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 Post subject: Nero-Balto's Half Brother
PostPosted: Wed May 10, 2006 9:06 pm 
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Summary: This is a fanfiction about my character...Nero. His dad is a McKenzie River Husky, and his mom is a German Shepherd. Oh, and when you read Nero's thoughts and feelings, I'm describing his thoughts, not him. So no, he's not brimming with vocabulary.

Gem, Avalanche (who is Storm in Cotton Grass's art. Not REALLY my character, changed relative position and name), Jethro, and of course, Nero, are my characters. DO NOT steel them....or else. :evil: :twisted:
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Her warm fur embraced me, making me feel warm and safe. I knew when her warm, welcoming fur wrapped around me, nothing could touch me. I knew I was safe when I smelled the heavenly aroma of hay in her fur. I suckled, feeling warm, sweet milk trickle down my throat, until a gentle paw pushed on my forehead.

"Alright, now. That's enough for tonight," mother said. Her voice was like an angelic chorus.

"But mama! I'm not done yet!" I said to her.

"You can finish in the morning, it's time to sleep now," mama said.

Then mama stared out the barn door, looking at our neighbor's pasture.

"I keep smelling things over there that I never smell on this farm....my curiosity can't take it! I have to explore!" mama said, seemingly excited.

She got up, the warm, safe feel abandoning me. She walked in her graceful gate toward the barn entrance, but before she could leave, daddy said "Gem, the humans won't be able to know you're not a wolf in the dark! German Shepherds like you look exactly like wolves...except a different color!"

"Don't you worry. The humans are asleep, and so is Jethro," mama said, sounding very reasonable.

"Jethro is a border collie. His job is to keep anything suspicious out of the pasture, and he won't recognize you in the dark," daddy said.

"Jethro will know my scent. I promise to come back," mama said.

She licked daddy, and then walked over to me. Her warm, pink tongue massaged my cheek.

She walked out the barn entrance. I scampered over to the entrance to watch her, daddy joining me.

I only saw her shadow, and it made her seem less graceful because I could only see paws coming up and down.

Mama wiggled through the pasture fence and into the field. I saw her mouth moving, appearently talking to a calf, but I couldn't make out what she was saying.

Suddenly, I saw the figure of a border collie, and it was barking, running toward mama. The figure was chasing mama.

Then I saw a human figure standing with a long stick.

Mama was about to jump the fence, but then I heard a BOOM, and a yelp coming from mama. Her shadow fell to where I couldn't see it.


"GEM!!!" daddy screamed.


The border collie figure sniffed the area where mama fell, and then, he threw back his head and howled a sorrowful howl.

The human figure walked up to the border collie figure, and bent down. He said something, and I managed to hear him. He said "Jethro, I've made the biggest mistake ever. I murdered the sweetest dog to appear on the face of the earth."

He picked up mama's figure, and carried her toward the barn.

Her head and legs were dangling down, and her legs swayed slightly every time the human took a step.

He came in the barn and lay mama down. In front of me.

I looked at her. Her eyes had panic in them, and blood stained the back of her neck and ran down the side and into the hay. I knew she was dead.

"Nero, I'm so sorry! If..if I knew it was her I wouldn't-," Jethro was cut off by me.


"You don't have to explain, I know you didn't mean it," I said to Jethro.

I buried my face into her fur. She wasn't warm now, she was cold. And her fur wasn't as welcoming. It was stiff.

Tears stung my eyes and streamed down my face.

"You promised you'd come back," I whispered.

I cried myself to sleep that night, and when I woke up, mama wasn't there anymore.

I spun my head around. Daddy was gone, too. I later relized he was outside with our humans, Jethro, and his human. They were all staring into a large hole and I heard them crying.

I rushed outside to see what they were staring at, and in the hole, mother was in it. I did my share of bawling, too.

Then, our man human picked up a shovel, stabbed it in the dirt, and buried her.





To be continued........

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PostPosted: Thu May 11, 2006 7:18 am 
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I'm planning the next part.

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Awesome start :thumright:

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I like it :thumright: i can hardly wait for the next part! :!:


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Well, here's part 2
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1 WEEK LATER
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Daddy and I were laying in the hay, looking out the barn door. We were having our daily moment of silence. It was so quiet, you could hear a flea jumping. It was rather peaceful you might say, too. The birds were singing, the wind was blowing through the trees and across the pasture.

