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 Post subject: Fanfic Teaser- "Tales to Remember"
PostPosted: Sat Jul 01, 2006 8:13 pm 
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Name: Tales To Remember
Writer: Maya Huskee
Description: Maya's virson of the pups from Wolf Quest.
Rating: At least PG, or PG-13..
Characters:
Aleu (Ah-lu) © Universal Studios
Kodi (Ko-dee) © Universal Studios
Terrance (Tear-rance)/Blaze (B-laz) © Maya Huskee
Dingo (Ding-go)/Chase (Ch-ace) © Universal Studios
Sasha (Sah-sh-ah) © Maya Huskee
Nana (Nan-na) © Maya Huskee
Karee (Car-ree) © Maya Huskee
Bella (Bell-la) © Maya Huskee
Emily (Mm-a-lee) © Maya Huskee
Iron (I-orn) © Maya Huskee
Daniel (Dan-yel) © Maya Huskee
Ontario (On-tar-ree-o) © Maya Huskee
Steele (Steel) © Universal Studios
& Amblin Entertainment
Kiki (Key-Key) © Maya Huskee
Koki (Co-key) © Maya Huskee
Riley (Ri-lee) © Maya Huskee
Hawkins (Haw-kins) © Maya Huskee





I have an upcoming fanfic. Well, duh thas obvious. I had started to work on it quite along time ago, then just stopped for some reason. So I found it on my comp & decided to pick it up again. I only had one chapter in it... but then i've added more. So here is what I have on this comp...


-Chapter 1: Bye Bye Dingo
Dingo waves good-bye to his brothers & sisters sitting in the wooden box. The little girl carried Dingo about a block away, & then stopped in front of a nice little house. She looks around, & then makes her way into the doorway.
“Papa! Look at the puppy me & Mama picked out!” Cried out the little girl, holding up the puppy for her Papa to see. Dingo wriggles in her arms to be put down. The little girl’s Papa takes the puppy & looks at him.
“Why, he is a fine pup, aint he?” The girl’s Papa laughs in a booming voice. Dingo licks him under the chin. The girl’s Papa then put the puppy down. Dingo runs around the house, checking everything out. The little girl, Mama, & Papa all come into the kitchen to sit at the kitchen table to eat some biscuits. As Dingo runs through the kitchen, Mama laughs at the pup.
“So what should we name him?” Mama asks the little girl. The little girl looks down at her biscuit, & frowns. She thinks really hard.
“How…about…” The little girl pauses. “…Chase!” She says, laughing. “Because he is always running around the house like he is chasing something!” The little girl smiles at herself for thinking of it.
“Chase is a splendid name!” Mama says to the little girl.
“Yes it is, Koki.” Papa says to the little girl. Koki smiles.
“Thank you Mama. Thank you Papa. It was hard to think of too!” Koki says, in a dramatic way.
Dingo makes his way over to Koki. He looks at her & whines for some of her biscuit. Koki looks down at him, then looks back up; she continues to eat her biscuit. Dingo whines some more, waiting for Koki to give him some.
“Okay okay, Chase.” Koki says. Dingo just figures it’s the human way to say Dingo, so he goes along with it. He lets out a puppyish yip. Koki puts her finger to her lip & makes a ‘shhhhh’ing sound. Dingo sits there patent & quiet. Finally Koki pulls a piece of her biscuit off & slowly & sneakily gives it Dingo. Dingo eats it up happily.
“Koki!” Mama’s voice comes. Koki cringes. “You aren’t feeding your dog biscuit, now are you?!” Mama says in a stern voice.
“No Mama!” Koki lies. “I’m eating it, honest!” Mama gives Koki a suspicious look.
“Okay then, you better not be feeding him our food! He has his own food to eat!” Mama scolds. Koki sighs & looks down at Dingo, who still wants more. He lets his tongue lull from his mouth, waiting to see if she will slip him some biscuit. Koki shakes her head.
In the next instant, Dingo hears the ringing sound of Kibbles falling into a medal bowl! Dingo turns & sees Koki’s Papa pouring some into Dingo’s bowl. Dingo’s eyes widen & he runs over towards him, yipping.
“Alright, Alright!” Koki’s Papa says, laughing. He puts the bowl down on the floor & in the next instant Dingo has his little head buried into the bowl. Kibble begins to fly from the bowl as Dingo comps down on them.
Kibbles! Yaaaay! Mmmmm. It taste so good! Dingo thinks to himself as he chomps away.
“Look at him go!” Papa laughs. “You should have named him Speedy!” Papa laughs even harder.
“Yeah. Darn.” Koki says, snapping her fingers. “I wish I had thoughta that!” Koki finishes, frowning.
“Chase is still a good name too, Koki” Mama says to Koki, patting her head like a mother does. Koki sighs.
“I guess so.” Koki gets down from the kitchen table & goes back towards her room. As Koki walks in her room, she sees many boxes filled with her things. Koki sighs again.
“Chase made me almost forget that we are moving…” Koki says, sadly. “…I’ll miss Kiki. ‘Specially because our names were so close!” Koki frowns.
“Why do we gotta go to Montana anyways…” Koki kicks a box of stuffed animals. “Not like Papa cant get good work out here.” Koki grumbles. Mama then walks in Koki’s room. Mama frowns.
“What’s wrong Koki?” Mama asks. Not far behind Mama, is Dingo who followed Mama up the stairs.
“We’re moving, that’s what’s wrong!” Koki says sourly. Dingo tilts his head knowing the word ‘moving’ & he never really liked it.
“Aww, Koki! We’ve been through this millions of times!” Mama groans.
“So? I still don’t like it!” Koki says, mad.
“Well like it or not your coming.” Comes Papa’s voice from the door. Koki looks up to see him. Her face gets real read & she crosses her arms.

