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 Post subject: Balto IV: Aleu's Return by Trixie
PostPosted: Tue May 30, 2006 4:02 am 
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Hey, this is a Fic I decided to write the other day. I did send it in ‘FanFics By Trixie’, but none of you seemed to bother visiting. So I decided to just make a new topic with the story’s actual name, and also thought that it would perhaps at least seize your attention. Anyway, this story is unfinished. It should be completed by the end of this month, but I think it may just be a little longer due to a bad PC. Just the other day I added loads onto it, and my computer crashed. The documents didn’t recover, and I also had homework that night...><
So anyhoo, the story is based on Aleu’s return from the islands, and is set exactly three years after WoC. A lone mutt, Dusty, seems to have small feelings for Aleu after meeting her in a disaster (to dogs Boris=food), and they become stronger when he gets to know her. Also, this story will also be based on:
Kodi
Dusty (Or as you’d like to call her, “Kodi’s Girlfriend”)
Aleu’s Pack
Jenna
A mysterious Wolf Pack (you will NEVER GUESS who leads it...><)
AND- I can’t give out too much information, because the story is UNFINISHED and you’ll just have to wait and see!^__^

BALTO IV: ALEU'S RETURN
It was around noon in the small township of Nome Alaska. A tan stray trotted along the icy streets; his odd green eyes straying now and then from a piece of meat hanging in the butchers window, to a pretty girl on the corner. He knew that since her owner stopped to look inside a shop window, that this was the time for some serious showing off. He grinned daringly as he leaped over a crate, landing with delicate grace that ended up being botched as he slipped on ice, going into a pile of snow. He lays upside down; tail hanging near his nose when a goose comes skidding past. He seemed to be mumbling Russian words to himself.

The tan dog blinked and rolled over, and furrowed his brows when the goose shouted to himself.

“Stupid ice! Stupid snow! Bah, sometimes I think if I flew south it would be worth it! OY!”

The dog grins, and the word food is written on his lips. He growled and leaped at the bird, only succeeding in crashing next to him; again on his back. The goose noticed the dog and yelped, trying to run off of the ice.

“Ack! Balto! Jenna! ANYONE!”
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Snowflakes dappled the cappuccino-tinted fur that coated the slender yet well built husky mix, Aleu, as she treaded along the land in search of her father. She had only arrived with her pack not long ago, and she thought now was a good time to greet her father, after a long few years.
Small yet alert ears flew forth in an upright perk as the familiar shrieking of a goose fell upon them. Shaking her head, she chuckled to herself as she trotted on over towards the source of the birds cry. She stopped to shake the snow free from her coat, which was not all lighter than her father’s own.

Aleu smiled warmly when she saw her father in the distance, with a small group of huskies. Boris, the goose in distress, suddenly came skidding past.

“Ey Boris.” Aleu said as she grinned slyly, hitting the goose’s beak gently and playfully with a beige coloured forepaw.

“Why you little...” a male voice came from where Boris had. The tan mutt came skidding past; obviously after the goose, but came to a sharp stop, almost colliding with Aleu. His eyes widened on the girl before he backed away cautiously. He knew that now everyone sees him as the new ‘outcast’. Although he was once welcome, when Steele returned he was swiftly ejected. He dad never gotten over that grudge, either...

Boris hid behind Aleu.

“Aleu! Thank GOODNESS you’re here! Save me from this WILD ANIMAL!”

The male stood up and looked at Aleu, then back at Boris.

“Back off feather face! I’m no wild animal! And lady, this fight aint with you...”

Aleu glared.

“Hey...leave the goose alone! He’s with me.” She said, as she looked back in her father’s direction. The male’s eyes followed, and once his eyes came to Balto, he bared his fangs. He and Balto used to be good companions, but once Steele turned up in the picture that thought was cast out.

“Agh...today was weird enough...now dogs are becoming allies with their food?” he said.

Aleu growled.

“That’s my uncle Boris you’re trying to devour y’know!” she said, as she exposed her elongated wolf-like fangs.

The male raised an eyebrow.

“Eh...lady, you need help...”

He scoffed and turned on Aleu, only to become nose-to-nose with a grey-furred dog. Aleu promptly recognized him and smiled affectionately.

“Hey daddy.”

Balto, the grey dog, growled at the tan stray, who lowered his ears.

“Dusty...” Balto let out; his eyes coming to slits.

The tan dog snarled and made his way around Balto, and trotted off.

Balto turned back to Aleu; a loving smile upon his face. Aleu smiled back, and walked closer to her father to nuzzle him. She buried her snout in his supple grey fur, and hauled her head up to look upon his face. Balto nuzzled his daughter back.

“Aleu...I-I’ve missed you so much...I’m so glad to see you...”
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Anyway, that's all I have to show for now. Keep checking back every two to three days for more!^__^
~LUV TWIXIE!

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PostPosted: Tue May 30, 2006 9:35 am 
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hhhmmm..very intesting. I was thinking of making a comic strip of steele meeting Balto's daughter..good story though! :D


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Aye good story this far. Keep it coming for sure I'm willing to see what happens in this one! Turns out to be good for sure!

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