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PostPosted: Mon May 29, 2006 2:08 pm 
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This story was side kick from Lone Wolf Fanwriters story "Honor". Well I turned it out a bit realistic...but not so mainly on these guys it tells...evil never wins...


Either death or Honour

Short warning: War Story from German side of the WW2 horrible happenings. Location: Europe France. Normandy.
Tip: All talking is Translated from German to English straight well not all

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”They call us monsters, devils, murderers…but why? They call US monsters…but they never call themselves…I know why they never call themselves…I’m lone dog. Well my owner is Officer.
He is nice and handsome man. He is always carrying pistol he call P-38. He dislikes the other model called Luger.
We’ve been living in town on France. I thought it was holiday. It wasn’t it was nightmare…”-Main Character. Renoa.

Time: 6:00 am 5.5 1944

Silence. Deep silence on streets of large city nothing was broking it
but then deep roaming of bombers.B-17 American ones.
Their white beautiful stars shines in their wings while they approach the city.
Air signal comes out starting first from low moving to high. Humans start to run on streets in panic running on their basements and on bunkers build for bombing attacks.
Somewhere German 88mm Anti-Aircraft batteries opened fire sending their grenades attempting to stop closing attacker.

Luftwaffen was sent as well. Bf-109 fighters approached their targets only 6 were sent against massive bombers and their escort. Fear ran through each pilot while they approached attempting to surprise their prey. Each plane launched their attack.
Young green horns on Electric working towers inside B-17 woke up in roaming and turned their two heavy machineguns towards approaching attackers opening fire. One B-17 reacted too late. Bf-109s bullets sunk on its hull and on wings causing fuel leak. Engine was set on fire and B-17 was wavering inside the bombing group where it soon separated. Still bombers approached their targets.
Messerschmitt fighters set off new assault. This time USA and British fighters attacked against those 6 desperate attackers. Soon one Bf-109 faced its end in skies. P-47 made its way on its tail. Machineguns spoke.
Pilot yelled in pain when heavy bullets went through weak armour plates and hit on his body. Blood spilled out from large bullet holes when doomed Bf-109 with yellow marks started to approach the earth last time.
Rest of the fighters saw their leader’s death and flew out.
AA fire tried to stop B-17s approaching formation.
Some of the grenades caused small damage on the planes.
Hatched opened in B-17 bombers when they were close their targets.

Civil population inside their basements prayed god to help them as massive formation was soon atop of the city.
Bomb hatches full open and target was locks in bombs were released in each plane.
Each plane dropped its deadly cargo over 8000 tons of bombs.
Silence was on streets. Suddenly first bomb hit on ground. Large massive explosions ripped the ground and houses into pieces when bombs started to dig ground.
Fosfot flew on air and landed on ground burning everything and anything that appeared to be near them.
Hot fosfor started to leak down on stairs on Basement door of one house.
Small family inside the basement was lying inside the basement. Some children were cuddled close their mother. Some were playing showing that they were brave.
Suddenly hot fosfor leaked through the door and set on fire. Everyone inside the basement started to scream in panic when smoke started to fill the room. Some tried to stop fire to spread. Fosfor burned everyone who accidentally touched on it.
It was useless to do anything when fosfor filled the room killing everyone inside there. Children, Mans, ladies…everyone burned into small black mummy on fosfor.

Deadly gas started to spread in air from burning and from fire and filled bunkers. Humans inside there died in it.