-Chapter 2: Moving Time
Less than a week later, it was time for Koki & her family to move. Koki really didn’t want to leave; as she watched her parents pack up the stuff into the van. Koki sat there, Dingo clenched in her arms. Koki sat there, mindlessly. She hated the very idea of moving so far away.
She wondered what would happen when they’d move. She didn’t want to make new friends; she didn’t want to go some place new. She didn’t want to move. Period.
Dingo wriggled around every few seconds in Koki’s arms. Koki pulled Dingo close to her & nuzzled her face in the pups fur. Dingo licked her face of the tear that was trickling down it. Dingo could feel that Koki wasn’t happy, & felt bad for her.
Dingo was a happy little puppy with his new family, & didn’t like to see Koki sad. He tried to lick away her sadness, but it only made her laugh a bit & then be sad again. Dingo was getting discouraged himself.
“Okay, that’s the last of it.” Said Koki’s Papa to her Mama. “Are we ready?” He asks.
“Almost...” Mama says, looking toward Koki. Mama walks over to Koki, but Koki wont even look at her.
“Come on Koki, Its time to go.” Mama says sweetly.
“I don’t wanna go.” Koki says sourly.
“Well that’s to bad little girl, because I’m not leaving you & your dog behind.” Papa says, teasingly. Koki get to her feet, carrying Dingo in her arms. Koki jumps into the van & sits down, her face as hard as a rock.
Koki buckles in & continues to hold her Dingo. She hasn’t let go of Dingo all morning, & doesn’t intend to let go any time soon. Dingo barks & wriggles in Koki’s arms. Koki pulls him towards her & kisses him on the head.
“Here we go Chase. Time to go to…” Koki pauses. “Montana…” Koki cringes.
“Oh don’t be so dramatic.” Says Mama, getting in the van.
“Why not? Wouldn’t you be too if you were leaving your whole life behind?” Koki says sourly.
“You don’t think I’m leaving my life behind too?” Mama asks, turning to the side to look at Koki. Koki looks away, & doesn’t answer.
“That’s what I thought.” Mama says to Koki. Mama turns back around & buckles in. She closes her door & waits for Papa to get in. Soon Papa opens his door & gets into the van.
“Okay family. Time to say good-bye to Alaska & get ready to say hi to Montana.” Papa says cheerfully. Koki can’t see what he is so happy about.
Koki doesn’t say a word as they pull away from their house; all she does is stare out her window. She watches all the people outside of her window. She doesn’t want to leave them, nor does she want to leave Nome.
Dingo keeps wriggling, slowly making his way out of Koki’s grip; but as soon as Dingo is almost free, Koki pulls him back up & tightens her grip. Dingo whines & licks Koki’s hands so she will let him go. Finally, Koki decides to let Dingo free of her grasp.
Dingo jumps down off her lap & tries to stand. He falls down because he isn’t used to standing on something that is moving. He lays there for a moment trying to figure out what happened.
Dingo then stands up, & again he falls down. This time it makes him angry. He wants to stand, but he cant stand for more than a second or two. Dingo whines as he gets up again, ending up with the same result.
Finally Dingo decides its best to stay in Koki’s lap. He gets up quickly & jumps up for Koki. Dingo gets his front paws up on Koki’s lap, but his backside begins to slip off. Koki laughs & pulls Dingo up.
“Silly puppy.” She laughs, & pets his head. He lets his tongue lull out from his mouth as he watches things past by out Koki’s window.

