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 Post subject: FanFic 22 from Rotramel the Writer!
PostPosted: Sun May 07, 2006 8:40 pm 
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Hello all!
Here it is!
Finally, after all your waiting, through a horrible cliffhanger,
(I'm sorry :twisted: ) the second part to “Balto: All Good Things…” is finished.
I give you Balto: …Must Come to an End.
I’d like to take a moment here to thank my roommate, Corporal Saedifar. He “allowed” me to stay up VERY late last night to finish this story so that I could post it for you today. (I appolagize for any grammar mistakes, I decided I left you off so badly last time that I'd post it today, rather than correct it tonight. The story will be on the site soon, but I'm going to proof-read it before then.)
So, thank you Corporal.
Now, here it is, Balto: …Must Come to an End!
Please enjoy and as always, I appreciate your input!


P.S. I've heard of a rumor that some people thought that the title of the two stories together (Balto: All Good Things Must Come to an End) means that this may be my last Fanfic... I am VERY pleased to tell you this is NOT the case. I will NEVER stop writing Balto stories. The title instead points to the end of Aleu's tenure as Alpha of the Talbourne Clan.

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"In the conclusion of “Balto: All Good Things…” Blaize still struggles to understand the new dog Astarre, whom he’s fallen in love with, Tycha struggles to deal with Tim’s recent infidelity, Balto and Jenna may be forever separated and Shade finally gets what he has wanted for so long as Aleu’s tenure as Alpha of the Talbourne Clan comes to an end. It is a story of struggle, of emotional limits, new friends, old enemies, new journeys, the end of old friends and the eternal battle against good and evil."


Balto: …Must Come
to an End

A sequel to: Balto: All Good Things…

Pages: 147 Words: 22,750
Started: 04/16/06
Finished: 05/07/06
Written By: Anthony E. Rotramel






Note: This story was inspired by Balto, (© 1995), Balto II: Wolf Quest (© 2000) and Balto III: Wings of Change (© 2005) by Universal Pictures and Amblin Entertainment. The characters Shadow, Dash, Melody, Timbre, June, Drake, Gemeni, Everest, Trina, James, Stripe, Tycha, Tim, Astarre, Asta, Sheik, Lima, Thunder, Saeidifar, Sam, Asta, Saba, Everest, Rife, Sunny, Tram, Junior, Jill, Lighting and the events of this story are © 2005 by Anthony Rotramel. The other characters are © Universal Pictures and Amblin Entertainment. The name Saba is the intellectual property of Juuchan 17.


© 2006 All Rights Reserved.






Prologue:
(Previously in Balto: All Good Things…)

Saba had learned a lot in the last few days.
Aniu was indeed, very real, and though Saba hadn’t believed in her, had taken the young husky under her wing, teaching Saba how to fight, and how to defend herself; how to make decisions, and how to lead. For what purpose, Saba did not know.
Aniu walked into the chamber where Saba was practicing. “How are you doing my child?” Aniu asked.
Saba smiled. “Fine.” She said.
A great sadness seemed to come over Aniu’s face. “Come over here for a minute child, I need to talk to you.”
Saba nodded and walked over to the white wolf. “What is it Aniu? Is something wrong?”
Aniu sighed. “The time for which you came is approaching, and you need to know what you will do.”
“What do you mean?” Saba asked. ‘I mean… I can’t help can I? I’m dead… right?”
Aniu nodded. “…for now.”
“For now!” Saba cried. “What does that mean?!”
Aniu sighed. “My child, Shade has escaped once again and I am afraid that my son has done more harm now than ever before.”
“You want me to fight him?” Saba asked.
“Something like that, yes.” Aniu said. “However, this time he’s not a wolf.”
“What?” Saba asked. “What is he?”
Aniu sighed again. “My child, do you remember when I said I could assume any form I chose?”
Saba nodded.
“Shade is human… for now. How long he will be able to maintain that form is unknown to me, but he took the body of a very influential human, and is going to use it to bring great trouble upon the Talbourne Clan… this and…”
Aniu sighed.
“What?” Saba asked.
“Aleu will not be leader of the Talbourne for much longer. Her time is short.”
“Well then let’s stop him!” Saba said.
“Not yet.” Aniu said. “You are not yet ready for such a confrontation… but soon, yes, you will face him. It was destined for you to come home to me as you did, and it is destined for you to return and save the clan.”
Saba nodded. “Teach me.”
Aniu smiled. “My child you must master the things I have already taught you in order to move on to the others.” Aniu stood. “I see you are making great progress, keep practicing and soon I will teach you more.”
Saba nodded and Aniu walked out of the chamber.

Night had fallen on the forest, high in the mountains, near Nome, Alaska.
Aleu stood on the rock ledge outside her chambers, high above the ground.
She sighed as she thought of the many wolves who had been killed in this new attack by the humans.
They carried weapons of a type Aleu had never seen before… never even heard of.
…but that wasn’t the only thing that had drawn Aleu out tonight; she felt as if something were dreadfully wrong, but she couldn’t think of what.
She’d come out here to think.
A voice from behind startled her.
“Aleu?”
She turned. “Shadow.” She said, as he stepped up to her.
“Aleu, what are you doing?” Shadow asked.
“I just needed to think.” Aleu said.
“Well get down from there.” Shadow said. “A human could pick you off like a young deer up there.”
Aleu smiled. “…always worried about me.” She thought.
“Aleu, I’m serious.” Shadow said.
She nodded. “I’ll be in soon. I promise. Just… just give me a few more minutes… okay?”
Shadow nodded reluctantly. “Alright, but just a few minutes; then you’ve got to come inside, where it’s safe.”
Aleu nodded. “I will.”
Shadow turned and walked away from Aleu, back into the cave.
Aleu turned back to the ledge, and walked to the edge of it. She looked up at the twinkling stars and the many colored light that whipped through the air like a serpent.
“Oh Aniu,” Aleu thought. “How will we ever get out of this one? These humans are too well armed. You said that the key was to train Saba… but she died… I fear… I fear all is lost.”

A single man made his way through the woods, trying his best to be quiet.
“Things are so much easier as a wolf.” The man thought. He looked down at the Springfield Sniper Rifle he held in his arms and reconsidered. “Humans do have their advantages though…”
The soldiers he commanded were making short work of the wolves of the Talbourne Clan.
The man climbed up on a large rock and pulled the small bipod legs on his rifle out, creating a stable position.
He aimed high and centered his scope on a gray wolf standing on a rock ledge more than six hundred yards away and maybe fifty feet higher than his position.
The man skillfully adjusted his scope for the conditions and centered the crosshairs on the wolf’s chest.
“Good-bye Aleu.” The man thought. “Finally, I will win. I’ve fought you for so long Aleu, so long… but it ends tonight, tonight you die.”
Then the man pulled the trigger.


























Chapter 1:

Aleu was still standing on the ledge outside the cave. She was thinking; thinking about friends lost, lives sacrificed… for what?
During her time as Alpha of the Talbourne many wolves had given their lives so that she could live on, continuing to lead and guide the Talbourne.
There were so many of them that Aleu had lost count.
Who was she that others should die that she might live? This question had plagued Aleu ever since Alai had given his life to save hers, and had continued to this day. With every wolf that died in this way the question grew stronger.
Was she some kind of royalty, that her life was worth more than those that gave it so willingly? She was the daughter of Balto and Jenna, two normal dogs, nothing special, nothing that warranted their actions… yet without their sacrifice, Aleu would most undoubtedly be long gone, killed long ago, probably before even making it back to Alaska.
Was this what she wanted?
Had her life taken that course, Aleu would’ve never known Shadow, would’ve never had children of her own, Sheik, Lima and Thunder… she would’ve never known what it was to be loved… to love.
Aleu supposed that she should be grateful for what they had given her, but… at the same time she felt guilty. Those many wolves had families of their own… what of them? What of their mates… their children? Could Aleu possibly ignore all of this?
Aleu sighed and looked toward the stars. “What does it all mean Aniu?” Aleu asked.
Aleu lowered her gaze and looked down the valley, at the river that curved through the land.
The air was suddenly filled with a harsh crack, and Aleu stumbled backward and fell.
She found it hard to breathe.
“What happened?” Aleu thought.
She tried to stand, but her paws slid out from under her and she fell to the ground.
Aleu became aware of an intense burning feeling in her chest, as if it were on fire.
She looked down and saw a puddle of blood beginning to form under her. It was pumping from a round hole in the right side of her chest in sudden pulses.
Aleu sighed and tried to stand again… but failed.
The pain had grown worse now, and was still steadily increasing.
Aleu drew herself into a ball on the shelf and lay there, the pool of blood spreading to envelop her head.
Aleu felt light-headed and realized with a frightening intensity what was happening.
“I’m dying.” Aleu thought. “So this is what it’s like… this is how it ends… how all those wolves felt…”
The pain had increased to a point that Aleu’s thoughts became jumbled with its intensity.
Aleu was grateful a few minutes later, when the world turned black and she felt herself drift away.

Shadow opened his eyes with a start as the crash filled the air.
He recognized the sound and sighed. “Probably one of the sentries.” He thought. “Wonder who we’ll have to deliver bad news to tonight?
“Aleu?” Shadow said.
No one answered him.
Shadow’s heart quickened.
The last place he’d seen her had been on the ledge, when he’d spoken to her almost an hour before.
“I was sure she’d follow me in.” Shadow thought. “She said she wanted a few more minutes.”
Shadow decided that maybe she was just asleep, and stood up, looking beside him, but Aleu’s familiar form was absent.
Somehow Shadow knew what had happened, how he didn’t know, but he knew.
He stood and ran out onto the ledge, calling her name. “Aleu! Aleu answer me!”
He stopped as he saw the ledge… and at the end, Aleu, crumpled in a ball in the middle of a spreading puddle of bright red blood.
“ALEU!” Shadow yelled.
He ran to her side.
Aleu didn’t respond, didn’t move at all.
“Aleu you can’t give up on me!” Shadow yelled.
He bit the scruff of her neck and began to drag her backward, towards the safety of the cave.
A second crack sounded, and Shadow fell. His shoulder felt like ice, and it hurt!
He looked at it, but he already knew…
The human had claimed a second victim.
Shadow had seen many hurt wolves, and had seen many of them die. He knew intuitively that the wound was deep, and serious. Blood already covered his shoulder and left leg, and he could feel blood dripping down his right leg.
The bullet had punched straight through him.
Shadow tried not to think about what the consequences of that would probably be, but instead willed himself to stand and resume dragging Aleu toward the cave.
Finally, after what seemed like a lifetime, Shadow made it into the cave and collapsed beside Aleu.
She still didn’t move.
With much effort, Shadow picked his head out of the rapidly spreading pool of blood both their wounds had caused, and looked at Aleu.
Her eyes were closed, and she didn’t move.
A tear came to Shadow’s eye and he smiled, licking her face for what would probably be the last time.
“At least we’re together.” Shadow said.
Then his strength gave out and Shadow’s head fell to the floor.
Neither of the wolves moved.
Long live the Talbourne Clan.



















Chapter 2:

Tim didn’t return home until early the next morning. He snuck quietly up the ramp that led to the top deck of the old trawler.
Tycha was there waiting for him.
“Hey Tycha…” Tim said.
Tycha just looked at him, hurt evident in her eyes. “Tim… I have a question for you, and I want you to tell me truthfully.”
Tim nodded. “What is it Tycha?”
She sighed, and a tear came to her eye. “Tim… do you love me?”
Tim sighed, and remained silent.
With every passing second of silence, Tycha got more and more upset, finally breaking out into tears.
“Don’t worry Tim,” she said. “Your silence has answered everything I could have ever asked.”
Tim sighed again. He’d never meant to hurt Tycha. He still cared for her, but as more of a friend now, a best friend none the less.
Tycha was clearly upset now. She walked a short distance away from Tim and turned her back to him. Tears streamed down her face. Tim had never seen her this upset before. He felt bad.
“I didn’t want to hurt her.” Tim thought.
He sighed and walked over to her. “Tycha…”
She spun around, cutting him off. “Just leave Tim!” She said. “Don’t do this, just go! Go back to your little girlfriend in town! She stopped yelling and sighed. “I don’t… I don’t care anymore…”
Tim sighed. “Tycha please…”
Tycha gritted her teeth and hit him with her paw, knocking him backward.
Tim stumbled back in shock. His face hurt.
Tycha growled at him, as he raised his paw to his face and then looked at it., as if unable to believe what Tycha had done.
She had never hit him before.
Tycha started crying again and turned away once more.
Tim felt even worse now. He walked back over to her. “Tycha please…”
Tycha spun around, and without warning, hit him three times, pushing him back to the edge of the deck. Tycha scowled at him, and hit Tim one more time, knocking him over the deck railing.
He crashed to the snow below, about a twenty foot fall.
Tim felt the air whoosh out of his lungs as he struck the ground, and it took him a few minutes to stand up.
He looked up to the deck where Tycha still stood.
“Go on Tim! Don’t you ever come back! I never want to see you again!” She yelled.
Tim hung his head, but realized it was probably in the best interests of his personal safety to listen to her.
Tim turned and began to slowly walk away.
As Tycha watched him go, a great sadness and almost depression came over her. She hadn’t wanted to hurt Tim, but he’d hurt her deeper than anyone could possibly have done with the sharpest knife.
“I’ll get you Trina…” Tycha thought. “You’ve taken away the thing I love most, so I’ll do the same to you… after all, I have nothing to lose now.”
Tycha hopped down from the railing and went to prepare herself.