Bombs ripped badly whole city into pieces. Ambulances and Military Police and Military were sent to help those who have survived from the bombing.
Even dogs were used. One German shepherd was sniffing out trying to find someone. He found out nothing but fire and bad scent of flesh. He sighed when he was left on there when his master went to dig ground. He saw his master calling him. Dog smiled and then ran after his master who was wearing beautiful clothes. Even in his hand was red cloth where was white mark and middle of that white mark was black swastika in angle of 90° he didn’t mind from it. He knew his master wasn’t that bad like the others called Waffen SS soldiers.
”Is everything alright Herr Oberst*?” came voice of young Grenadier. Grenadier was young everyone can tell that from his face. He saluted normal way unlike some others that raise their hands straight. (Oberst is Colonel in German Ranks)
German shepherd padded slowly next to his master and sat down leaning on his leg. Oberst smiled and patted his pet’s head and sighed.
”No Grenadier…I’m sorry but we’ve get once again hand full on here” Oberst explained and scratched his forehead and cleaned it a bit with white cloth piece cleaning sweat off.
Dog smiled a bit but it was hard to see. City was burning from most parts and was damaged badly from the bombing. Oberst wasn’t happy from this.
”***** it we need to get stronger Air defence and Luftwaffen to protect our cities!” Oberst shouted Grenadier nodded his head and stretched his basic Kar98 rifle that was hanging on his shoulder lazily on leash.
Oberst looked in distance and then small restaurant tag that was half hanging on wall burning.

After a while Oberst left with his dog that was resting near his owner who was scratching behind his ear. Kübelwagen jumped on sand road but kept moving on there. Oberst sighed and patted his dog’s head. Dog’s name is Renoa nice name that comes from Rein and the Oberst’s child’s name as mixed version.
Oberst smiled to his dog and then looked driver who was quite tiered.
”Hard night Herr Müller?” Oberst asked in smile.
Driver sneezed a bit and then nodded his head not saying a thing. One B-17 bombers wreck was lying on field farer. Oberst looked towards it seeing the smoke rising from it. He let out sigh.
”Poor troopers…poor civilians…USA bombed empty city…there was no military activity…” Oberst said in sigh and cleaned his nose from dirt and then patted Renoa’s head.
”I’ve had wife and family” Driver suddenly said under his lips.
”What happened?” Oberst asked in kind smile seeing that Driver obviously didn’t want to talk about it.
”USA bombed my house…they died in there…my 16 year old second son ran into bomb cover…he melted there because of fosfor” Driver explained and sighed deeply as he turned the car towards main road and drove towards large mansion.
Oberst nodded his head. Renoa barked and wagged his tail. He heard something suddenly from rear. Airplane was coming fast from clouds. British Hurricane was approached from behind. Driver looked on mirror and then cursed trying to turn car out from the road. Hurricane’s machineguns opened fire drumming the road and hitting few hits on the car. Car ran out from the road and fell in ditch.
Driver crushed his neck and Oberst crushed his face on driver’s seat. Both died instantly.
Renoa sighed and shook his head. His eyes went wide from the view of the driver. He looked his owner and expected him to be only unconscious. He started to lick softly his owners face but he did not wake. He tugged softly his ear but still nothing. Renoa backed in the car back seat and looked Oberst and gasped.
”D-dead?” he asked from himself panting now badly. He looked the window and leaped suddenly through it and hit on ground. He felt sharp pain in small wounds he got from that blast. He ignored the pain and walked out from the ditch leaving car on there. Still tear ran down on his cheek as he padded alone in lone street. City’s burning smell was still around and city was burning still.

One truck drove pass Renoa who sat down watching after it. Truck was heading towards city for sure. He was sure from the future he was having. Mine stepper or something more Food? Yeah he thought that he might end up as meal on some restaurant that ran out of food.
Renoa suddenly heard when half track drove pass him and stopped. One man who was on the MG42 looked him with deep blue eyes. He climbed out from the half track and walked up to Renoa who backed up at once.
”Hey doggy its ok…I wont hurt you…come here tshe tshe” soldier called softly showing no threat.
Renoa wavered a bit but then walked slowly up to the soldier tail low with his head and ears backwards. Soldier patted him when Renoa walked up to him.

”You like that dummkopf hunde?” officer from the half track asked. He was smoking cigarette and then spit something out and showed that he have to come in again.
Soldier grabbed slowly from Renoa’s legs and took him on his hands and carried him on the half track placing him on the deck. On the deck were few other soldiers and some ammo boxes.
Each of the soldiers wanted pat Renoa and they were allowed to…

Renoa was drove away towards the front line in coast of Normandy towards of new jobs. Thought he was staying there for few weeks before anything might happen…

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Nice that some enjoyed :P more coming for sure...