-Chapter 3: Sasha meets Riley & Hawkins
A hick-town looking boy pats a puppy that is mostly red with a white muzzle. The puppy smiles & rubs against the boy’s hand. The boy smiles & picks her up. The pup licks his face, smiling.
“Ma! I want this one! Oh, please, Ma!” The boy begs his mother.
“You’re gonna havta ask your Pa, Riley.” The boy’s mother says. Riley groans & sees his father not far away. He takes the pup with him.
“Pa! Can I keep her!? Oh Please can I keep her?!” Riley begs, holding the pup out towards his father. His father looks at the pup.
“Don’t you already have a dog?” Riley’s pa asks him. Riley pulls the back towards him.
“Yes sir, I sure do!” Riley replies.
“Then why do you want another?” he asks.
“Look at her! She is so cute!” Riley says, holding her back out. Riley’s pa sighs.
“Alright Riley. But you better help pay for that dogs food, you understand? Your Ma & I aint made of money, you know.”
“Oh, Yes sir! I do understand!” Riley says, hugging the little pup. She licks his cheek. Riley runs back over towards his Ma.
“Ma! Oh, Ma! Pa said I could keep her!” Riley says, holding the pup out for his Ma to see. Ma smiles.
“Well aint she a classy little doll?” Riley’s Ma says, petting her head. The pup licks her hand. Riley’s Ma smiles. Riley smiles to & pulls her back close to him. The pup licks Riley’s neck & his cheek. Riley laughs & nudges the pup’s head away with his hand.
“I’m gonna go take her to meet Hawkins, Ma!” Riley says, walking towards their truck.
“Okay. You be careful now, you hear?”
“Yes, ma’am.” Riley says. Riley takes the pup over towards their beat-p truck. In the back of the truck, chained, is a very large dog that seems to have a wire look to his coat. The pup gleams when she sees the huge dog.
“Hawkins!” Riley says, looking in the back of the truck. The large dog comes up to the side. He looks quite old, but very energetic.
“Hawkins look!” Riley says, holding up the pup for him to see. Hawkins sniffs at the pup curiously, & the pup wriggles when Hawkins cold nose touches her.
“What do you think boy? Aint she cute?” Riley says, proud of her. Hawkins barks, & it seems to echo to the pup. Riley smiles, happy that Hawkins agrees.
“What you think we should name her? Cuz I have no idea. Ma says she looks real classy, kinda like you.” Riley says, pulling the pup back towards him. Hawkins barks.
“She does seem kinda sassy…hey… remember that girl I used to like?” Riley says to Hawkins. Hawkins barks in response.
“Her name was… Sasha!” Riley says, & looks at the little pup. “Your name is now Sasha, & you are prettier than any girl ever!” Riley says smiling. Hawkins barks, looking at the pup too.
“Riley!” Comes Riley’s Pa’s voice. Riley turns & sees his Pa waving at him to come over. Riley sighs.
“Hawkins… you watch over her. You do a good job boy.” Riley says, placing the pup in the back of the truck with Hawkins. Before Riley runs to join his parents, Riley pats Hawkins on the head.
As Riley leaves, Hawkins looks down upon the pup. He gleams at her pretty coat. She jumps around under his feet, yipping playfully.
‘Settle down youngen.’ Hawkins laughs. Sasha looks up at Hawkins from where she stands, under his chest. Sasha wags her tail.
‘But I’m so excited!’ Sasha exclaims. She jumps around in front of Hawkins. Hawkins picks up Sasha by her scruff, & Sasha giggles, wriggling around. Hawkins sits on his haunches with Sasha dangling from his jaws. Finally he sets her down.
Sasha growls playfully & plays with Hawkins’s huge paws. Hawkins watches Sasha play. He smiles, enjoying Sasha’s company. Hawkins leans his head down & licks Sasha’s head. Sasha laughs & tries to gnaw on his muzzle playfully.
‘Heh! I like you Mr. Hawkins!’ Sasha says, & continues to try to eat at his muzzle playfully. Hawkins smiles.
‘I like you too, Sasha.’ Hawkins says. Sasha lets out a yawn, as Hawkins lies down slowly. Sasha gets on top of Hawkins’s paws & front legs & settles down. She rolls on her back looking up at Hawkins. She yawns again, & her eyes begin to close sleepily.
Hawkins smiles, & licks Sasha’s head. Sasha lets out a soft giggle & falls to sleep. Hawkins lets out a yawn himself, & puts his head right up to the back of Sasha’s. Hawkins closes his eyes, & begins to drift into a sleep.