Dash was a little concerned as he walked up the shelves of rock that led to Aleu’s chambers that morning.
Aleu and Shadow usually showed up at the relief of the sentries from the night before, but today, neither of them were there.
“They probably overslept.” Dash thought. “Yeah… that’s it… overslept…”
Even as he tried to convince himself that were alright, he was remembering the sound from the night before.
He’d woken from a horrible dream, but was unable to remember what it been about, just that he’d wanted to scream, and had when he woke up. Soon after he thought he’d heard a shot.
It was muffled, outside the cave, but he’d thought that was what it was. Soon after, it was followed by another.
Two shots.
Dash had gotten up and went to check on the sentries, but they were all alright. They too said they’d heard them.
Dash had thought about reporting it to Aleu, but it was late, and as everyone seemed to be okay, he decided to tell her in the morning.
Now though, as he climbed the last shelf, he couldn’t help but think that Aleu might already know about the shots in the night…
Dash stopped at the entrance to her chambers and called his sister’s name. “Aleu?”
There was no response.
“Aleu!” Dash called.
Still nothing, then, a scream; it sounded like Luna.
Dash ran into the chambers and froze, shocked beyond any response at what he saw.
Aleu and Shadow lay in the middle of the floor, exactly where they’d fallen. A wide red pool of blood spread from underneath them.
In front of her parents sat a very shocked young wolf.
Dash hurried over and turned Luna’s eyes away from the sight of her parents.
“This is something a child should never have to see.” Dash thought.
He looked down at Luna.
She was shaking.
“Luna, are you alright?” Dash asked.
Luna nodded.
“Listen to me.” Dash continued. “Go get your brothers, keep them from coming in here, alright?”
Luna nodded again and turned, running into the next chamber.
Dash looked back at Aleu and Shadow and sighed. “What are we going to do without you Aleu?” He thought.
Then Dash leapt back, surprised.
“Impossible…” he said under his breath.
…but as he watched it happened again.
Aleu and Shadow breathed.
They were alive.

“That’s suicide!” Timbre yelled.
“We’ve got to do something!” Dash said. “You got any better ideas?”
“Taking her back to Nome would be the same thing as just killing her here.” Timbre responded. “Why take her all that way if that’s all you want to do?”
Dash sighed. “Timbre look… In all my years living there I never saw one thing that would lead me to believe that Doc would kill her… or Shadow.”
“All your years?” Timbre asked. “You mean in your year, right? You were a year old when you came here.”
Dash sighed and nodded.
“That’s not long to know someone.” Timbre said.
“Look,” Dash yelled. “If we don’t do something both of them are going to die!”
He stopped and sighed. “Now I’m taking her, that’s not arguable, the question is… are you going to help me.”
Timbre sighed. “Yeah, I guess at least they’ll have a chance.”
Dash looked down at the two and sighed. “Whatever we’re going to do we’ve got to hurry… they don’t have much time…

Balto was walking down the street later that morning. He was a little worried about Jenna. She seemed to be taking Everest’s death really hard.
Balto hated losing his son as well, but he understood that, as hard as it was, Everest had broken the law, and he’d known the possible consequences that could result from him returning.
If he was angry at anyone, blamed anyone for Everest’s death it wasn’t Drake, it was Everest himself. His son had made the decision to return, and in so doing had brought all this heartache on his family.
As Balto was thinking this, he saw a familiar shape flit from behind a group of trashcans in the alley.
“Was that who I thought it was?” Balto thought, turning to walk toward the alley. “Surely not… it’s dangerous for him to be here. Why would he come back home?”
Balto stepped into the alley. “Hello?”
He heard a trashcan tip over, as someone darted out from behind it.
Balto ran into the adjacent shed.
“Hello?” He asked again, walking slowly into the shed.
Balto saw a dark shape in the corner.
“Is someone there?” He asked.
“Dad?” the shape said.
“Dash? What are you doing here?” Balto asked.
Dash’s familiar form stepped out of the shadows. “We had to come here.”
“Why?” Balto asked.
“Aleu got hurt.” Timbre said, stepping from behind an oil drum behind Balto.
“Yeah and Shadow too.” Dash added. He sighed. “It was real bad dad.”
“Well are they alright?” Balto asked. “What happened to them?”
“They were shot.” Timbre said.
“We don’t know how it happened.” Dash added. “I just went up to talk to her, and they were both in the center of their chambers in a pool of blood. I thought they were dead ‘till I saw them breathing.”
Balto sighed. “So you brought them here? They’re wolves. The humans will kill them.”
Dash sighed. “It’s a chance we had to take… they’d’ve died without Doc’s help.”
“How are they now?” Balto asked.
Dash sighed. “Stable, last time I checked. Neither of them has woken up yet. Of course, we’re going to have to get them both out of there as soon as we can, otherwise someone other than Doc might get wind of the situation, and then we might get him in trouble. He saved both their lives, so I wouldn’t want to do that.”
“No,” Balto said. “Doc’s a pretty good guy, for a human anyway.”
Dash nodded.
“Well as soon as you get some word you let me know.” Balto said. “Timbre I suggest you stay hidden. People will recognize you as a wolf. Dash… I don’t know, you’ve gotten a little rougher looking living with them, but you could probably pass as one of the strays from the outskirts. You should be okay to move around town. I’ll let Drake know you’re here.”
Dash nodded. “Thanks dad.”
Balto smiled. “Sure thing son, just remember, any word at all, let me know.”
Dash nodded again. “I will.”
“It’s good to see you son,” Balto said. “I’d like to stay and talk, but I’m supposed to be meeting your mother.”
Dash nodded. “Alright, good-bye dad.”
Balto smiled. “Bye son.”
Balto then walked out of the shed, as both the wolves melted back into the shadows.
















Chapter 3:

Aleu opened her eyes.
The world was kind of fuzzy for a moment, then it sharpened, and she became aware of a painful burning in her chest.
She blinked a few times, as bright light flooded into the room.
Aleu looked around, and noticed Shadow in a cage across the room. She then noticed that she too was in some kind of plastic box.
“What happened to me?” Aleu thought. “Where am I?”
The last thing Aleu remembered was being on the ledge and then hearing the loud bang…
“That was a gun-shot.” Aleu thought. “I must’ve gotten shot… but how did Shadow get hurt?”
She thought for a moment.
“He must have come after me.” Aleu thought. “He must have gotten hurt trying to save me.”
Aleu looked around, but didn’t see anyone else in the room… dog or human.
“Shadow.” She said quietly. “Shadow?”
He didn’t move.
“Oh no…” Aleu thought. “What if he didn’t make it?”
She looked around again, but still saw nothing.
“Shadow please answer me!” Aleu cried.
Shadow groaned and rolled over.
“He’s alive!” Aleu said to herself. “You’re alive!” She yelled.
Shadow groaned again, and tried to stand, but hit his head on the top of the plastic box.
“Aleu?” He said.
Aleu smiled and nodded. “Yeah, it’s me… I’m so glad you’re alright!”
“Aleu, you’re alive!” Shadow yelled.
Aleu smiled and nodded again.
“I thought I’d lost you!” Shadow said. He looked around. “Where are we?”
Aleu shook her head. “I don’t know.”
“Well… how did we get here?” Shadow asked.
“I don’t know that either.” Aleu said.
“We should try to leave.” Shadow said. “Can you make it?”
Aleu nodded. “Yeah.”
Aleu looked around and walked to the front of the box. She stuck her paw through the wire door and tried to release the catch, but to no avail… it was locked.
Aleu tried to push the door open, but that didn’t work either.
She struck the door in frustration.
The plastic box rocked a little, then settled back on the shelf.
She looked around. “Shadow, hang on just a minute, I’ve got an idea.”
Aleu backed up a few steps, to the back of the plastic box, and ran at the door.
She hit it with her shoulder, and the box tipped forward. Her weight was enough to do the rest, and the box tumbled off the shelf, exploding on the ground below.
Aleu climbed out from under the broken plastic and ran over to the opposite shelf, then she jumped up to the level that Shadow’s box was on.
Now free of the confines of her own cage, Aleu quickly dismantled the makeshift lock with her sharp teeth, and the door to Shadow’s cage swung open.
She smiled at him, as he stepped out of the plastic cage. “Where would you be without me?”
Shadow chuckled. “There’s no telling Aleu, no telling.”
“Come on.” Aleu said. “Let’s get out of here.”
Shadow stopped. “Aleu, are you alright?”
Aleu winced. “My chest hurts a bit, but other than that I’m fine.”
“You’re covered in a white bandage.” Shadow said. “Are you sure?”
Aleu looked down, noticing for the first time the white cloth that was wrapped around her.
“I must’ve been hurt pretty bad.” Aleu said.
“I thought I’d lost you.” Shadow said. “There was so much blood…”
Aleu cut him off. “Shadow… they’ll be time for this later. We’ve got to get out of here, wherever here is.”
Shadow nodded. “I’ll follow you.”
Aleu smiled. “As always.”

Dash was running back to the shed where Timbre and he had taken refuge. He’d decided to go check on Aleu and Shadow, but when he’d arrived there, he found a gathering of people.
At first he was scared, thinking that they had been discovered, but it wasn’t that at all…
…Aleu and Shadow had escaped.
Obviously they were doing pretty good to get away, and Dash figured they’d probably headed back home.
He had to let Timbre know. The sooner the two wolves could get out of Nome the better.
Dash looked around to make sure that no one was following him, and then ducked into the shed. “Timbre?”
The brown wolf stepped out of the shadows. “Dash, what’s the news? Anything good?”
Dash smiled. “I’ll say. They escaped.”
“What?” Timbre asked.
“I overheard Doc talking to some of the other humans. Apparently they made quite a mess on their exit.”
Timbre smiled. “So they’re alright?”
Dash nodded. “Sounds like it to me.”
“They’ll probably head home.” Timbre said. “We should get back there.”
Dash nodded. “You go on ahead… I need to talk to someone.”
“Who’s that?” Timbre asked.
Dash sighed. “I need to tell my father about… about Saba.”
Timbre sighed and nodded.
“You get on out of here though.” Dash said. “It’s too dangerous for you to remain here.”
Timbre nodded. “Yeah, I don’t blend in as well as you do. I’ll head back; be careful.”
Dash smiled and nodded. “…of course.”
Timbre stood and walked quickly out of the shed.
Dash waited until he was alone, then he hung his head and sighed. He didn’t want to have to relay the news of Saba’s death to his father, but… Saba was his daughter… he deserved to know.
Dash shook his head and walked out of the shed.

Dash was walking down the sidewalk in Nome, when he saw his father across the street. He looked to insure that no cars were coming, remembering what it had been like to live in town, and ran across the street.
“Dad!”
Balto stopped and turned. “Dash?”
Dash smiled. “Yeah, it’s me.”
“Have you heard anything more about Aleu?” Balto asked.
“Yeah, as a matter of fact I did.” Dash said. “They’re gone.”
“What?” Balto said, taking a step forward. “What do you mean gone?”
Dash smiled. “I mean they woke up, realized that they weren’t home, and decided to leave.”
“Where did they go?” Balto asked.
Dash shrugged. “Don’t know, home I assume.”
“Well… will Aleu be alright?” Balto asked. “I mean… you did say she was injured…”
“She’ll be fine dad.” Dash said, a smile coming to his face. “You know Aleu.”
“I guess so.” Balto said. “…but sometimes I wish she wasn’t so stubborn. I’m afraid it’s going to get her in a lot of trouble some day.”
Dash sighed, and his smile faded.
“Something wrong Dash?” Balto asked.
Dash sighed again. “Dad… I… I don’t know how to tell you this, but… dad, Saba… Saba’s dead.”
“What?” Balto asked, taking a step back. “How… how do you know?”
“She and Everest came to live with us after they were banished. They’re part of the clan.”
“Wait a minute.” Balto said. “You said she and Everest… right?”
Dash nodded.
“…but that’s impossible.” Balto continued. “Everest was killed here in Nome, for returning for his children with Saba.”
“What?” Dash asked. “I don’t know where you heard that, but Everest is back at the cave with his children.”
“Everest is alive!” Balto said.
Dash smiled and nodded. “Yeah.”
“…but Saba’s dead.” Balto said.
Dash sighed. “Yeah… it happened while Shadow was training her… an ice bridge broke and… and she fell.”
Balto felt a tear come to his eye, a tear both of joy… and sadness.
He’d found his son was alive… but lost his daughter.
“At least Drake didn’t have anything to do with your sister’s death.” Balto said. “I’ve got to go tell your mother. She was taking Everest’s supposed death really hard.”
Dash nodded. “Alright dad. I’d better get going too; got to see how Aleu is doing.”
Balto nodded and smiled at him. “You make me proud Dash. Take care of yourself.”
Dash smiled back at his father. “You too dad.”
Then Dash turned and ran off towards the forest that bordered Nome.
Balto watched him for a few seconds, then turned and headed toward Jenna’s.

