Totally I can say this as raw match between USA and German

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Few weeks has passed since Renoa lost his master. Now he was only simple guard dog for storage room and for the area. USA has bombed all the area more effective way than earlier. Everyone is saying that soon is happening something big but nobody never known when it will happen.
It is now dawn. Whole area was foggy and view on the ocean was bad.
Location is somewhere in Normandy beaches. Renoa let out sigh and lay down watching large sand bag bunker that Wermacht build few weeks ago. Inside the bunker was one MG42 heavy Machinegun and room for 7 soldiers.
Renoa smiled a bit when he got his breakfast: Bread, some food that nobody ate and some water.
He didn’t complain at all from the food he got. He got everything what others didn’t want to eat and sometimes some extra from those that felt happiness when Renoa was around.

On night somewhere near June 6 whole sky started to roam suddenly from something. Renoa woke up near the barracks where others were sleeping. Renoa raised his head and looked towards sky. From small hole in cloud he saw moon and airplanes crossing it. He thought that it was bomb flight like always but he was totally wrong this time.

All around France Land AA-Fire started at once. Whole sky was now full of steel. Airplanes wavered from the shock blasts by the AA fire.
One Plane got hit and exploded in sky at once. Some German soldiers cheered from it because they did not recognize the planes and they didn’t know that now the ‘Big’ thing was started.
Whole sky was full of steel still and suddenly it was full of Paratroopers that jumped out from the planes. Some planes were dragged after the heavy Cargo planes and they were released and they flew slowly towards ground where they landed.
Firing of hand guns and machineguns started. Renoa saw when Half-tracks drove towards those lands and then alarm came out. Soldiers went into lines and then started to head towards the Paratroopers by running and on trucks. Puma Armoured Car drove as well after the line.

”Go go go Schnell! Don’t give time to USA and British forces! No mercy!” one fanatic officer shouted as he shut Panzer IV Long piped version’s hatch and drove with the line away from the Base.
Beach guarding was now low but still effective against attackers if someone will attack.
Time was ticking slowly.

Renoa stretched his body looking towards sky that was full of light and small black clouds caused by AA fire. He smiled weakly when everything disappeared in clouds.
It was thought better for German because Paratroopers can not stick together so they will spread all around the area. Every large explosion was easy to hear everyone said that one plane was shot down.
Renoa sighed and looked the trench and then the beach that was full of AT Barriers and barber wire protecting beach. He looked sand bag bunkers there was only 2 of them not more or less. Some small sand bag walls and large wooden one was able to find. Beach defence wasn’t that good like on Uncle Red beach or in other places.

The time was close.

