New Fanfic Topic, Balto: Betrayal

Lone Wolf_fanwriter · **Posted:** Fri May 20, 2005 7:58 pm

Just thought of this today. It's a little...questionable, but hey, it's fanfiction.

To save space on the forums, this fanfic was deleted. But you can read it on the site, in the Fan Fiction section!

Yeah, kinda gut-wrenching, but let me know what you think.

Ninetalesuk · **Posted:** Sat May 21, 2005 6:56 pm

Intresting... another betrayal story... We have one with Balto cheating on Jenna while this one has Jenna cheating on Balto. Maybe you should do this chapter. I want to see how Jenna can fix this.

Lone Wolf_fanwriter · **Posted:** Sun May 22, 2005 7:46 am

Maybe I will, it is an interesting topic. One slight problem: Is it possible for Jenna to 'accidentally' cheat on Balto. I think not, as she is the one having the pups. Therefore, she would have to be dead serious about doing that, and I'm not sure if she could feel that strongly for some one besides Balto.

Maybe I'll have Balto think that Jenna is or has been cheating on him and go from there. Hmm....

If anyone has an opinion, by all means share it. I'm kind of torn here. ('Write it or not, write it or not?')

Lone Wolf_fanwriter · **Posted:** Sun May 22, 2005 11:40 am

Ok, right now it looks like I'm gonna write it. I'm already working on the first chapter and have a general (and I mean GENERAL) plot laid out in my head. I'll post it and see what everybody thinks, but even if everyone hates it I'll still write it!

My general plot:

1. Balto thinks Jenna cheated on him (she is gone alot, etc...)
2. Balto sees Jenna w/ someone else
3. Heartbroken, he leaves Nome in the middle of the night and Jenna finds out all to late the next morning
4. Jenna follows him, eager to prove that she still loves him with all her heart

Hey, I said it was general.

And, of course, I will also continue to post Balto: A New Life as it is completed.

steet · **Posted:** Sun May 22, 2005 12:04 pm

Wow, that's pretty close to my fanfic...I'm looking forward to read it!

Lone Wolf_fanwriter · **Posted:** Sun May 22, 2005 12:57 pm

How close is it? I don't want to sound like I'm copying you, but your fanfic is kinda what got this idea in my head.

steet · **Posted:** Sun May 22, 2005 2:23 pm

No, you can't copy it, since I don't think you've been able to read it. So it's not a problem at all for me, on the contrary!

Lone Wolf_fanwriter · **Posted:** Sun May 22, 2005 2:34 pm

Thanks Steet! True, I haven't been able to read your fan fic, but I really liked the idea. Thanks again. I'll post the first chapter as soon as it's ready. :wink:

Ninetalesuk · **Posted:** Sun May 22, 2005 4:33 pm

Sure, write it... I mean, your taking a risk like what USMC (Did I got that right?) is doing... Except for gender different... he is doing Balto, your doing Jenna... with different plot results.

Huttserwolf · **Joined:** Sat May 21, 2005 9:17 am **Posts:** 168

sounds kool

Ninetalesuk · **Posted:** Sun May 22, 2005 5:34 pm

Should start your own topic and then post it up on there...

Huttserwolf · **Joined:** Sat May 21, 2005 9:17 am **Posts:** 168

Ninetalesuk · **Posted:** Sun May 22, 2005 5:54 pm

Yes, you. It's not a good idea to post your own story on someone else's own topic.

Huttserwolf · **Joined:** Sat May 21, 2005 9:17 am **Posts:** 168

srry bout that . I didnt know

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New Fanfic Topic, Balto: Betrayal