Chapter 4:

Jenna was trying very hard to persuade herself to go home… but wasn’t quite able to do it.
She’d been watching Drake’s son Jason for the past few days, and she knew that soon, the young dog would come running around the bend, right through the outskirts.
“No one will ever know it was me.” Jenna thought.
The outskirts was a dangerous place for a young dog such as Jason.
On some level of her mind Jenna knew what she was planning was wrong… but there had been a dark presence in her mind that seemed to cloud out all else recently.
“That’s right.” The voice said in her head, it’s deep dark tone filling her mind. “I’m here to give you confidence and courage when you can’t find it on your own. Now, do this, and I promise I will leave you alone, do this, and I will leave you…”
Jenna started to shake.
Could she really do this? It wasn’t in her nature to be violent, but… certain times called for certain, severe measures.
Jenna could hear him running now, it would be a matter of seconds before he rounded the bend.
The sound of the approaching dog got louder, until finally, Jenna saw him run around the curve and slow to a trot. “Hey Jenna!” He said.
Jenna smiled. “Hi Jason… would you… um… come here for a moment?”
“Sure.” Jason said.
He walked over to Jenna. “So what do you want?”
Jenna hit him, fast so that he wouldn’t dodge the unexpected attack. Though she knew little of fighting, certain events in her life had made it a necessity to at least know the basics.
Her paw connected with the side of Jason’s head and he fell to the snow.
Jenna looked at him. “He’s still breathing.” She thought.
Jenna looked around, and, satisfied that no one had seen her, drug Jason into a nearby shed.
Jenna didn’t notice a very shocked looking golden Samoyed that turned, running back towards Nome.

Balto was puzzled.
Jenna wasn’t at her house.
“She must be out with Rosie.” Balto thought. “Yeah, that’s it…”
Balto couldn’t explain why, but he felt very uneasy all of a sudden, as if he should feel in danger, or something awful was going to happen.
Once he’d found that Jenna wasn’t home, he’d decided to go tell Drake that he was not responsible for Everest’s alleged death.
“Probably help calm the poor guy’s thoughts.” Balto thought.
Drake was taking Everest’s alleged death fairly hard as well. Drake had been a friend of Balto and Jenna’s for a long time, and had developed a close bond with their children. They’d even taken to calling him uncle Drake.
Balto trotted up the steps to the old mill, where Drake lived, and scratched on the door.
Soon a brown colored dog peaked his head out of the doorway.
“Hey there Balto.” Drake said. “Good to see ya, wasn’t plannin’ on you dropping by.”
Balto smiled. “How are you doing Drake.”
Drake sighed. “Well… I’ve been better I guess… I mean… I really do feel sorry… about Everest I mean… I didn’t make the decision for him to come into town, he did…”
Balto cut his friend off. “About that, I have some wonderful news.”
“What’s that?” Drake asked.
“You aren’t responsible for Everest’s death. I just ran into Dash, he said that Everest and Saba are living with Aleu’s pack.”
“What?!” Drake asked, taking a step forward. “You mean… you mean he’s alive!”
Balto smiled. “Yeah.”
“That’s… that’s great!” Drake said. “I… I feel a load off my shoulders.”
“Well I’m glad Drake.” Balto said. “You’ve been a good friend to me.”
Drake was about to reply, but stopped, as a golden colored dog leapt up the steps to the old mill, sliding to a stop beside him. “Drake come quick!” Gemeni said. “You have to come with me, now!”
“What’s wrong Gemeni?” Drake asked. He noticed she’d been crying.
“It’s horrible.” Gemeni said. “I wouldn’t believe it had I not seen it with my own eyes.” “What happened?” Balto asked.
“Well, I was going after Jason, you know how he likes to run in the morning, and well… I’ve told him a thousand times not to run through the outskirts, but he did anyway… Jenna was there… she hit him.”
“What?!” Drake and Balto said simultaneously.
Gemeni nodded. “It’s true, I saw her hit him and then drag him into a shed that was nearby… what are we going to do?”
Drake looked at Balto.
“What are you looking at me for?” Balto asked. “I didn’t know about this.”
Drake sighed. “Where is she?”
“Follow me.” Gemeni said. “I’ll lead us there.”
Gemeni and Drake started running.
“Wait up guys!” Balto yelled. “I’m coming too!”

Jenna looked down at the unmoving form on the ground in front of her.
What she had done nearly made her sick.
Blood oozed out of several small holes in the young dog’s neck.
Jenna shivered. She could still taste it in her mouth.
Jason groaned and rolled over, his eyes fluttering open.
Jenna had been unable to kill him, though she had tried, though the dark voice in her head had screamed at her, had cursed her, she couldn’t bring herself to do it.
It wasn’t in her to murder another in cold blood like this.
Jason woke up enough to realize he was hurt, and screamed.
Jenna stepped back, tears flooding her eyes as she heard this sound, this sound that she had caused.
Pain.
Suffering.
Agony.
Jason ran backwards away from her, still screaming, until he hit the wall at the side of the building, collapsing to the ground.
Just then, the door to the shed swung open.
Light flooded the darkened room, and there stood…
“Balto.” Jenna said.
“Jen?” Balto asked, stepping into the shed.
Jason recognized his parents and ran to them.
“Mommy!” He yelled. “Mommy! Daddy! Help me!”
He slid to a stop beside his mother and collapsed into tears.
Gemeni nuzzled her son. She noticed the blood on his neck.
“Drake look.” She said.
Drake did, then turned back to Jenna, whom Balto had started to walk towards.
“Jenna?” Balto said again.
She was shrouded in darkness, and Balto could only make out her shape, nothing more.
Drake walked up and stepped in front of Balto, blocking his friend’s advance.
“Jenna, step into the light. Please… don’t make this any harder than it has to be.”
Jenna sighed, and hung her head. Then, she walked forward.
Jenna entered the light, and both Balto and Drake gasped.
Jenna’s cream colored muzzle was spattered red with blood… with James’ blood.
“Jenna.” Drake said. “With the power given me by the dogs of Nome I hereby place you under arrest. You are charged with Assault, Kidnapping and attempted murder.” Drake stopped and a tear rolled down his face. “…why Jenna?”
Balto was probably the most shocked of all. He just stood there, speechless, as Jenna walked by him, led by Drake.
“Why…” He thought.

























Chapter 5:

Tycha snuck through the streets of Nome.
She didn’t want to be noticed, if everything happened the way she hoped it would, she’d have to stay away from Nome for a while…
… a long while.
The more she thought of what Tim had done, the angrier she seemed to get. At first she’d been hurt, but now…
“I’ll show you.” Tycha thought. “I’ll show you I’m no one to mess with…”
Tycha quickly ducked into a shed as she heard someone coming down the alley.
She waited for a few minutes, as the two dogs walked through the alley and around the corner.
Tycha poked her head out of a hole in the shed wall and looked around.
Satisfied that she was once again alone, she exited the shed and continued down the street, walking toward a familiar green house…

Tycha shook with anger.
She’d expected to find Trina in the small home, but what she was surprised to see was Tim curled up next to the pretty golden husky, sleeping, a smile on his face.
“I told him to go back to her.” Tycha thought. “…but I didn’t really think that he would.”
Tycha realized now more than ever that Tim was lost to her… because of Trina.
This threw a bit of a wrench into her plans for Trina… she didn’t want to hurt Tim. As dumb as it may have sounded, she still loved him, though he no longer loved her.
Tycha raised her paw to her face, wiping away an errant tear.
She couldn’t start crying and make noise; then Trina was sure to find her.
She laid there on the wooden rafters, far above the floor.
Tycha would wait, as long as it took.
Tim couldn’t stay by Trina’s side forever…

The time Tycha had been waiting for happened a short time later.
Tim got up, licked Trina on the nose, and walked quietly out the doggy door at the front of the house.
Tycha watched all of this from her perch above the floor.
“Perfect.” Tycha thought. “Time for us to spend some quality time together Trina…”

Trina woke up and blinked her eyes several times.
She shook her head, stood up, and yawned. Then she smiled.
Tim had shared with her some wonderful news… for her at least.
It seemed that Tim’s mate, Tycha, had found out about she and Tim’s midnight rendezvous.
Trina smiled as she remembered how he’d been when they’d first met. That had been over three months ago. He’d seemed lost, and alone.
Then she hadn’t known about Tycha. It wasn’t in her nature to get between mates like that, but she’d only learned about Tycha after… well, after it was too late.
She really liked Tim, and he seemed to like her, so the two kept seeing each other. Night after night after glorious night.
Trina soon learned that Tim no longer loved Tycha. Why this was, Trina didn’t know, and even Tim himself couldn’t seem to figure out, but it was true.
She and Tim had become closer then, and Trina had told him to tell Tycha how he felt, so that the two of them could be together, but…
…Tim had been unable to.
He still felt an attachment to Tycha, and even if it wasn’t the love he’d once felt for her… Tim didn’t want to hurt Tycha in this way.
Trina had then decided that if this was the case, they should never see one another again, and for a time, the two remained separated, but…
…time had a way of bringing them back together, and soon they were back together.
Trina had tried to explain to Tim that Tycha would be more hurt by finding out the truth for herself, rather than being told, but Tim wouldn’t listen and refused to tell Tycha of their degrading relationship.
Tim and Trina had talked and played together… she really liked him, I mean really liked him. There wasn’t a dog like Tim to be found anywhere, at least, not for Trina.
She did feel sorry for poor Tycha though, and had considered even telling Tycha herself, indeed had made it all the way to the boat that Tim and Tycha called home, but…
…she’d left that night, unable to convey the news to Tycha. After all, how would it sound coming from her? Another female; the one that her mate was now interested in… in love with.
Trina stretched again.
“…but all that’s through now. I’ve got Tim, and I’m never letting go. I’m sorry Tycha, I really am, but… I guess you two weren’t meant for each other like we are.”
Trina heard a voice call her name from above. “Trina?”
She looked up.
“Thought that might get your attention.” Tycha said, dropping to the floor from her perch on the rafters.
“Tycha?” Trina said. “What… what a surprise… heh, heh… um… what are you doing here?”
Tycha glared at the golden dog.
“You’re why I’m here you tart!” She said. “You couldn’t keep your paws off of Tim could you?”
Trina smiled defensively and took a step back. “Uhh… it was… um… his… his idea… and uh…”
Trina suddenly grew angry. Who was this female, barging into her home like this in the middle of the night anyway?”
“… No!” She said, stepping forward. “No, you know what? I love Tim, and he loves me, just because he didn’t love you doesn’t make me a bad person!”
“What?” Tycha said, stepping forward, teeth bared. “You’re saying this is my fault?! Tim and I had a child together, raised him… I… I was the best mate I knew how to be, I… I tried… why did you have to mess up my life?!”
“What?” Trina asked. “Tim came looking for me, something wasn’t right at home miss! You obviously weren’t doing it for him!”
“That is enough!” Tycha said, her anger flaring. “I’ve had it with your talk!”
Tycha jumped at Trina and landed on the young dog, slamming her into the wall.
Trina blinked a few times. Her vision was already growing blurry.
Tycha hit her in the side of the head, and Trina tasted blood in her mouth.
Tycha leaned down next to the golden dog’s ear.
“Tonight you pay for what you’ve done!” Tycha said. “Oh yes, tonight you pay.”
Tycha hit Trina twice more, and the dog fell to the floor once more.
“Don’t worry sweetie.” Tycha said, a malevolent tone creeping into her voice. “It’ll all be over soon…”
Tycha viciously tore into the young dog’s shoulder.
Trina screamed.

Jenna sat in an abandoned shed near the old mill.
“What have I done?” She thought.
Jenna stood up and walked to the only window that the small, one room shed had.
“This all seems like a bad dream.” She thought. “...but if it’s a dream, why don’t I wake up?”
Jenna sighed and walked back to the corner of the shed, shrouded in darkness.
A few minutes later the door swung open, and a familiar looking dog stepped through it.
“Balto.” Jenna said, standing.
She walked over to him, but Balto stepped back.
A tear rolled out of Jenna’s eye.
“Balto… please don’t look at me like that.” She said.

Balto looked at her, a sadness showed in his eyes like she’d never seen before, and said one word.
“Why?”
Jenna sighed. “You’ll… you’ll think I’m crazy if I tell you.”
“Try me.” Balto said.
“Look Balto…”
“Should I tell him about the voice?” Jenna thought.
She sighed. “…Drake was responsible for the death of our son, our son! I was… was just trying to make him realize what we felt like.”
“Oh Jenna.” Balto said. “Drake wasn’t responsible for Everest’s death, in fact, he’s not dead at all. All you’ve done is get yourself in deep trouble.”
He paused and sighed. “Why didn’t you talk to me?”
“I wanted to Balto,” Jenna thought. “…but the voice… it threatened the kids… and you… if I didn’t follow through with it’s wishes… if I told you anything. I… I did it so you would be safe.”
“Really?” Jenna asked. “Everest is alive?”
Balto nodded. “He and the children are living with Aleu right now.”
“Then I have made a mistake.” Jenna said.
“I’ll say!” Balto yelled.
This sudden outburst startled Jenna, and she backed into the corner.

“I don’t know what Drake is going to do with you!” Balto continued. “He can have you killed! Do you realize that? Did you think about that? What that would do to me?”
Jenna sighed and shook her head. “No… I didn’t.”
“Well think about it now.” Balto said. “Think about it long and hard Jenna.”
Jenna sighed again, hung her head and closed her eyes.
Balto sighed. “Your trial is scheduled for two days from now. I suggest you find something better tell Drake than you told me by then, otherwise…”
He didn’t finish his sentence, just turned and walked out the door, leaving Jenna in the dark shed… alone.