"Nero," Daddy said.

I jumped at the sudden break of silence.

"Yes, Daddy?" I replied.

"You need a mother. A pup won't live a full life without a mother. I know it sounds like I'm betraying Gem, but I'm really not," Daddy said.

"But Daddy, where are we gonna find a mama?" I asked him.

"Well, when I was a pup, a had this wolf friend. I don't think she'd mind us staying with her pack," Daddy answered, as if he was waiting for me to ask that question.

He lifted himself up, some hay clinging onto his fur.

"Follow me," Daddy told me.

I didn't really want to go to the forest, but Daddy always knew what he was talking about, so I followed him.

While we were walking toward the forest, I looked back at mama's grave. I felt like I was betraying her for someone else. While I was looking back, Jethro was bounding toward us.

(I have to go to school now. I'll be back afterwards.)

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Well, I guess nobody cares about the second part. I'll just stop the fanfic there.

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I do. It's really good, please don't stop it. :(

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please continue! its really good!! :cry:


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Um... alright, I'll continue! Right now!
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Jethro stopped right in front of me. Panting, he asked "What are you two doing?"

"I'm getting a new Mama in the forest," I answered him.

"What!? But the only animals that would accept you are wolves, and you know how viscious they get over their territory," said Jethro.

"When I was a pup, a had a wolf friend. I don't think she'll mind if we hang around for a while," Daddy said to Jethro.

"Well, good luck!" Jethro said, with doubt in his voice.

Daddy and I walked into the forest. There were smells I'd never smelled before, smells I couldn't identify. They scared me a little, making me feel unwelcomed. Even the trees scared me. They towered over us, making the forest shadowy, and I felt like they would fall on me and crush me at any moment.

I thought talking might cheer me up, so I asked Daddy "Why did Mama have to leave us?"

"Oh, you may not be able to see her, but she's with you. Why, she's in Heaven looking down at us right now," Daddy replied.

"Really?" I asked, amazed.

"Yes, Nero," Daddy said, smiling at me.

I looked up at the sky, and the sun shined through the clouds, giving a heavenly light. But then, I realized, it was Mama's smile! She always had the brightest, warmest smile, she could light up the whole world! Yes, it had to be her! She was looking down on me from Heaven, like Daddy said so!

I saw a cave perched on a cliff. It was so tall, I bet if you could stand on top, you could see the whole forest!

"Daddy, is that where my new mama is?" I asked, curious.

"It sure is," Daddy said.

Before I knew it, we were climbing the cliff. I thought it would take forever to climb, but it was a quicker climb than I thought, and the path was grassy, gentle to my paws.

When we got to the top, there was this huge, flat rock that seemed to be the patio of the cave. Daddy poked his head in the cave, and said "Hey, Aniu! It's me, Avalanche!"

I saw a white paw emerge in the light, and then the rest of the body. The wolf was so beautiful! Her fur was white as snow, and it glowed in the sunshine. Aniu, her name, fit her. It was Eskimo for snow, or at least that's what Daddy told me.

"Avalanche? Long time no see! What brings you here today?" Aniu asked. Her voice was warm and welcoming.

"Well, my mate, Gem, was shot a week ago, mistaken for a wolf. And my son, Nero, needs a mother. I'm not betraying my mate, but....well, the point is, I wanted to ask you if we could live here? Daddy seemed nervous when he said that.

"Why, yes! I don't see why not!" Aniu said.

Daddy poked me with his elbow and whispered "Don't be rude, say something!"

I gulped and said "Um...hi."

I noticed her belly was bulging. Daddy must've noticed, too, because he said "You're bulging, Aniu. Are you expecting pups?"

"Yes, I am," Aniu replied, in a proud voice.

"My mates are Kitok and Fluke. My pups with Fluke have already been born. They're sleeping right now," Aniu said, explaining about her mates.

"Hmm..Nero could use some siblings...that are part of me," Daddy muttered. I didn't know what he meant by that.

"Please, come in!" said Aniu.

We followed her into the cave.


To be continued....

NOTE: You can find adult Nero in my art gallery.

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I truthfull, can't wait to hear what happens next! I'm glad that you're getting out of the habit of rushing a little! I hope you write more soon!!


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I still haven't gotten the next part right.

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I'll start planning more, once I get Pample's permission to use one of her characters to say something.

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