Joined: Mon Jan 02, 2006 10:01 am Posts: 109 Location: The Middle of Siberia
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Can I make a suggestion? Try not to 'clump' all your writing together. It makes it difficult to read and might put people off. Try to space ti out a bit more, and your good to go!
Balto123
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Joined: Sat Aug 13, 2005 10:18 am Posts: 2427 Location: Fountain inn S.C.
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heh, he means to add spaces. Like, break it up into paragraphs. That's as easy as pressing enter everyfew lines. And yes, i like your style of writing. It's brilliant. I look forward to ready any fan fics you write. Or, you could join some RP's. Either way, you're a good writer.
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