Chapter 6:


Aleu and Shadow were walking through the woods near the Talbourne’s cave.
They’d almost made it home.
Both Aleu and Shadow were moving somewhat slower than usual, owing to the fact that both of them had been knocking on death’s door only yesterday.
Aleu hopped over a fallen tree, waiting for Shadow, who climbed over.
Shadow seemed to be hurt worse than Aleu. He was moving quite a bit slower than Aleu would have liked.
She wanted to get home.
A new group of humans had begun to attack the Talbourne, and their weapons rivaled anything Aleu had ever seen.
She especially feared for her children’s safety. If one of the humans had been able to pick off she and Shadow, the kids would be easy targets for him.
They were about twenty miles from home now, and Aleu wanted to run all the way, but Shadow couldn’t keep up with her, and Aleu herself was not sure she could even do it if he could.
“So,” Shadow said. “Who do you think is behind this new attack?”
Aleu shook her head. “It has to be Shade. He targeted the two of us specifically.”
“…but we were both shot.” Shadow retorted. “Shade couldn’t do that, could he?”
Aleu and Shadow began to climb the steep hill in front of them.
“Not as a wolf.” Aleu said, looking at him. “No.”
“So you think he’s a human?” Shadow asked.
Aleu sighed. “Most likely.”
The two of them stepped up on top of the hill and stopped for a moment to catch their breath.
“That’s not good.” Shadow said. “He’s hard enough to fight as a wolf.”
Aleu nodded.
Suddenly, a black blur shot out of the trees in front of the two.
“Look out!” An unfamiliar voice called.
Aleu was struck by the black blur and knocked to the ground.
A yelp escaped her as she landed on her stomach and rolled over backwards, the black thing on top of her. The two of them rolled off the edge of the hill, and toward the bottom.
Just as Shadow was about to lay into whatever had attacked Aleu, a sharp crack split the air, and the ground where Aleu had been standing exploded upward in a plume of snow.
Shadow leapt down the hill, following Aleu.
He ran to the bottom, where Aleu and a large black wolf, of a type Shadow had never seen before, lay.
Aleu rolled over and shook her head.
“Oww.” She said. “What was that? What happened?”
Shadow was short of breath from his sprint down the hill. “You almost got shot again.”
“What hit me?” She asked.
“He did.” Shadow said.
“Who?” Aleu asked.
Shadow tossed his head in the direction of the black wolf.
Aleu turned and stood up quickly. “My, he’s big!”
Shadow nodded. “I haven’t ever seen a wolf that big before. He must not be from around here.”
Aleu nodded. “I wonder where?”
“I don’t know.” Shadow said. “Why don’t you ask him?”
“What?” Aleu asked.
“He’s coming around.” Shadow said.
Aleu walked over and stood over the unconscious wolf.
He groaned and opened his eyes. He blinked a few times and looked around.
At first his vision was a little blurry, and it seemed as if there were three of Aleu to him, all rotating around each other. Soon though, the three images coalesced into one.
“Hello.” Aleu said.
The black wolf groaned again, and sat up.
“Thank you for saving me?” Aleu said. “What’s your name?”
“My name is Saeidifar.” The black wolf said.
“Well… where are you from?” Aleu asked. “…obviously not from around here.”
Saeidifar laughed. “No, not from around here. I used to live in Persia.”
“Persia?” Aleu asked. “Where’s that?”
“Suffice it to say that it’s a long ways from here.” Saeidifar said.
“Oh…” Aleu responded. “What brings you to Alaska, so far away from home?”
Saeidifar sighed. “My… my mate and only child were taken from me, trapped in the mountains by a group of humans… I’m trying to find them.”
“How did you get here?” Aleu asked.
“I snuck on board a ship that was coming here. I heard this is where they were taken.”
“That’s awful.” Aleu said.
Saeidifar nodded. “Yeah…” he said, sighing. “It… it is.”
Shadow stepped up next to Aleu. “Do you have anywhere to stay?” He asked.
“No.” Saeidifar said. “…but I’ll make do.”
“Nonsense.” Aleu said. “I’m the alpha of a Clan nearby, you can stay with us for a while.”
Saeidifar smiled. “Thank you for the offer, but I really must continue my search.”
“Oh come on.” Aleu said. “Stay one night at least, I owe you my life, it’s the least I can do to repay you.”
Saeidifar laughed. “Alright Aleu.” He said. “You talked me into it.”
Saeidifar yawned.
“I am a little tired.”
“Well just follow us.” Shadow said. “We’ll lead you to our cave.”
Saeidifar smiled. “Thanks, I really appreciate it.”
Aleu and Shadow began to walk back up the hill, Saeidifar close behind.

Blaize was walking down the street, headed once more for the house that Astarre lived in.
He felt as if he were walking on air.
“So this is what it feels like to be in love.” Blaize thought dreamily.
Blaize had finally found the dog that was for him, and her name was Astarre.
He’d been unable to stop thinking about the golden husky since he’d first laid eyes on her a few days ago.
Though they hadn’t known each other long, Blaize knew this was the dog that he wanted to spend the rest of his life with.
He thought that Astarre might feel the same way, but there was no way for him to know but ask, and he couldn’t even think about that right now. The very thought made him feel lightheaded.
“I’ll find out soon enough.” Blaize thought.
He stopped as he came near the door to the now familiar home that Astarre lived in.
He heard yelling coming from inside.
“Where do you think you’re going?!” a gruff voice said.
“I’m going for a walk.” Astarre responded.
“Is that boy going with you?” The other dog asked.
“Yes! Yes he is!” Astarre yelled. “Does it really matter?”
“Young lady if you talk to me like that again, I swear…”
Astarre cut off the dog.
“…that what!? You’ll hit me again!? No wonder mom left you!”
There was a long pause.
Blaize stepped up on the porch.
“That must be her father.” Blaize thought. “…but she said “again”, when has he…”
Blaize stopped as he remembered how many times Astarre had “hurt herself” in the last few days.
“Oh man!” Blaize thought. “She was trying to cover for him.”
Blaize felt his anger rise as he thought of Astarre being hurt, and it took more than a little willpower to keep him from marching inside and taking care of the problem.
Soon, the door creaked open, and Astarre stepped out onto the porch.
“Hey Astarre.” Blaize said.
Astarre looked up at him. Her eyes glistened with the tears that coursed down her cheeks.
“Did you hear that?” She asked quietly.
Blaize nodded.
Astarre sighed. “Please… don’t tell anyone.”
Blaize shook his head. “Astarre, what he is doing to you is wrong, we should tell Drake.” “No!” Astarre said. She stopped and looked back to the door, then back at Blaize. “Let’s talk about this someplace else.”
Blaize nodded. “Come on, in the alley.”
Astarre nodded and followed him down the steps.

“NO!” Astarre yelled. “We can’t do that!”
Blaize sighed. “Astarre, he’s obviously hurt you, why don’t you want to put an end to it?”
“…because.” Astarre said. “He’s my father… and the only family I have left.”
Blaize shook his head. “I don’t understand why you won’t let me help you.”
“You don’t have to.” Astarre said. “Thank you for trying to help me Blaize, but that’s not the way.”
Blaize shook his head again. “I still don’t understand… but it won’t matter if I tell Drake, you’re the only one who can say you’ve witnessed his behavior. It’ll take that to get him convicted.”
“Can we just forget this conversation?” Astarre asked.
Blaize nodded. “…for now.”
Astarre smiled.
Blaize looked at her for a moment.
Her beautiful face had already begun to swell where her father had struck her, but other than that she was the most beautiful creature Blaize had ever laid eyes on.
The thought of someone abusing her made Blaize shake with anger… but for now, for her, Blaize would stay quiet about it. If it got any worse however…
“You better stay out of my way...” Blaize thought. “Otherwise, there may not be enough of you left for Drake to sentence.”


Chapter 7:

Drake was currently standing outside the old shed that Jenna was being kept in.
This was going to be a very difficult decision.
By all accounts Jenna was guilty; there was no question about her innocence, or more accurately lack there of, however…
Drake sighed.
“How can I do this to Balto… to their kids… to Jenna?” He thought.
Just then, Balto stepped into view, interrupting Drake’s thoughts.
“Hey Balto.” Drake said.
“Hello Drake…” Balto responded.
Drake sighed. “We’re both in a bit of a pickle, eh?”
Balto sighed and nodded. “That’s actually what I’m here to talk about.”
“What’s on your mind Balto?” Drake asked.
“What are you thinking about all this?” Balto asked.
Drake sighed. “Well… we caught her in the act.” Drake said. “Had we not stepped in when we did…”
“Drake stop.” Balto said, knowing where Drake was headed with this line of comment. “Both you and I know Jenna would never do anything like that, especially to your son. You’re a friend of the family… I don’t understand it, but something’s not right here, and I intend to find out what it is.”
Drake sighed again. “I hope you do Balto, because Jenna has got a pretty strong case on her.”
Balto’s mouth fell open a bit in shock.
“You’re… you’re really planning on pushing this, aren’t you?”
Drake sighed. “I’m sorry Balto, but the law is the law and it doesn’t make exceptions for friends… or family.”
Balto sighed. “I know it doesn’t Drake, but…”
Drake looked at him. “…but what Balto?”
“…this is Jenna we’re talking about.” Balto said. “Do you honestly think she would’ve murdered James?”
Drake sighed. “I don’t know what to think Balto.”
Balto shook his head. “Well I do, and something isn’t right. I mean… Jenna’s never hurt anybody who’s not been threatening her life or the ones she loved… she’s not a murderer Drake.”
Drake sighed. “Balto, I would’ve believed you until yesterday, but now… I saw her Balto, she was going to kill James.”
Balto shook his head. “No Drake, I’m telling you she wouldn’t do it.”
“I have to go on what I saw.” Drake said.
Balto sighed. “Then I guess there’s no point in continuing this conversation.”
Drake stared at Balto for a minute before replying. “I guess not.”
Balto turned and walked away, leaving Drake to his thoughts.

Saba could feel it.
The time when she would be ready to return to the Talbourne was drawing near.
She found the amount of knowledge she had gained the past few days amazing. Saba’s entire world had turned inside out and it was just now starting to make sense. Everything that had happened to her was coming together to make one picture.
A now familiar female voice came from behind her. “My child, I would speak with you.”
Saba turned around, and the window to the physical world that she had been looking in collapsed, becoming nothing once more. “What is it Aniu?”
“Who were you watching?” Aniu asked.
Saba knew that Aniu already knew the answer to her question. As she knew most everything; the question was more Aniu’s way of making conversation.
“I was watching my mother.” Saba answered.
Aniu sighed. “Her position is precarious, and unfortunate. My son was able to get to her first, and in the weakness of her grief, Jenna listened to him. I can do little for her now, it is in the dog’s hands.”
“Drake?” Saba asked.
Aniu nodded. “Perhaps he will find it in his heart to forgive her.”
Saba nodded. “We can only hope.”
Aniu nodded too. “This, however, is not the thing I came to speak to you about.”
“What is it?” Saba asked.
Aniu sighed. “Aleu’s time as leader is drawing to a close. Soon, she will be no more. Someone must take her place.”
“Who?” Saba asked.
Aniu smiled. “You are, my child. This is why you have been trained. This is your purpose for being here.”
Saba chuckled. “Aniu, I have no idea how to lead a clan. Surely someone else more qualified could take her place.”
Aniu’s face remained passive. “Saba, there is no one else. It is your destiny and has been since you were born. With the knowledge of leadership, I will help you, you need not worry at all, only concentrate on your coming battle with Shade.”
Saba nodded. “May I ask you a question Aniu?”
“What is it my child?” Aniu responded.
“Why me?” She asked.
Aniu smiled. “The leader of the Talbourne has always been a descendant of myself. Melody does not possess the proper traits to be a leader, and Aleu’s children are still too small. They do not yet even grasp how things work in their world. These cannot be trusted with the safeguard of my clan. You can be.”
“How do you know this?” Saba asked. “What if I mess it up?”
Aniu smiled. “My child you will mess up. It is only natural, but you will not be alone, I will be there with you in a way.”
“In a way?” Saba asked.
“All things will become clear to you soon.” Aniu said. “For now you must simply trust me when I say that you will be able to carry out these duties.”
Saba nodded. “I do Aniu, I do.”
Aniu smiled. “I know.”



















Chapter 8:

Drake was awakened the next morning by a sound of frantic scratching on the door of the old mill.
He got up and walked to the door, pushing it open.
Drake blinked at the harsh morning light that streamed in the open door and yawned. “Hello?”
“Oh Drake you have to come with me!” A frantic gray dog said.
Drake shook his head, and looked at the dog for a moment. “Dusty?”
The gray dog nodded. “Hurry Drake, she might be dead already!”
This woke Drake up extremely fast. “What are you talking about Dusty?” He said. “Who might be dead?”
“Trina!” Dusty cried. “I’ve been going to see her every day for the past few weeks. Poor thing never gets out much. You know her owners keep her tied up all the time? Yep, right there on the porch, and all day! The only time she has to herself is at night…”
Drake could tell that Dusty was starting to ramble, probably shaken from whatever she’d seen.
“Dusty, can you tell me what happened to Trina? Is she alright?”
Dusty shook her head. “No, no… I think she’s… I think she’s dead.”
Drake sighed.
“Well, can you take me to her?”
Dusty nodded. “That I can do, follow me!”
Dusty took off, running as fast as she could.
Drake jumped off the porch, at the front of the old mill, and ran after her. “Dusty slow down.”
Dusty chose not to listen, and Drake tried his best to keep up with her.

Timbre crept through the woods.
He couldn’t explain why, but he felt very ill at ease. Every hair on his body seemed to be standing straight on end.
Dash was in a similarly alerted condition.
He looked over at his friend and Dash nodded.
They were close to home, whatever the danger was, they’d deal with it.
“Now if only I could figure out what that danger is…” Timbre thought.

A green uniformed man lowered his binoculars.
“That’s them.” An older man behind him said, standing. “Tell your troops to get ready.”
The young man nodded once, and hurried off to do as his commanding officer had ordered.
The man turned back around and raised his own binoculars, looking at the two wolves walking silently through the forest.
“You’ll never know what hit you.” The man thought. “Just like Aleu and her precious mate Shadow… you will die.”
In his mind, Shade laughed.

