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 Post subject: (Want to read a bad story?) Balto 0: Before Balto 1
PostPosted: Fri Jun 09, 2006 8:32 am 
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Rated: Pretty much G (Some parts /could/ .. Yes, /could/ be more for older kids/people..... Maybe not..)

Warning: I don't have great spelling, so if you can deal with VERY bad spelling, then there ya go. And this is a BAD story, and it's just.. ugh.. My first one, and Boy.. isn't it awful. xP Oh, and I make /alot/ of typos, and I am sure there is more then five typos in this story.




"Nome, Alaska. It's a small town almost on top of the world. . . . In the cold winter of 1925, it was snowing hard. Back then the fastest and most reliable way of getting around was with teams of dog pulling loud sleds. Races were held every year to find out the best team, and the competition was very fierce". . . . A greyish-brown wolfdog was on a roof, and knew there was a race to find out the best team again, and that was in a few weeks. He grinned, just thinking about it. His Friend, and kinda like Father, stood beside him. "I don't know why all you think about is races, sledding, because for one.. it is driving me sane!" Boris rolled his eyes, and crossed his wings/arms. Balto grinned, turning his head to Boris. "Time to Race!" Balto laughed, and Boris shook his head. "Oh no! No No and NO! I do not like to be seen in town! and having to be /there/ when you 'race'! I am NOT a.." before Boris could say anything else, Balto just grabbed him. His head being in Balto's mouth, however. Balto used a clothesline to get to the otherside, and put Boris in some kind of pants, and then he got to the other side. He took Boris out, and smiled at Boris. "Why do I even let you do this to me? Wh- Hey, I am not done talking to you!" Boris yelled, watching Balto walk away, and jumping on boxes, and fell on the ground. Balto shook his fur, and looked up at Boris. Boris looked down, and gasped. He crossed his wings again, looking disappointed. "H-how? Ooooooh! I will just get down myself!" Boris rolled his eyes, again. "After all I do for you." He said lowly to himself, and just stood there .. Until he fell, but luckily Balto cought him. And again, Boris's head was in Balto's mouth. Balto trotted to an alleyway, and put down Boris. He grinned, again. "Oh, you! You aren't a wolfdog, are you! Your just some kind of hunting dog looking for goose!" Boris complained, again. Balto rolled his eyes, and walked off, and Boris walking beside him.

Balto walked out of the alleyway, and then saw wonderful looking red husky. He opened his mouth, and pinned back his ears. The Red Husky smiled at her girl, Rosy. "Jenna!" Rosy laughed, hugging Jenna. "Jenna.." Balto said, lowly. Boris laughed, alittle.. and looked at Balto. "Cupid got you?" Boris asked, and Balto ignored Boris. Balto was too busy looking at the pretty girl, Jenna. Jenna shook her red fur, feeling as the wind blew softly. And that made the day feel colder, and what a wonderful feeling it indeed was. Jenna smiled, and nuzzled her girl. Jenna curled up her tail, and grinned as she saw her two friends not too far away, Dixie and Sylvie. Balto kept smiling, looking at the pretty husky. "I must meet her.. But how? I-.. She wouldn't like me, I am after all..." Balto lowered his head, sighing. He was a outcast, still. And this really ruined his day, but how would he know for sure that she was going to dislike em? He sat down, still rather sad. But then, a black and white big husky walked around Balto. His blue icy eyes giving him a rather more evil look. "Well, Well, Well.. isn't it Balto?" Steele grinned, evily. And behind him was three dogs, and they happen to be Star, Nikki, and Kaltag. "Steele..." Balto said in a low voice, giving Steele a rude look. Boris pushed Balto alittle. "It IS, after all, now time to go!" Boris said, and kept on pushing Balto. Balto pushed Boris away, alittle. Balto always disliked Steele, because Steele was the main dog bullying him, and such. Steele turned to Jenna, and grinned. "I don't have time for you, Mutt." He spit on Balto's face as Balto's head was lowered, and Balto shook the spit off him, and growled. The three dogs was laughing, and one dog could be heared saying.. "Great work, dere." Nikki smirked, and then ... "Your the most amazing, the fastest, the smartest, the bestest!" Kaltag bragged. "You get him! Hehehehe!" Star laughed, and got nocked out by Kaltag. "Balto!" Boris yelled, and Steele laughed and walked over to Jenna. "Dat rude little.." Nikki sat down, and Kaltag nodded his head. "He is the most disgusting, the most dumbest, the most meanest, the most..." Star had a stupid grin on his face, and then said. "He ain't a Busy dog!" Star said, and only to get nocked out again by Kaltag...