Suddenly someone poked Renoa’s head. Renoa raised his head and looked soldier who leashed him up and then patted him to follow starting to walk towards Truck that was waiting them. Truck was full of soldiers and there were other K-9 dogs already.
Renoa jumped on the stage and waited the man who leashed him to come in. Man sat down middle of soldiers inside the truck and commanded Renoa to sit in front of him. Renoa did like was commanded and then saw when truck thrust itself into move.
Truck slowly disappeared from the base smiling that he got into action. This was first time for Renoa to be in field searching USA paratroopers. Good time to revenge his master’s death to them to Unknown Soldier who doesn’t know the pain in Renoa’s heart. Soldier who has family and parents crying in their homes for their son’s and husband’s safety in field.
Truck drove and jumped a bit when came some small ditches. Large searchlights started to paint skies locating returning C-47 airplanes. Luftwaffen’s weak attack wave attacked but got chased away by escort. Still they came back. Messerschmitt 110 night fighters attacked heavily against C-47s damaging most and still flying away waiting second chance to attack by surprise.
Renoa sighed and suddenly MP40 opened fire on brushes. Soldiers all disembarked from the truck and jumped away from road into brushes. Renoa did same and lay down close to his new master who has him on leash.
”Feuer frei!” one soldier shouted and raised MP40 and fired into brushes. Someone yelled in there and dogs were unleashed. Renoa ran towards the brushes.
He growled as he ran and suddenly saw some movement in brush. He leaped and hit on First Class Sergeant who was holding M1 Carbine on his hand. Renoa impacted on man’s chest and they both hit on ground Renoa atop of the man.
Man yelled in wide panic eyes wide trying to get his gun barrel to aim Renoa who tried to bite man on the throat. It was fight where one of them will die.
Man grabbed from close-combat knife and slashed close Renoa’s face who yipped in panic as he avoided the slash. Soldier raised his M1 from ground but suddenly something warm splashed out from soldier’s chest and there was small hole that was smoking only a little. Soldier looked his chest a bit then sky blood leaking out from his mouth as he dropped on ground like rock bag.
Renoa sighed in relief, he thought that his time came but it didn’t. MP40 and Kar98 rifles kept firing in brushes. Some Kar43 rifles fired in brushes as well with the other guns. MG34 fired there as well.

”Los Los Los!” shout of the man and looked Renoa who started to sniff ground trying to find scent. Suddenly Thompson opened fire farer and Renoa’s master yelled in pain and dropped on ground and rolled there a while.
Renoa gasped and leaned on ground seeing man running there. He suddenly ran after him. Man with Thompson wasn’t in panic. He heard Renoa’s running and turned around and saw flash when Renoa leaped on his throat. Renoa’s fangs sunk on Master Sergeant’s throat and he tasted blood that leaked out from the holes. He felt then impact when Soldier hit on ground. Renoa couldn’t control himself. He killed American Master Sergeant ranked soldier at once by ripping the throat open badly.
Renoa couldn’t believe what he has done. He looked down on the unmoving body of the soldier. He slowly shook his head. All that was controlling him was anger towards USA and British forces because of their bombing nothing else. Renoa sat down near the dead body and felt sigh escaping from his throat. Firing ended nearby and soldiers ran back on their truck. Someone called Renoa who thought should he go or not. He watched the truck from brush and then picked Thompson on his mouth and ran towards the truck. He jumped on the stage. His master’s seat was empty like he knew it already.
One soldier picked Thompson rifle out from Renoa’s mouth and then patted his head and wiped some blood out from his muzzle. Then he just tapped seat next to him asking Renoa to come on there. Renoa let out smile and sat down on the place soldier showed to him and then he lay down on there placing his head on soldier’s lap. Soldier smiled weakly and patted Renoa’s head.
Truck started to drive the base again. The reason why so many left was that one large gilder landed. They said that every of those soldiers were shot. Renoa thought that they were right because there seemed to be nothing wrong anymore.

Suddenly truck stopped and soldiers disembarked again from the truck. Shouts of commands came out and every soldier placed line in front of the officer who shouted again his face all red.
”All soldiers keep searching! We never can be sure! Those American soldiers are keeping us idiots! Check the area one more time!” Officer shouted and then growling curses he walked inside Küblewagen that drove away leaving soldiers stand there.
Silence was few seconds before non-commission officers started to shout commands.
All K-9 dogs were picked out in hunt Even Renoa was picked with them.

Dog team ran into brushes with their escorting human group. Their target was simple. Search and destroy at once.
Whole night was almost that pain search and destroys enemy paratroopers. That made more damage than Resistance groups.
Renoa was exhausted and covered with blood when he arrived back in the beach base. More than half of the group was KIA. He ignored most of that and lay down in corner of the trench near beach and sighed sadly.