Timbre jumped back, and Dash crouched down, ready to fend off an attack, as a crack resounded through the forest.
“It’s okay.” A familiar voice said. “It’s just me.”
Dash and Timbre stood as Lightning and almost twenty wolves materialized out of the foliage.
“What are you doing out here?” Dash asked.
Lightning smiled. “Just thought we’d meet you here.”
“Why the army?” Timbre asked, indicating the other wolves.
Lightning sighed. “There was a sniper out last night, probably the same one who took out Aleu and Shadow. He shot two of the sentries, killed them. We’re just being careful.”
A moment of silence passed, as if in memory of those who had died.
“…speaking of Aleu, how are she and Shadow?”
“They’re alright.” Dash said. “…at least, we hope so. They both escaped Doc. We were hoping she’d come back here.”
“Probably will.” Lightning said. “It’s good to hear she’s alive though, just the thought of the Talbourne without her… I can’t imagine.”
“Yeah.” Dash said.
An understanding passed between the two wolves, and they continued, talking of the past few days events.

“That’s them alright sir.” A young man said as he centered his scope on the wolf in front.
Shade smiled inwardly. “The ability to reach out and strike my enemies from a distance almost makes up for being trapped in this pathetic body.”
He patted the young man on the shoulder and smiled.
“Fire.”

Dash, Timbre and Lightning were interrupted by a gunshot.
One of the wolves near Lightning dropped, and the rest dropped to the ground.
“Where’d it come from?” Dash asked.
“I don’t know.” Timbre said; he turned his head to Lightning. “…you?”
Lightning shook his head. “No.”
“It was somewhere in that direction.” Dash said, tossing his head to the front.
“Let’s make our way over there, maybe we can get him.” Lightning said.
Dash and Timbre nodded.
“If we get spotted, run at him, maybe we can scare him that way. I’ll go to the left, you can keep going to the front. I’ll catch him off guard.”
Timbre and Dash nodded.
“Everyone hear that?” Dash asked.
The wolves all nodded silently.
“Who got hit?” Timbre asked.
“It’s Hilar.” One of the wolves said. “He’s dead.”
Lightning sighed.
“That’s the last wolf this guy kills.” Timbre said.
Dash nodded. “Let’s go.”
The wolves began to move forward.

Over the sights of his gun, a young man saw the wolves start to move up.
“They’re coming right at us.” The man said.
Shade walked over and looked through his binoculars. “Let them close to one hundred yards.”
“Then what?” The young man asked.
Shade smiled. “Light ’em up.”
The young man nodded and Shade walked away.
The man sighed and jacked the charging handle back on his machine gun, chambering a round. “Seems like an awful waste to just slaughter these poor critters.” He thought. “I wonder what these wolves did to make the U. S. Army involved.”

The group of wolves had covered almost two hundred yards without incident.
Dash looked over at Timbre. “Maybe he left already.”
Timbre shook his head. “He’s still there. I can feel it.”
The wolves took another step forward, and suddenly the trees in front of them lit up with orange flashes too quick to count.
Timbre and Dash were the lowest, so the first volley went over their heads and into the midst of the other wolves, killing some and wounding almost all.
The group split in two, one stayed with the original group, the other tried to seek refuge from the raining steel by running towards the tree line to the right.
They were caught out in the open and were being slaughtered.
Lightning was up on his feet and running before Timbre and Dash could tell him that they’d be dead before he could do anything.
The two of them crawled to a fallen log, finding refuge from the deadly hail of lead.
From there they watched, helplessly as Lightning tried to lead the wolves to safety.
He never stood a chance.
Lightning made it to the group of beleaguered wolves.
“Get out of here! Go to the left to the trees, go!” He yelled, standing in front of them. Stay low and…”
A new wave of fire ensued and cut him off in mid sentence.
Lightning fell to the ground in a cloud of red mist.
Timbre and Dash stayed out of the way of the humans as they finished off the rest of the wolves, then stood and walked forward, toward the cave.
Once they were sure that the humans were gone, Dash and Timbre walked out from behind the log that had by chance saved their lives when so many other’s had been lost.
Timbre and Dash stumbled through the clearing that had only moments later been a field of death, now… death was all that remained.
Most of the wolves were dead or dying. Many were torn asunder, so many shots having hit them that they fell in pieces.
Dash choked back a bile that rose suddenly in his throat as he made his way across the blood drenched snow.
Finally they stopped alongside their fallen comrade.
“Oh no…” Dash said.
Lightning opened his eyes and coughed.
“Lightning!” Dash said. “You’re… you’re alive!”
Lightning smiled, a thin red line running from his mouth to the snow. “…not… not for long… I’m… I’m afraid.”
Timbre sighed and turned, walking away from the scene.
Dash felt tears come to his eyes as he watched his friend.
“Lightning… you’re going to be fine.” He said, knowing even as he said it that it was a lie.
Lightning was covered in blood from his ears to his tail. There were at least fifteen, if not more, holes in his friend, and he was quickly losing blood.
Dash knew from experience, it wouldn’t be long.
“Lightning, thank you for all you’ve done for me.” Dash said. “You… you were the one that taught me all I know… I’ll never forget you. The one that turned a love-sick husky pup into a wolf.
Lightning smiled. “…and… and a… a pretty good one… at that.”
He took a deep breath and Dash could tell he was fading fast. “Take… take care of… of Aleu. She is the… the most important thing… more than you… or I…”
Dash nodded.
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Dash shut his eyes against tears and turned to see Timbre standing a little ways away.
He stood and walked over to him.
Timbre didn’t look back at his friend.
“He’s gone… isn’t he?”
Dash sighed. “Yeah.”
His voice cracked, and a tear slid down his face.
A moment of silence passed between the two, a time to remember their friend.
Dash saw a tear form at the corner of Timbre’s eye.
Lightning had been a friend… almost a brother to them both. It was Lightning who first accepted Timbre when he’d turned from the ways of Eiko so long ago, he’d also taught Dash how to act as a wolf when he’d first come to Aleu’s pack, following his heart, and a small female named Shasta.
Shasta’s name hadn’t crossed Dash’s mind in some time, and this thought brought still more pain into his mind.
Dash turned and looked back at his fallen brother, lying on the snow amidst a wide red stain on the satin snow.
“I’ll miss you old friend.” Dash thought. “I’ll certainly miss you…”

“Oh my God…” Drake said to himself, stepping into the small room.
“Who could have done this?” He thought.
Never, in all his years as keeper of the law had he seen anything like this.
“…not since Steele anyway, but it can’t be him, Jenna killed him.”
Drake stepped over a streak of blood as he continued across the room.
Soon, he reached the fallen dog’s side and looked down at her.
A wide pool of blood had spread from underneath Trina, and she was wounded severely on both the shoulder and the neck.
“The neck is probably what did her in…” Drake thought.
The wound to her shoulder was deep enough that Drake could see her shoulder blade glistening white in the morning sun.
He sighed and stepped over Trina.
Drake walked over to a broken window at the south end of the home.
“That must be how the killer made his escape.” Drake thought. “…through the window… pretty messy though…”
Drake looked at the shards of glass and saw some more blood there, though Trina was more than four feet from the glass.
“They left something behind…” Drake thought.
He looked at the frame of the window and, after a few minutes of careful searching found what he had hoped for.
He was looking at a few strands of red hair.
“So the killer was red.” Drake thought. “…there have to be over twenty red dogs in Nome, but… how many of them will be cut? At least it’s something….”
Drake heard a sound behind him and turned.
“I… I don’t believe it…” He said, shocked.
Trina struggled to sit up.
“Help me…” She said. “Please…”
Then she fell to the floor again.

Drake stood out in the snow outside the hospital. It looked like Trina would be alright.
She was hurt pretty badly, but Doc was on the case and it seemed as if Trina might pull through.
If she does, she can tell us who did this to her.” Drake thought.
He walked around to the back and snuck in through the cracked door.
Trina still lay on the wooden table, doc’s towering form leaning over her as he worked.
“Who would want to hurt Trina?” Drake thought.
Suddenly, he heard pawsteps approaching, and approaching rapidly.
The crunch of snow grew closer, until Drake saw Tim’s familiar form round the corner of the alley.
He ran up to Drake and stopped, out of breath.
“I… I came as… as soon as I heard.” Tim said.
He paused for a moment to catch his breath.
“How is she?”
“Who?” Drake asked, confused.
“Trina.” Tim said.
“Oh…” Drake said. “I… uh… didn’t know you knew her.”
Tim nodded. “We’re uh… friends.”
Drake nodded.
“Well, word certainly travels fast. She’s inside, Doc’s working on her.”
“If she going to be alright?” Tim asked.
Drake sighed. “I don’t know. She was hurt pretty badly.”
Tim sighed as well and sat down. “What happened? I… I was just with her…”
“You were what?” Drake asked.
Tim stood up. “Well that is… um… we uh, we talked this morning.”
“Why are you acting so strangely?” Drake asked.
“She’s my friend.” Tim answered. “I’m just worried about a friend.”
Drake shook his head. “Whatever Tim. I can tell you’re not telling me the whole story.”
“It’s… complicated.” Tim said.
“Complicated?” Drake asked. “I’ll say. She almost died, might still. Do you know any reason why anyone would want to hurt her?”
Tim shook his head. “No.”
“Anyone with red hair?” Drake asked.
Tim thought for a moment. “No, but… oh no.”
“What?” Drake said.
“I’ve… I’ve got to talk to someone.” Tim said. “I’ll get back with you later.”
He turned and ran off, leaving a very puzzled Drake in his wake.
“Wonder why the kid is acting so strange?” Drake thought. “This day just keeps getting weirder and weirder…”

















Chapter 9:

It was late by the time that Aleu finally returned to the cave, her home.
Shadow and their new found friend Saeidifar followed behind her. Dash was the first to see her, and a wide grin split his face as he started running toward them.
Aleu smiled and stopped walking, waiting for her younger brother to reach her before she spoke.
“Hello Dash.”
“Aleu, you’re… you’re alive!” Dash cried.
Aleu nodded and smiled. “Thanks to you and Timbre; I was conscious for a little bit of our trip to Nome. Had it not been for you, both Shadow and I would’ve died here last night.”
Dash smiled. “It’s good to see you up and around.”
Aleu nodded. “I thought it was all over last night Dash… it was a strange feeling… dying.”
“Well thank Aniu you didn’t!” Timbre said, walking up behind Dash. ‘While you were gone, the humans started attacking us again.”
He paused and sighed. “…there were some casualties…”
“How bad?” Shadow asked, stepping up beside Aleu.
“Twenty.” Timbre said, “…as best we can tell… there really wasn’t a lot of time to stop and count…”
Dash sighed. “Aleu… Lightning was killed.”
Aleu drew a sharp, audible breath.
“Oh no…”
Shadow looked at the ground and the two could tell he was having the same reaction they had had.
Lightning had been a close friend to them all.
“How?” Aleu asked finally, tears filling her eyes.
Dash sighed. “They have different weapons, terrible weapons Aleu. Weapons that spit fire and lead much faster than anything I’ve ever seen… or even heard of.”
“Yeah.” Timbre added. “Dash and I led a charge into a small group of them. They… they cut all ten of us down, except us of course, Dash and I ducked behind a fallen tree, but they killed all the others… it was horrible.”
Dash sighed. “I really don’t see anyway that we can beat them. They get closer to the cave everyday. This place… our home seems to be their objective.”
Aleu smiled. “Aniu will take care of us. No matter how dark things get or seem to be, always remember that. We, the Talbourne are her clan, and we will always be taken care of.”
Timbre sighed and looked up at her. “I hope you’re right Aleu.”
Aleu smiled slightly.
“…so do I…” She thought. “…so do I.”

Tim didn’t stop running until he reached the familiar shape of the trawler sticking up out of the snow banks near the edge of Nome.
He sighed. “Please prove me wrong Tycha, please…”
He ran to the plank that led to the deck of the trawler. Once there though, he stopped and walked hesitantly up the plank.
Tim wasn’t sure what he would find up there.
What he found was, nothing.
The deck was clear, no blankets or bowls were out… nothing.
The wind blew and Tim shivered.
“Tycha, please, please prove me wrong. If there’s ever a time I want to be wrong… it’s now.”
Tim knew even as the thought crossed his mind that he was right.
He saw a folded piece of blue cloth sticking out of the wheel well.
Tim ran over to it and froze.
“Oh no.” Tim thought. “Tycha… what
have you done?”
The blue blanket was stained red with
blood.