The three dogs left, and Balto and Boris just watched, but then Balto walked closer where he could clearly see Steele, and Jenna. And of couse, Boris right behind em. Steele smiled at Jenna, getting very close to her. "Well, Jenna, a nice day.. isn't it? And for you, and me.. Just to get along." Steele smirked, and 'disgusting' was what Jenna thought. "Yes, Steele. It is a nice day, but I got... I got some things to.. Um, do today. And I really should get going right now, You know?" Jenna rolled her eyes, and walked away. Balto kept watching, just hearing the voice of Jennas makes him feel happy inside. Boris rolled his eyes, and watched with Balto. "Oh, is that so?" Steele growled lowly, and followed Jenna. "Excuse me, but tomorrow? You and me, and at night?" Steele grinned, and stared at Jenna. "It could be a date, and a nice plan." Steele laughed, evily. "Sorry, Steele, but I don't go out at night. My girl don't want me, too." Jenna lied, knewing she had to make up something, and she did. "Daytime, then?" Steele asked, still following her. "I have to go now.." Jenna said, and trotted beside her girl. Steele growled, and looked over at Balto. "This would better not be the reason!" Steele said to himself. Balto saw Steele look at him, aswell as Boris. Boris pushed Balto, and complained. "Go now!" Boris said, and both of them went to the boat...

The night came so fast, maybe alittle too fast.. It was now dark, and was getting late.. Balto sat down, and watched the town. "Jenna.." Balto spoke to himself, sighing sadly. "Love couldn't of got you this fast, or has it?" Boris asked, sitting beside Balto. Balto turned to Boris, and shook his head. "Nah, Her and Me? And Love? It's just not it. I just.." Balto stopped, and turned away from Boris. Boris put his arm around Balto, and nodded his head. "I know how it feels, because it happened to me one time.. But it never worked out." Boris sighed, thinking in the past. Balto looked at Boris, and tilted his head. "Really? .. You never told me this before." Balto lowered his head, and sighed. "It wouldn't work out for me and Jenna, too... if I ever met her, and later on.. you know." Balto kept his ears pinned back. "Oh, Now now.. All because it never worked out for me doesn't mean the same for you. She might even like you! And plus, from the looks of it.. She doesn't seem to like Steele that much. You may be a wolfdog, but don't let this ruin your life. I see her over there, and I think it's time for you to talk to her. After all, She doesn't know you yet." Boris smiled, and Balto smiled just alittle. "Think so?" Balto asked, and Boris nodded his head. "Thanks, you always know what to say." Balto smiled, and trotted out the boat. Boris watched, happily. Balto trotted over to Jenna, and stopped. "I-I.. must do this." Balto said to himself, and walked over to Jenna. He cleared his throat, and started to speak. "H-.. He- Hel..Hello!" He got the words out, he now needs to learn how to let the rest of these words out. Jenna slowly turned over to him, and pinned back her ears. "Hi..." She said in her low voice, letting out a sigh. She was near the boiler room, and so was he, of couse. "I-..I..I.." He shook his head, and let out a deep sigh. "I am.. I am.." He turned away, feeling so stupid. He started to shake alittle. "I am Balto!" He said very fast, and stood up. He slowly turned back to her, it was just too hard to not look at her. "Y-you are Je-J-Jenn..Jenna! .. R-right?" He asked, shaking still. His ears was still pinned back, and he felt so stupid. Jenna smiled alittle, and nodded her head slowly. "Yes, it is.... Nice to meet you... Balto." Jenna said and again in her low voice, as always, mainly. Balto smiled at her soft and low voice, and that she smiled. "J-just a shot in the dark, but I-I was wondering....if uh, umm.. you know.. if ugh, you would.. I don't know, maybe like to.. Um, Uh, Err, eh.. Well, you know.. Umm hang out? Maybe um.. Maybe I can, nevermind.. Would.. um you like to hang out?" He asked, and glad he got the words out. It took him awhile, and it was about time he got those words out. He was so shy feeling infront of her, and it was so hard to say stuff infront of her or to her. She giggled alittle at the way he was acting. "... Of couse." She smiled, again. Balto grinned, happily. "G-great!" He spoke in a happy voice. "To-Tomorrow, Okay? I-in the m-morning.. Maybe, or any time y-you.. uh, uh, umm l-like?" He turned away, slowly. Jenna rolled her eyes, and nodded her head. "Sure.... I will see you.. tomorrow, then." She said, and slowly walked away. "Oh, and nice meeting.. you." She winked, and curled up her tail and went home. "Y-you too.." He said, and walked back to his boat.

"Yes! Boris, I-i.. I did it! She is so sweet, and well.." He sighed, just thinking of her. "Tomorrow morning.. We are going to hang out!" Balto wagged his tail, and started to pant. "Ah, GREAT news, boltchick!" Boris smiled, happily. "I would better get my rest now. I don't want to miss out tomorrow!" Balto grinned, and Boris nodded. Balto went to sleep, and Boris cleaned the boat and also went to bed...

More to come soon! ... It's just late right now, and so.. I will type the rest another time, and so on.. And well, I know you must of fell asleep on this story. xD I almost did when I read it!


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 Post subject: Re: (Want to read a bad story?) Balto 0: Before Balto 1
PostPosted: Fri Jun 09, 2006 10:52 am 
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Wow this is nice! :D Keep it up! ;)

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A Fanfic prequel to Balto,I love it,keep up the great work. :lol:

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Hmm, I can't quite place it, but for some reason this looks familiar... *thinks back to my fanfic topic* :lol:

Anyway, great job, keep it up.


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