-Chapter 4: Sasha becomes a stray
Something picks up the small sleeping puppy. Sasha opens her eyes to see a huge angry looking man. Sasha can sense that something isn’t right about this human. Sasha yelps.
‘Hawkins! Hawkins! Oh please wake up!’ Sasha says as she struggles to get away from this human. Sasha claws at his rough hands that hold onto her harshly. She yelps loudly.
Hawkins awakens from his nap & shakes his head. As his eyes focus he notices that Sasha isn’t on his paws.
‘Hawkins!’ Sasha yelps. Hawkins gets up & sees this man with Sasha. Hawkins leaps forward, snarling uncontrollably. Hawkins gets pulled back by his chain, & his front paws go up, his claws extended in rage. His eyes burn with fire as he tugs against the chain.
The man begins to walk away, trying not to be seen. Hawkins continues to snarl & pull against his chain in an unimaginable hate. Sasha yelps & struggles to get free. She doesn’t like this man; she wants to go back with Hawkins & Riley.
Hawkins is still snarling & trying to break free of his chain. Hawkins can feel his strength pulling the chain from the truck. He continues to pull hard. Some people stop to stare at the huge dog, which seems to be snarling at nothing.

Far away the man & Sasha begin to come into the forest. Sasha continues to struggle to get free. His grip begins to get tighter on Sasha & she doesn’t like this feeling any more. For the one time in Sasha’s life, she decides if she wishes to live to bite the human, & that’s exactly what she does.
Sasha sinks her sharp puppy fangs into the mans hands over & over. Sasha can see blood being drawn. The man yells & curses at Sasha. Then he holds Sasha up with one hand & throws Sasha into the closest tree. Sasha hits it with a yelp & tumbles to the ground. Sasha then falls unconscious.
Back at the truck, Hawkins has just about broke his chain. Finally the chain snaps & Hawkins jumps from the truck. Being an Irish Wolfhound like he is, he picks up Sasha & the man’s trail quickly.
“Hawkins! No!” Comes Riley’s voice as he runs up to stop his dog. But Riley doesn’t get to Hawkins in time. Hawkins takes to a quick lope, & then picks up his speed. He hopes that Sasha & the human haven’t gotten to far away.
“Hawkins!” Calls Riley, watching his dog run. Riley knows that he will never catch Hawkins now. Riley’s Ma & Pa come up behind Riley. They watch Hawkins run, getting smaller as he begins to fade into the distance.
“Hawkins…” Riley says, tears pouring down his cheeks. “He was my best friend.” Riley says quietly. Riley’s Pa pats Riley on his shoulder.
“At least you still got that pup, boy.” Riley’s Pa says, trying to cheer him up. Riley remembers Sasha, & smiles.
“Sasha!” Riley says, running to the side of the truck. Riley’s smile begins to disappear.
“Sasha?” riley says, looking around the back. “Sasha?!” Riley says franticly, trying not to cry. “Sasha…” Riley says, choking up. Riley’s Ma & Pa both come up to stand beside Riley.
“They...they both are gone!” Riley says, a tear falling down his cheek. Riley’s Ma rubs his head.
“Maybe that’s why Hawkins left, to find Sasha.” Riley’s Ma says. “That means he’s a good dog.” She says, trying to cheer him up. Riley lets out a sniffle.
“Maybe…” Riley says.

Far away Hawkins is hot on Sasha’s trail. He can sense Sasha being closer as he comes to the edge of the forest. He pauses & sniffs for a moment. Then Hawkins runs right into the forest, knowing that he is getting closer.
‘Sasha!’ Hawkins calls. ‘Sasha! Where are you?’ He yells, waiting for a response. He continues to run & can sense Sasha being closer.
‘Why wont she answer?’ Hawkins wonders aloud. Hawkins suddenly stops. He sniffs & looks to the side. He sees Sasha’s darkish red fur on the ground by a tree.
‘Sasha!’ Hawkins calls, & jumps to her side. ‘Sasha...’ Hawkins says, gazing down at her body. ‘Oh Sasha, what has that man done to you?’ Hawkins says, nudging Sasha’s head.





-Love always,
Maya

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Nice i like it keep up the good work.

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Thank you Killer. ^^ I appreciate that! ^^

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