It didn’t take long for Tim to make the
run back to the hospital and Drake.
“Hello Tim.” Drake said. “Back so soon?”
Tim nodded. “Drake, can I ask you something?”
“Sure.” Drake answered.
“Drake… how do you know that Trina’s attacker has red hair?”
“I found some on the broken window at Trina’s, looks like they cut themselves pretty good too.”
Tim sighed and almost fell. He felt extremely lightheaded. “I’m so sorry Tycha.” He thought. “This… this is all my fault.”
“Drake… I know who attacked Trina.” Tim said.
“Who?” Drake asked. “…and how?”
Tim sighed. “It… it was Tycha.”
“What?” Drake asked. “Are you serious?”
Tim nodded. “Yeah… and she’s gone.”
“…but why would Tycha attack…” Drake look at Tim.
Suddenly everything snapped into focus and for the first time this situation made sense to Drake.
“Tim… you don’t just talk to Trina… do you?”
Tim looked at the ground and shook his head.
Drake sighed. “Tim… what were you thinking? I mean… I’m your friend and all but… I never would’ve thought you’d… do that.”
“I’m sorry Drake.” Tim said. “I… I don’t know why I did it, just… Tycha and I haven’t been seeing eye to eye lately… on a lot of things.”
Drake shook his head and stepped back. “Tim, no offense, but this situation has already almost killed one dog. I don’t want to know all that. I’m only concerned with the assault and possible murder of Trina… how do you know it was Tycha?”
Tim sighed again. “There was a blanket at home… it was covered in blood.”
“Coincidence?” Drake asked.
Tim sighed.
“No, I don’t think so either.” Drake said. “Well… she’s hurt, she shouldn’t be hard to find… I’ll get the town in on it immediately.”
Drake started to walk away, but Tim’s voice stopped him.
“Drake…”
Drake turned back to him. “What is it Tim?”
Tim sighed. “Drake… please… don’t hurt her… I never… ever intended to hurt her.”
Drake stared at Tim for a few minutes.
“Tim, the path to hell is paved with good intentions. Tycha is now a wanted suspect in an assault, possible murder. Friend or not… she’ll be apprehended by whatever force is necessary.”
Tim shook his head. “No. Drake you can’t be serious.”
“I am Tim… it’s my job.”
Drake turned and walked away.
“First Jenna, now Tycha?” He thought. “Boy this is getting crazy.”

The next morning was one that Balto had
been dreading.
It was today that Jenna would stand trial and that Drake would hand out her sentence.
Balto knew what that could be, but…
“I can’t live without Jenna.” Balto thought. “I can’t… no matter what, I won’t let Drake take her from me.”
Balto hated the thought of opposing his friend, but for Jenna, Balto was willing to do anything.
“If only to make her smile.” Balto thought.
He made his way to the old mill a bit slower than usual that morning.

Saba was woken from her sleep by a gentle nudge and stood up.
“Aniu?” She asked. “What’s up, why are you waking me up?” She yawned.
Aniu smiled.
“My child, your time has come. Today will be both a beginning and an end. Please stand.”
Saba stood up and looked at Aniu.
“…but I still have so much to learn… you have so much to teach me…”
Aniu smiled. “Don’t worry about that child, only do the best you can. It will be enough. Now, stand still and close your eyes.”
Saba did as she was ordered.
A moment later, Saba felt a pressure on her chest, at first only slight, then it grew, until it began to really hurt!
It took all Saba had to keep her eyes closed and to not take a peek at what was happening.
She felt a blast of wind against her face, and then the wind started to twist, striking her sides as well. It was all Saba could do to remain standing.
Finally Saba felt herself falling.
It was like before, the wind rushing by her face and then…

SPLOOSH!
Saba was under water!
She felt herself sinking and started kicking her legs, slowly beginning to rise to the surface.
Saba was beginning to run out of air as her head finally broke the surface and she coughed.
Saba paddled over to the bank of the river and climbed out of the water.
Once she was out, the wind blew and Saba shivered.
“What a way to come back.” She thought. “Now I’m just going to freeze to death.”
Saba felt a little different. She felt the same as before, she was Saba, but… different.
She padded over to the edge of the river and looked into it.
What she saw made her gasp.
An unfamiliar wolf stared back at her from her reflection. No longer was she red and white, as her mother was; gone was the slim form the guys had liked so much.
Saba was now covered in long white fur, the fur of a wolf. She had twin black markings… almost like two crisscrossing lightning bolts, on her either side of her face. Saba was still slim, but she could feel a strength within her body that she’d never had before; the strength of one who has had to hunt to survive; the strength of a wolf. Saba’s baby blue eyes were now a bold amber. Her paws were much larger, as were her legs.
Saba thought she could probably run a lot faster now.
“I’m alive.” Saba said to herself. “I’m alive.”
A voice in her mind suddenly surprised her, and she stepped back, almost falling back into the river.
“Yes my child, you are alive, but you do have a job to do. You know where you are, go home. It will take you some time to get there and the Talbourne desperately needs your help.”
“Aniu?” Saba asked. “How…”
“A part of me is now a part of you my child.” Aniu said. “Now you must go. Go!”
Saba turned and ran.
Saba ran very fast.

















Chapter 10:

Balto finally reached the old mill and walked inside.
Instead of taking his place beside the other dogs however, Balto walked up on the raised portion of the floor and back to the shed where Jenna was being watched.
Drake was standing there.
“Balto.” He said. “Go sit with the rest of them.”
“Drake…” Balto started.
“Balto.” Drake said. “Please, don’t do anything you’re going to regret. There’s nothing you can do for her.”
Balto found himself growing angry.
“Let me speak to her Drake.” Balto’s tone made it clear that his statement wasn’t a question.
Drake nodded. “Alright, but only for a few minutes. You hear me Balto? A few minutes.”
“Fine.” Balto said.
Drake stepped aside and Balto nudged the door to the shed open enough to slide inside.
Jenna’s head appeared from the dark corner of the shed.
“Balto?”
She stood up and smiled. “Balto!”
Balto walked over to her. “Hey Jen.”
A tear came to Jenna’s eye. “What’s going to happen to me Balto?”
Balto sighed. “I really don’t know.”
A few more tears rolled out of Jenna’s eyes, and she buried her head in his shoulder.
“…but I promise you I will not let him hurt you, no matter what.”
Jenna raised her head. “I… I can’t live without you Balto.” She said. “I… I just can’t. I love you.”
Balto nodded. “I do too.”
A sharp rap on the door let Balto know his time was up. He sighed and stepped back. “I’ve got to go Jenna, but don’t worry. It’s going to be alright… everything’s going to be alright.”

Aleu was woken the next morning by a loud crash outside the cave.
“Oh no.” She thought. “They’re here!”
She stood up and woke Shadow.
“Shadow, wake up!”
He yawned and rolled over. “What is it Aleu?”
“Did you not hear that?” Aleu asked.
“No… I guess not.” Shadow said.
“It was a gunshot, really close to the cave.”
“Great.” Shadow said. “I’ll get the team.”
Aleu nodded. “I’ll take care of the kids first. We’ve got to fight them. This is our home.”
Shadow nodded. “We’ll do our best.”
Shadow started to walk outside the cave when Aleu’s voice stopped him. “Shadow…”
He stopped and turned. “I love you… be careful.”
He smiled and nodded, then walked quickly from the chamber.

Outside the cave, the situation was degrading fast, and by the time Aleu and Shadow joined the fight, many wolves had already been lost.
The humans were close to the entrance however, and this gave the Talbourne an advantage.
The humans weren’t that dangerous up close, where the wolves were very dangerous.
The humans had lost several of their soldiers when they began to pull back, realizing that they weren’t much of a threat at a distance.
Soon, the firing stopped and the wolves cheered.
Aleu smiled and looked at Shadow and the other’s. “We did it.” She thought. “We won the first battle.”
Suddenly a green sphere popped out of the trees in a high arc. It landed on the ground and rolled up to a group of about ten wolves’ feet. One of them bent his head low and sniffed it.
Then it exploded.
The concussion from the blast threw almost every wolf that wasn’t in the cave to the ground.
“What was that!” Aleu’s mind screamed.
She couldn’t hear and her vision was a little blurry.
Her vision soon cleared, and she wished it hadn’t.
Where the ten wolves had once stood there was now a big burned spot, and behind that, a pile of shredded wolves.
The blast had thrown pieces of them in every direction.
“What else do these humans have?” Aleu asked herself. “Is there anyway we can survive? Is there anyway we can win?”

Tycha stumbled over another hill.
Things weren’t exactly going as she’d planned.
She’d cut herself when she had tried to escape Trina’s home.
Dealing with Trina had taken a little longer than expected, and Dusty had shown up just as Tycha was finishing the young husky off.
Since it wouldn’t do to get caught covered in blood in a murdered dog’s home, Tycha had had to revise her escape plan.
The new one was simple; go through the window.
However things hadn’t turned out to be so simple after all.
The broken glass had cut her leg, and a piece of the frame had stuck in her shoulder. It had broken off, and was still lodged there.
The cut on her leg was deep, and she couldn’t move it very well.
“No, this definitely isn’t going how I pictured it.” Tycha thought.
She moved to climb up the next hill.
Tycha had no idea where she would go, but she would find somewhere. After all, she’d been a stray most of her life. She was used to starting over.
“I’ll just find someone new, can’t be too hard can it?” Tycha thought. “I mean I’m going to miss Tim and all, and Junior going to grow up without me, but… this is the way things have to be now.”
Tycha kept climbing the hill.

Balto was now sitting with the rest of the dogs, anxiously awaiting the coming trial, and more importantly, Drake’s decision.
Drake walked into the old mill, and as he climbed up onto the raised portion of the room, everyone fell silent.
Drake turned to the dogs, who were all standing below. “Will the accused please present herself.” He said.
Jenna walked slowly into the view of the dogs in the old mill, and the crowd began to whisper to themselves again.
Drake turned to Jenna, who had sat down behind him, and said. “Jenna, you are now informed that you are suspected to have committed a crime of the following offenses: one, kidnapping; in that you took my son Jason and held him against his will for an amount of time; two, attempted murder, in that you caused certain harm to Jason that was intended to have, but did not, result in his death. These are the charges against you, how do you plea?”
Jenna sighed. “Guilty.”
The dogs began talking again, and Drake had to quiet them, then he turned back to Jenna. “You are informed that I will accept your guilty plea. This, therefore, will not be a trial, but rather a finding of fact. You do not dispute the charges against you and willfully admit to having committed them?”
Jenna nodded and said softly. “Yes.”
Drake nodded. “Very well then, I will call only two witnesses to the crime then, not to decide whether you are guilty or not, but rather to establish a case against you. You personally will have no chance to defend your actions or lack there of, do you understand and knowingly forfeit that right?”
Jenna nodded. “Yes I do.”
Drake turned back to the dogs. “With that, I’m going to ask Gemeni to please come up here.”
Gemeni stood and walked to the platform.
“Gemeni, you understand that you are here to establish a case against Jenna, who has pled guilty to the charges against her, and that everything you say must be the truth, and nothing but that?”
“Yes I do.” Gemeni said.
“Please relate for me the events of two days past, when the crime in question occurred.”
Gemeni sighed. “My son, Jason, always goes for a run in the morning, it’s something he’s done since… well since he was old enough for me to trust him to… anyway, something told me that day to go check on him… call it a mother’s intuition if you will, but… I’ve told him many times not to run through the outskirts, as it is dangerous. Something told me that morning that he was going to do so… as I said before, I really can’t tell you what… I just felt something was wrong.”
“…and what did you find when you reached the outskirts?” Drake asked.
“Well, I saw Jenna there, talking to Jason. I figured she was telling him the same thing I was going to, that she’d seen him run in or something, but… as I watched, Jenna hit him. It… it completely blew me away. Usually I would have jumped in to defend him, I’m… I’m usually fairly aggressive, but this was Jenna. After she hit him, she drug him into one of the sheds nearby. I didn’t understand why… well, then I came to get you.”
“What happened when we got to the shed?” Drake asked.
“Jason ran to me, and I removed him from the situation.” Gemeni said.
“Tell me,” Drake asked. “What was his condition?”
Gemeni sighed. “Well, he was understandably upset, I mean, this is Jenna. She and Balto have been close friends of our family, almost like family themselves. He was hurt, about three bite marks on his neck… and I suppose that if they had went deeper… they would’ve killed him.”
“…and the Jenna you refer to is the same one standing before us today?” Drake asked.
Gemeni nodded. “Yes.”
“Thank you Gemeni.” Drake said. “Do you have anything else to say?”
Gemeni sighed again. “Just that… I don’t understand this… Jenna… she just doesn’t seem capable of this, not the Jenna I knew.”
“Gemeni, you can step down now.” Drake said.
Gemeni did so, and returned to her place in the crowd.
Drake looked at Balto.
“There was only one other witness there that day, and I ask Balto to please come up here.”
Balto sighed and stood up. He’d expected this.
Balto walked to the platform and sat beside Drake.
“Balto, you understand that Jenna is being charged with a crime, and that everything you say must be the truth and nothing else, no matter what your relationship with the accused might be?”
Balto nodded. “Yes.”
Drake nodded. “Balto, you are my friend, and I don’t wish to cause you any more grief than you are already going through, so I’m going to simply ask you to verify Gemeni’s account. Was Gemeni’s testimony accurate to the events that transpired that day?”
Balto sighed. “Yes it was.”
“Thank you.” Drake said. “Balto, do you have anything else you wish to say?”
“Yes I do.” Balto answered.
“Please continue.” Drake said.
Balto stood and walked in front of Drake, addressing those gathered below him.
“This is not typical of Jenna, and… I ask you to find it in your hearts to forgive her. I ask this because Jenna was going through some tough times, and while this does not mitigate the offences… no one was died, no one was even hurt much, no lasting trauma was caused. Jenna would never repeat this offence, this I can say with certainty. At the time, Jenna believed Drake to be responsible for the death of our son, Everest, who was banished not long ago, along with his sister Saba. While I did not hold Drake entirely accountable for this, Jenna did. It was out of grief, the grief of a mother for her son, that she acted.”
Balto stopped and sighed. “However, I have since learned that this is not true. Everest is alive, and though I will not disclose his location to protect he and his family, I can assure you that Jenna will no longer associate Everest’s supposed death with Drake or his family. The cause of this unfortunate series of events was grounded in a belief that was false.”
Balto turned to Drake.
“...Because of this, I ask you Drake, to please, please have mercy on her.”
Balto fell silent for a moment.
“That’s all I have.” He said quietly.
Drake nodded. “Balto, please step down.”
Balto did, and returned to his place in the crowd.
Drake waited a moment before he spoke. “I have deliberated on this subject for the past two days. This is an especially difficult situation for me, because of my association with both the accused and the victim.”
He sighed.
“However laws have been broken, and for that there must be punishment. Therefore, I impose the following sentence.”
Drake turned to Jenna.
“Jenna, you have been found, by your own admission and plea, guilty of the charges of kidnapping and attempted murder. These offences are so serious that I feel I cannot make an allowance for you simply because you were my friend, or your civic record. I therefore sentence you to indefinite banishment, from Nome and all of its members and affiliations.”
“NO!” Balto screamed in his mind.
Drake sighed. “In light of your civic record, I grant you a forty-eight hour amnesty of sentence, at the end of which, you will report here for the carrying out of the afore mentioned punishment. You are to understand however, that failure to report at the end of that forty-eight hours will result in you being held in contempt of my orders, the punishment of which is inarguably death.”
Drake stopped, the full effect of his words hitting him just then.
“…with that, you may leave. This meeting is adjourned. Please be safe returning to your homes.”
Jenna broke into a run then, sprinting to Balto’s side, and almost running him over.
She buried her head in Balto’s neck as the tears she’d kept inside throughout the proceeding finally sprung forth.
“I’m sorry Balto.” She said. “I’m so sorry.”
“Shh.” Balto said. “It’s okay Jen, It’s okay. Everything will be fine.”
“How can I say that?” Balto thought. “Life without Jenna? How can anything ever be alright ever again.”
Balto didn’t know.

