being side by side. "Jenna! What are you doing with HIM!?" Balto bellowed as Jenna feels a bit guilty in the inside. "I thought that you were banned from the town of Nome!" Balto took his eyes off her then to his big time rival.
"Is that any of your business filth!" Steele snarls as he and Balto get ready to fight. "Hey, Hey boys...I'll chose who I want to be with." Jenna chimes in as Balto raises his wolf ears up in hope. "I want..." Jenna pauses as he looks to her husband then to Steele. "I want Steele!" She finally finishes her sentance as Balto's ears have gone all the way down in sorrow. "B-B-But why do you want this loser!?" Balto spat as water fills his eyes.
<End of Chapter one>
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Post subject: Posted: Fri Jul 14, 2006 11:33 am |
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Good Chapter! I feel so bad for Balto though...  Can't wait for Chapter 2! 
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Post subject: Posted: Fri Jul 14, 2006 11:37 am |
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Shanecae wrote: Good Chapter! I feel so bad for Balto though... Can't wait for Chapter 2! Yeah..I just love to do drama 
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Post subject: Posted: Fri Jul 14, 2006 12:47 pm |
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Lone Wolf_fanwriter wrote: Let's put a little more in our posts, okay, Shanecae?
A good first chapter, indeed. So many questions..
Why does Jenna want Steele?! What dog in her right mind would want him? He's the one who nearly got most of Nome killed by the diptheria. And why the sudden change from the end of the first movie?
Keep it up!
-LWf
Well in the story..Jenna feels that Balto doesnt care for her much anymore so she decides to take Steele instead to make him feel guilty about him not spending time with her
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Post subject: Posted: Fri Jul 14, 2006 1:39 pm |
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Lone Wolf_fanwriter wrote: Oh.  I didn't mean that you needed to answer the questions right away... But oh well. Balto not spending time with Jenna, though? Do explain. Just what has he been doing? Keep writing, don't answer me! WRITE! -LWf like doing his own thing..hanging out i guess...
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Post subject: Posted: Sun Jul 16, 2006 6:26 pm |
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Wow. Sounds neet....But sorta....weird....but still cool
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