He had no idea that the battle was only a start…




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Morning came fast. Renoa woke up in kick of guard soldier who did it for fun.
“You lazy mutt! Get up!”
Soldier shouted and then kept walking. Nevertheless it was silence in ocean. Renoa got up and looked after the guard who disappeared behind corner of one sandbag bunker. Renoa snorted and then got up and stretched himself leaning on wall of the trench. He took quick look on beach that was still full of anti-tank barricades and barber wire to block infantry.
Renoa walked up to barracks behind lines not so far from the beach. He looked radio house and radio tent that was located behind the wood bunker. He looked Radio house that was damaged from early air attacks. One man was leaning on the door of the radio house and he was cleaning his Kar98 rifle with cloth piece.
Renoa saw piece of bread and small can full of Pease-pudding.
Renoa’s stomach growled when he sniffed the tasty pudding. He wanted some of it but knew that begging was dangerous sometimes. He walked up to Chief who was giving the food to soldiers. Renoa sat down next to the chief who tasted some of the pudding and then looked the dog who sat down on there. He smiled with pity smile and gave helmet in front of Renoa and dropped some Pease-pudding on there.
Renoa barked for thanks and started to eat gladly. He tasted the food that was kind of watery but enjoyed from it still.
He didn’t get full from the watery pudding so he started to search some bread. Soldiers were sitting on their places inside bomb bunkers and laying in their own beds and in seats that has placed around the base. One was leaning on trench wall and chewing bread piece thinking something. Renoa stopped to look soldier. He felt drool leaking from his mouth when he saw the bread piece. Renoa noticed drool and wiped the drool off from his face and then sat down watching the soldier who mainly was in deep thoughts.
Soldier’s face was young and he seem to belong to HJ*. (Hitler-Jugend)
Renoa let soldier on there and passed him walking on his own place near the trench.
Suddenly alarm sound barked and activity started on the base. Soldiers grabbed from their guns and ran into their places. Machineguns were loaded and armed ready for use and AA guns were raised to point in skies. 8.8 Cm Flak gun raised its long pipe towards sky and one man was standing near it ready to feed grenades inside it when his team mates will launch it.

Nothing basically happened for start. It was silence. PAK* guns were pulled into their places ready for use. Gun barrels pointed towards beach. (Panzerabwehrkanone)
Some roaming came out from farer when something was approaching the beach. No one didn’t know what was going to happen.
Suddenly farer came out large whistling sound. One Grenadier* looked towards sky. His mouth dropped when he saw sticks that have flame behind them. (Grenadier=Private in German ranks)
”Achtung-!” he started before the USA launched missiles hit on the ground. Whole line turned out into inferno when fire and ground flew in air when missiles dug ground killing everyone.
Renoa felt when hot blew went over him. He survived without a scratch that was miracle. Some soldiers died in the field on that bombing Second sandbag bunker were in flames and out of order.
One soldier who was trying to get into reality looked on the beach seeing landing craft boats approaching the beach. His eyes went wide.
”Achtung! Die Americans!” he yelled and soon machineguns were in their placements once again. Mortars opened fire farer with Artillery. It was hard to see anything because of the smoke and fog that was covering the area. Landing craft boat stopped on the beach. It couldn’t get too close to the beach because of barricades.
Its hatch opened revealing young American soldiers. MG42 opened fire at once with two others. Boat soldiers couldn’t get far from the boat. Few jumped out from the sides but they didn’t make out from the water.
Machineguns were seeding death middle of the boats. Second craft landed and soldiers ran out from there. German defence fired with everything towards approaching USA soldiers. Still more came from the ocean like from nothing.
US soldiers ran taking cover from the barricades. They were approaching the hill where German troops were firing.
Two Ju87 Stuka bombers fired middle of the US lines when they came out from clouds; they attacked towards more crafts from farer. One craft exploded farer giving the feeling of war to coming soldiers.
”Himmel!” one soldier shouted when heavy Ship canon fired near him. He flew in air and dropped on ground 10meters farer.