Drake walked out the back door to the old mill.
He felt really bad about Balto… but…
“… the law is the law right?” He thought. “I mean, I shouldn’t have made an exception to it should I?”
He sighed.
“It’s never easy to do what’s right… but… it’s even harder this time.”
Drake was in such a daze that Tim almost ran into him as he rounded the corner at a dead run.
Drake stepped back and Tim slid to a stop.
“What is it Tim?” Drake asked. “Geez, you almost ran into me.”
“Trina’s awake!” Tim said.
“What?” Drake asked.
Tim smiled. “She’s awake! Trina… she woke up!”
“What are you saying?” Drake asked.
Tim sighed. “Just… just come to the hospital, she’s alive!”
Tim turned and ran.
“Well…” Drake said. He sighed and looked around. “Tim wait up!” He called, running down the street to catch up to Tim.

Drake walked out of the hospital.
He couldn’t believe that it was true.
Trina had been able to talk, and talk she did.
It was Tycha who had nearly killed her.
Tim saw Drake and walked over.
“What… what did she say?” He asked slowly.
Drake sighed. “I’m going to look for her.”
Drake turned and began to walk away.
Tim ran up and stepped in front of him.
“Her who?” He asked. “Who was it?”
Drake sighed. “It was Tycha. I’m sorry Tim.”
Tim stood in a daze as Drake walked past.
“If he finds her…”
Tim knew what would happen to Tycha then, and he didn’t want to see that.
A tear came to his eye.
“I… I never meant to hurt you Tycha… never.”
Tim walked into the hospital and over to Trina’s side.
“Hey…” She said weakly, managing a smile.
Tim smiled back at her. “You alright?”
“For now, I… I guess I’m as alright as I can be.”
Tim sighed. “I’m sorry Trina. This is my fault…”
Trina smiled. “It’s not your fault. I… I love you Tim.”
“I love you too Trina.” Tim said. “I really do.”
He sighed and stood up. “…but I have to go.”
The smile disappeared from Trina’s face.
“What… What do you mean… go?”
“I’ve got to go find Tycha.” Tim said.
“Tycha? Why… why does she matter? She tried to kill me.”
Tim sighed. “I… I know Trina… and I’ll be back, I promise… but… I have to go.”
Tim started to walk out.
“Tim, please don’t go.” Trina said. “Please… forget about her, stay with me.”
“I can’t right now.” Tim said. “I… I never meant to hurt her.” Tim said, looking back at her. “…or you.”
Tim sighed and walked out the door.











Chapter 11:

Back at Aleu’s cave the battle was still raging.
The humans had pushed the wolves back into the entrance of the cave, and were quickly slaughtering them there.
Shadow had told Aleu to stay away from the fight, and then he’d run off to join his team.
Aleu watched, horrified as another wolf fell, dead.
Aleu recognized the wolf as Nira, the wolf who watched the nursery.
She looked around, searching.
“Oh my God…” she said to herself.
The little ones were hiding behind a rock, and there were two humans with blades on the ends of their rifles, trying to stab them through the crack.
“Even the pups?” Aleu thought. “Aniu… what is this?”
“Hey!” Aleu called. “Someone help those kids!”
She looked around frantically, but there was no one around. No one to hear her call.
Aleu had made up her mind to go defend the children, no matter what Shadow had said, when she saw a black wolf run by her.
“I’ve got this one Aleu.” Saeidifar called.

Saeidifar ran full tilt at the rock the pups were behind. As he ran past, the two men jumped up and gave chase.
This was exactly what Saeidifar had wanted.
He ran up several of the ledges, where he was a lot more agile than the humans, and turned, leaping at the humans as they entered the main chamber, their muzzles at alert.
Saeidifar hit the left man in the chest, and he went down hard, hard enough that Saeidifar heard him bounce off the three shelves of rock between himself and the ground.
As soon as he landed on the shelf, Saeidifar leapt again, snapping his jaws over the man’s right arm.
Saeidifar heard the bone in the man’s arm snap.
The man cried out and dropped his rifle.
“He won’t be much of a problem now.”
Saeidifar ran back into the chamber to see thee pups still huddled under the rock.
“Get out of there!” He yelled.
The pups all scrambled from under
the rock, and across the platform.
Tim saw some of the wolves begin to stop defending and simply retreat. He saw them take tail and run.
`”No!” Saeidifar yelled. “Don’t retreat!”
He looked around, as wolves streamed past and sighed. “don’t retreat…”
Suddenly he saw June and Dash. They were both backed against a wall, a man with a rifle and an older man holding a pistol stood in front of them.
“Time to quit telling them and start showing them.”
Saeidifar ran at the men, who turned as he approached.
The man with the pistol tracked Saeidifar’s movements with his pistol as Saeidifar ran in between them and jumped.
The man fired his pistol, but the round went astray, and hit the man across from him in the chest.
Blood erupted from the man’s back as the .45 shell punched out of him.
The man who’d been shot dropped to the floor, dead.
Saeidifar jumped up on the wall and sprung back at the man with the pistol.
He hit the man, and knocked him over.
Hand to hand, the human had not a chance in the world.
The pistol clattered out of the man’s hands, as he fell to the ground.
Saeidifar wasted no time, and wrapped his jaws around the man’s neck and broke it, then he turned to Dash and June.
“You guys alright?” Saeidifar asked.
Dash looked at June. “You?”
She nodded.
“Yeah.” Dash said. “We’re fine.”
Saeidifar sighed . “You’re one of the Lieutenants right?”
Dash nodded.
“Well, we’d better convince these wolves to stay and fight, otherwise it doesn’t look like you’ll have much of a home to defend.”
Dash nodded. “I’ll get Shadow and the ones outside.”
“I’ll try to stop the ones that are in here from leaving.” Saeidifar said.
Dash turned, but then stopped.
“Thank you Saeidifar.” Dash said.
Saeidifar nodded, then ran off to stop the retreating wolves.
Dash sighed, then he ran outside, scanning the area for Shadow.

Balto stood on the porch outside Jenna’s home. It had been a long time since he’d felt this lost.
He looked out over the town of Nome. The only home he’d ever known.
A faint breeze blew through the air and he shivered. Small snowflakes had started to fall about an hour ago, and they still drifted through the cool evening air.
Soon the sun would fall, the moon would rise… and Balto would have only twenty four hours to spend with Jenna before she was gone.
He sighed.
A thought had entered his mind, but he couldn’t decide whether it was good or not.
He could leave with her. Balto could leave Nome. It would mean leaving the only home he’d ever known, or could recall anyway, his friends, family and Luke… all of it.
This in itself didn’t bother Balto too much, though it saddened him to think of leaving Luke, Jenna was worth that sacrifice… but Drake’s sentence had been explicitly clear.
Jenna was to leave Nome alone. He wasn’t supposed to be able to go with her.
Balto sighed again and looked up.
If he left with her, it would mean turning into a criminal himself, at least in Drake’s eyes.
Drake would try to stop him, and if Balto wanted to stay with Jenna… he’d have to do something about it.
Balto knew just to what lengths Drake would go to stop him. Drake had ordered Everest’s death, even though Everest was almost like a son to him… it wouldn’t matter much that Balto and Drake had once been friends… if he crossed that line… Drake would come for him.
A snowflake fluttered through the air and landed on his nose, sending a shiver down his spine.
He would kill for Jenna. If that’s what it took, he’d do it… but would he be wrong?
Jenna had committed the crimes she’d been tried for, though Balto didn’t understand why, she had.
Did the fact that Jenna, his best friend and eternal soul mate, was now a criminal change what was right and wrong?
Balto sighed.
He didn’t know.
“Aniu… mother, I could really use your help right now…” He thought. “I’ve never felt so lost. I… I don’t know what to do… I don’t want to have to hurt Drake… but I can’t live without Jenna.”
Balto felt the presence of someone behind him and turned.
Jenna smiled and walked up next to him. “What are you doing out here Balto?” She asked, sitting beside him.
Balto sighed. “Thinking.”
Jenna laid her head on his shoulder. “About what?”
“…going with you.” Balto said.
Jenna raised her head and looked at him. “Balto, you can’t, you heard what Drake said.”
Balto nodded. “I did, but I don’t care.”
Jenna smiled. “Balto, you can’t throw away everything you have here for me. I…” She sighed. “…I messed up, and I have to pay the consequences, not you.”
Balto turned to look at her. “Jenna, I know what Everest was talking about.”
“What?” Jenna asked, a confused look crossing her face.
“Jen, I don’t care about Drake, laws, nothing… I won’t let you go.”
Jenna smiled. “Balto…”
He looked back out over Nome. “I’m serious Jenna. I… I can’t live without you. I… I can’t even imagine…”
He fell silent.
“…. Balto, please… promise me you won’t.” Jenna said. “Please don’t throw your life away for my mistakes.”
Balto turned to her. “Jen, I will do anything I have to so that we never part, whatever it takes, that’s my promise.”
Balto turned and once again looked out over the city.
Jenna noticed the thick layer of snow that had accumulated on his back. “He’s been out here a while.” She thought.
The wind blew and Balto shivered.
“Come on Balto.” Jenna said. “Let’s go inside.”
Balto nodded, and stood, shaking the snow off of him and turned. “Jenna, I love you. Nothing you or anyone else could do would ever change that.”
Jenna smiled. “I love you too Balto, come on.”
Balto nodded again, and the two walked off the porch and threw the doggy door, into the house.


























Chapter 12:

Tycha stumbled through the snow in the dark.
She hurt, and hurt bad, she knew this now.
She’d passed out about an hour ago. She didn’t know how long it had been before she woke up, but it had been dark when she finally woke up.
Her leg still oozed blood, and she could still feel it slipping out around the piece of the window frame that had stuck in her side.
She’d thought she’d be alright, that the wounds would close up… but they hadn’t.
Tycha knew she’d lost a lot of blood, and that it was only a matter of time before she ran out.
A tear slid out of her eye.
Tycha didn’t want to die. She wished she could see Tim once more before it happened.
No matter how much sense it would have made to anyone else, she still loved him.
She found herself struggling to forgive him, but something like that would take time, time she no longer had.
Tycha lost her grip on the hill she was climbing and fell to the snow, her claws digging into the snow to keep her from falling down it.
Tycha tried to stand up, butt she didn’t have the strength.
“What’s the point anyway?” She thought.
Tycha slowly released her hold on the frozen snow and slid down the hill on her stomach, stopping near the bottom.
Tycha tried to raise her head, but her strength had left her.
She rolled over on her side, and soon drifted away.

Blaize walked down the alley near Astarre’s home.
He’d told her to meet him here, rather than at her house, maybe that way her dad wouldn’t know that they were seeing one another, and wouldn’t hurt her anymore.
Blaize had struggled with why exactly Astarre wanted to protect her father so much, when all he did was beat her, but that’s the way she wanted things, and Blaize would honor that.
As he stood there, he realized she was a little late.
“Wonder what’s keeping her?” Blaize thought.
He decided to check on her, and walked down the alley.