Renoa gasped of the noise of machineguns. Screaming and yelling came out from the beach that was soon covered by bodies. Suddenly last sand bag bunker exploded into pieces when ship fired on it. Some howling came out from sky when burning stuka was flew over the station and exploded in forest. “Schiess!” one soldier shouted and fired with Kar98 on US lines that approached the beach.
Wooden bunker was standing still but soon it was destroyed by ship fire. Mortars did their best while they fired middle of US troops. Machineguns pipes were burning hot but soldiers urinated on them when water ended. They were doing their best trying to keep US forces out from their station.
”Arch!” came yell when soldier got hit on chest. Still more firing came out but it was lacking badly when ships fired. More landing craft boats landed and let US soldiers on beach into death.
Renoa gasped seeing when soldier who kicked him earlier dropped down next to him dead.
Soldier’s eyes were blue and he was having hole on his forehead.
Renoa took look on the beach. He saw US soldiers opening fire towards German stations.
”Himmel!” soldiers gasped when they duck down because of US firing.
Renoa finally took off towards radio house that was burning fire place.
He leaped under table and lay down on there because he was in panic. Suddenly he saw US soldiers climbing up from other places shooting German soldiers from side.
”Achtung-“was shouting of officer before it quiet down because of US infantry that ran around killing German defence. One soldier cursed and grabbed MG34 on his hand and duck down firing on his hip cursing. US soldiers fell on ground and some took cover from grenade ditches.
Man with MG34 didn’t last for long when Colt 0.45 pistol shot him.
Officer who shot him laughed but he got soon hit on his chest caused by Sharpshooter who was lying far from stations in brush. He smirked and fired again and prey yelled his gun flying over him when he dropped on ground.
Still somewhere machinegun was sending death towards US soldiers. Renoa gasped hearing what was happening around him. He saw when Staff Sergeant ducked down near him and fired towards machinegun with his M1 Carbine. He started to reload when Officer who was pretending to be dead suddenly raised his P-38 pistol and shot in staff sergeant’s head.
Thompson’s fast full automatic fire killed officer who tried to shoot another soldier.
Renoa blocked his ears shivering in fear during the battle. German forces withdraw away from the beach.

Suddenly someone grabbed from Renoa’s neck and pulled him out under the table. He was thrown In sand wall. Renoa shivered in fear when he saw US Officer smirking and pointing him with Colt pistol. Renoa let out whine and was in submissive position.
Officer looked him a while and then bent down to pet him. Renoa shivered in fear but didn’t bite him when he patted his head.
”OK lads let’s get after those Nazi pigs and finish this war shall we?” officer asked with smile and soldiers laughed when they left Renoa to lay on there. He kind of sighed in relief when he got up and sat down tail still between his legs.
He didn’t know what to do now.
After couple of hours US placed stations in that old German beach defence. Renoa was still sitting in same place. Some soldiers have teased him by sending small rocks on him and sand. Suddenly Renoa felt someone grabbing from his collar. He yipped in surprise when he was forced to follow the soldier who was pulling him. He was placed in front of US supply station and placed to sit on there. Renoa looked the fat officer who walked inside the supply place and threw small bone to Renoa and then patted his head when he started to count some stuff in his head while he looked some papers.
Renoa gladly started to chew the bone not knowing will he become new pet for someone or just guard dog for US supplies. He didn’t know which side was better because both were evil from own sides. He sighed and lay down chewing the bone eyeing in distance. He saw that it was dawn now.
”US are devils…same are German…and Russia…there is no good side in this war…nevertheless someone says that they are…they aren’t…I know it…they know it…” Renoa said quietly to himself. He missed company and knew that no one from the US Guard dogs didn’t want to talk to him. He sighed sadly but gladly that his war was over…

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Nice job! I love the point of view.
A little shaky on the translation, but a very good job over all! Congrats!
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For the translation for me I could understood a bit.

After all I made last ones with hurry because of hobby wanted me to go there Laughing tried to do my best with lag during the writing...Microsoft Word lags totally for me when writes big stories...

Thanks still from the point of view. Thought of continuing Renoa's small adventure in World War II to be honest in that war...there was no heroes or good side...

To add, it was quick small inspiration anyway :p

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Excellent job on this so far, cant wait to read the rest of it

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