Astarre stood in her home.
She was supposed to be meeting Blaize right now, but she was thinking something over, something that had occurred to her many times over the years.
Astarre was thinking of leaving her father.
She knew he’d never let her go, he’d probably kill her if she even mentioned it, but…
“I love Blaize.” Astarre realized.
Blaize had been a friend to her, and a good one at that, but though he’d mentioned it, she’d never thought of them as anything more.
Now she realized she wanted nothing else.
She was suddenly very angry at her father.
“Astarre, what are you doing?” Her father asked, as he stepped into the room.
“I was thinking about something!” Astarre snapped.
“…and what is that?” Her father asked.
“Of leaving you!” she screamed. “You don’t love me like you say you do, if you did, you wouldn’t hit me!”
“Oh really?” Her father said. “…and what do you know of love?”
“I know plenty!” She replied. “I know that I love Blaize, and that he’d never do anything like that to me!”
“Blaize?” Her father said. “That must be the name of that stinking mutt you’ve been running around with, huh?”
Astarre was furious.
“Blaize has been more to me in the short time I’ve known him than you ever will!” She screamed.
“Oh really?” Her father said. “You think so?”
Astarre nodded.
Her father sighed and walked over to her.
“You ungrateful little…”
Astarre didn’t hear the rest of what he said, as he swung his paw down and smacked her in the side of the head.
Her ears rang and Astarre found it hard to hear.
He’d never hit her that hard before.
Her father hit her in the side, and fell to the ground.
“I provided for you all your life!” He yelled, hitting her again.
Astarre balled up on the floor.
“Has this Blaize character done that!”
He hit her again.
“Huh?! Has he!”
Sam kicked her three more times.
“You don’t know what I’m doing!”
Sam hit her in the face, knocking her head against the floor.
“You’ve got to be strong to survive in this world!”
Astarre tried to crawl away, but Sam stepped in front of her.
“That’s what my father taught me!” He said, kicking her again. “…and that’s what I’ve tried to teach you!”
Her father stopped.
“Your mother wasn’t a very good learner either, not after you were born! She never appreciated me or my efforts!”
Astarre used this time to push herself up to stand.
She gritted her teeth and hit her father with all the strength she could muster, which wasn’t much.
She looked up at him.
Sam’s eyes stared her down, never wavering.
“That was a mistake.” He said. “Your mother made that same one the night she died.”
Astarre gasped. “You…”
“Yes.” He said. “I killed her.”
Astarre was stunned speechless.
He hit her again and popped her head up,
When her head fell back down, it hung low, against her chest.
Her vision swam. It seemed as if the floor was spinning, or rather she was.
Her father put his paw under her muzzle and raised her head. “Stay with me sweetie.” He said. “…stay with me.”
Then he hit her again, snapping her head back and throwing her to the floor.
Sam stood over her and raised his paw high, ready to smash Astarre’s head into the floor.
A tear rolled out of Astarre’s eye and she shut them.
“I’m sorry Blaize.” Astarre thought. Then she just waited for her father to end it all.

It didn’t take long for Blaize to make it down the alley to Astarre’s home. He walked up on the porch… and froze.
Through a window, he saw a gray dog standing over Astarre, and he was ready to kill her.
Blaize backed down the porch steps and turned, running at the window.
Blaize leapt in the air and soared through the window with a crash.
He hit the gray dog on top of Astarre, sending them both sprawling to the floor.
Blaize and the gray dog grappled with one another, rolling over the floor snapping and barking.
Blaize had learned how to fight being on the mail team. Different teams often got into fights, and so Blaize had experience. This experience came in handy now, as he found himself fighting, not for the honor of his team, but his very life.
Blaize rolled sideways and the gray dog’s paw slammed into the floor, barely missing his head.
“One hit like that and I’m out of this fight.” Blaize thought.
He hit the dog in the shoulder and threw it to the ground.
Blaize stood, but the gray dog had already recovered, and he was there.
He hit Blaize several times in the face and snapped at him, latching his jaws around Blaize’s left foreleg.
Blaize howled and smacked the dog in the face.
The dog let go of his leg, but he retaliated faster than Blaize could react, hitting him several times, throwing Blaize to the ground.
Blaize felt lightheaded. The last few strikes had rattled him pretty badly. The world was starting to spin and Blaize doubted if he was capable of standing.
The gray dog stood over him.
He leaned down close to him. “You must be Blaize. Nice to finally meet ya. So, how do you like the family?”
Blaize put all his strength into a kick that impacted the gray dog’s belly, flipping him over Blaize’s head and toward the window.
Sam felt a sharp pain in his back as he hit the wall, and looked down.
A large piece of splintered frame stuck out of his chest. Blood pumped freely around the wood from the wound the broken frame had caused.
Sam looked up at Blaize. He held his gaze for a moment, then his body sagged and his head fell against his chest.
Blaize took a deep breath and stood, wincing at the pain that effort caused.
After a few moments the room stopped spinning so much, and Blaize thought he could walk.
Astarre opened her eyes then, and rolled over.
“Blaize?” She asked.
He smiled and limped toward her.
“Yeah…” he said. “Yeah, it’s me. Look, don’t look behind…”
But it was too late. Astarre turned her head and looked behind her.
She saw her father, Sam, hanging on the wall, the piece of wood still sticking out of him. A pool of bright red blood had accumulated under him.
Astarre stood and walked slowly over to him.
“He’s dead.” She thought. “It’s over… it’s finally over.”
Astarre spit on the dead dog and turned, starting to walk back over to Blaize. About half way there she fell.
“Astarre!” Blaize said, running as fast as he could to her side. “Astarre are you alright?”
She smiled at him. “I’ll live.”
“I love you Astarre.” Blaize said.
She smiled again. “I love you too Blaize.”
Blaize let himself drop beside her and put his head on her shoulder.
They were both exhausted from the fight, and it wasn’t long until they were both sound asleep.



















Chapter 13:

Tim was walking through the forest. Tycha’s trail had led him here, but now, as the snow continued to fall, it seemed that the trail was diminishing.
Tim looked around him, but couldn’t see much because of the blowing snow.
“Tycha!” He yelled. “Tycha where are you!?”
There was no answer to his calls but the howling of the wind past his ears.
“I’ll never find her in this.” Tim thought.
He looked around again, and stopped.
The wind blew again, and cleared the view in front of him for a few seconds. In that few seconds, Tim saw a red dog lying in the snow.
“Tycha!” He yelled, running forward, as the snow consumed her once again.
A few minutes later, he was at her side.
“Tycha, oh my God, please get up.”
Tycha didn’t move.
“Oh no…” Tim thought. “I’m too late.”
Tycha coughed and opened her eyes. “Tim?” She asked.
Tim nodded and laid down beside her. “Yeah, Yeah it’s me Tycha. I’m here.”
A slight smile crossed her face. “I… I don’t believe it.” She said. “I never thought you’d come for me.”
Tim noticed the piece of wood in her shoulder then, and the cut on her leg.
“Tycha, you’re hurt!”
She winced and nodded slowly.
“Come on.” Tim said. “We’ve got to get you back to town, to Doc.”
Tycha shook her head. “No Tim. I can’t go back, I’m… I’m a murderer.”
“No you’re not.” Tim said. “Drake found Trina and got her to Doc… she’s going to be fine.”
Tycha laughed softly.
“What is it Tycha?” Tim asked.
“I… I tried to kill her, and I only wound up killing myself.”
“Don’t say that!” Tim said. “If we can just get to Doc’s… he can fix you, he can fix anyone.”
Trina coughed, and spit some red liquid on the snow. “That… that can’t be good.” She said.
“Come on!” Tim said.
Tycha shook her head. “Tim, I can barely move, much less walk back to Nome.”
“Don’t say that!” Tim said again. “You’re…”
A tear rolled out of his eye. “…you’re going to be fine.”
Tycha’s breathing sped up somewhat.
“Tycha?” Tim said.
It took a few minutes, but Tycha slowed her breathing back to more or less normal.
“Tim… tell… tell me something… and… and tell… tell me the truth… do you… do you love her?”
“Who?” Tim asked.
“Trina.” Tycha said.
Tim sighed, and nodded. “Yeah…’
Tycha smiled.
“I’m sorry Tycha.” Tim said. “I… I never meant to hurt you… this is my fault.”
“No it’s not.” Tycha said. “I… I did… did this to… to myself…”
Tim sighed. “…but you wouldn’t have if I hadn’t…”
Tycha cut him off. “Tim… go… go back to her. If… if you really… really love her. Just… Just don’t… don’t tell Jun… Junior about… about this… please?”
Tim nodded. “I won’t.”
“I love you Tim.” Tycha said.
She started to shake, and knew she didn’t have long to say the one last thing she realized needed to be said.
“I.. I for… I forgive… you… Tim…”
Tycha’s head rolled to the side, and she stopped shaking… then she stopped breathing.
Tim looked at her, horrified.
“She’s dead…” Tim thought.
“Tim, step away from her.” Drake’s voice said from behind him.
Tim turned.
“Please Tim, don’t make this any harder than it has to be.” Drake said.
Tim looked at him. “She’s dead.”
Drake sighed and hung his head. “I’m sorry Tim.”
Tim walked toward Drake. “Drake… who else knows about this… about Tycha?”
“No one.” Drake said.
Tim nodded. “Don’t… don’t solve this case… alright?”
“What?” Drake asked. “I already have. Tycha attacked Trina.”
“I know that.” Tim said. “…and so do you, but… no one else needs to, especially Junior.”
Drake nodded. “Alright, I think I understand.”
Tim just stood there for a moment.
“Tim… I really am sorry.” Drake said.
Tim nodded and turned again, walking into the blowing snow.

Aleu stood in the cave.
She was all alone.
Saeidifar had managed to get the other wolves to stop running and fight, and the humans had been routed for now, but they’d surely return.
The decision had been made to evacuate the cave until the humans were either defeated or stopped looking for them.
The others had been split into different groups and went into hiding in various places near the cave.
Aleu had returned to see if anyone had been left behind in the cave. She’d searched every chamber, but had found no one.
She now stood in the main chamber, looking around. It was odd, to not feel safe in the place she’d called home for so long.
“Well well well.” A voice from behind her said. “If it isn’t Aleu, the fearless leader.”
Aleu turned around and froze.
An older man stood in the entrance to the cave, maybe one hundred feet from her. He had a pistol in his hand, and it was pointed at her.
“Shade.” Aleu said, her voice hinting at a little of the anger she felt whenever she thought of this demon lord.
He laughed. “How is it Aleu that every time we meet and I think I’ve destroyed you that you somehow manage to survive, and come back to ruin my plans?”
Aleu smiled. “Aniu is stronger than you, and she is with me, on our side.”
Shade smirked. “Really, where is Aniu now? Is she going to stop me?”
A loud bang reverberated through the many chambers of the cave, and Aleu felt a sharp pain in her chest.
She looked down.
The white bandage that was still wrapped around her was quickly turning red, as blood from a hole in the left side of her chest soaked into it.
Aleu looked back up at Shade, who smiled, and pulled the trigger again.
Aleu stepped back a couple of times, and stopped. She felt dizzy, and the pain in her chest was worse now.
Aleu tried to block out the pain, and growled at Shade.
Shade just laughed and pulled the trigger twice more. The gun jumped in his hands and Aleu saw fire come from the barrel.
She stumbled a few steps toward Shade, then she fell, unable to stand any longer.
“So this is the end, eh Aleu?” Shade said, closing the distance between them to about twenty feet. “Finally, after all these years you’re going to die.”
Aleu looked up at him. Her vision was blurred severely now, probably from the critical amount of blood that she’d lost.
“Aniu, he can’t win.” Aleu thought. “Help me, give me strength.”
Aleu struggled to stand, and managed to get one leg to support her weight.
As she pushed herself up however, Shade shot her again.
The bullet smacked into Aleu’s leg, and she fell on her face, screaming in pain.
“I won’t give up Aniu!” Aleu thought.
She struggled to stand once again, and got her other leg up.
Shade laughed. “You’re pathetic Aleu.” He said. He extended his arm, and another of the heavy .45 shells smacked into her outstretched leg.
Aleu screamed again, and fell to the ground. She couldn’t move.
Shade walked over to her and knelt down, resting the barrel of the pistol below her left ear.
“I’m sorry Aniu.” Aleu thought. “I tried.”
Shade started to squeeze the trigger…
…but a voice stopped him.
“Hey, leave her alone!”
Shade turned and looked behind him.
A single white wolf stood in the entrance to the cave.
Shade laughed and stood, Aleu would wait, she wasn’t going anywhere, in fact, she might already be dead.
Shade raised his pistol.
“…and who might you be?” He asked.
“My name is Saba, and you will listen to me!” Saba said.
Shade laughed again. “…or what?”
He pointed the pistol at the white wolf and pulled the trigger.
The white wolf moved so fast that Shade could barely see it, from it’s position in the entrance to the cave to another, a few feet from it’s inner wall.
The bullet impacted harmlessly on a tree outside the cave.
“How is that possible!” Shade screamed. “Who are you!?”
Saba looked up and closed her eyes.
A great flash of blue light struck down from the ceiling of the cave, enveloping Saba in a great blue storm of energy.
Shade shielded his eyes from the blinding light with his hand.
The blue light faded, and Saba looked down, right into Shade’s eyes.
Then she opened her own.
A blue light filled them.
“It is time for you to go home my son.” She said.
“You!” He yelled. “It was foolish of you to come down here Aniu, now you’ll die as well.”
He raised his arm and pulled the trigger of his pistol three times.
The bullets were right on target and spun toward the white wolf, then…
…they stopped.
“I don’t believe it.” Shade said.
The three bullets hovered in the air not two inches from the white wolf’s face, still spinning slowly.
Aniu stepped to the side and the bullets resumed their course, striking and ricocheting off of the rock wall of the cave.
Shade raised his arm again, but Aniu vanished.
“What the…”
Shade heard growling behind him, and turned, right as Aniu leapt at him…
…and went into him.
Shade screamed, and then a bright flash of green light and smoke exploded through the cave.
When the light and smoke cleared, Aniu stood there. She held a very angry black wolf by the back of the neck. It was how a mother wolf would transport her children.
“As I said earlier.” Aniu said. “It is time for you to go home. You’ve caused enough trouble for now.”
A square of red light appeared next to her, and Aniu turned, throwing Shade into it.
Shade screamed, and a blast of red light flooded the chamber. When it cleared, Saba stood there. She fell to the ground, as if a puppet cut from it’s strings.
A few moments later Saba opened her eyes.
She looked up toward the ceiling of the cave. “Is it done?” She thought.
Aniu’s sweet voice answered her. “Yes my child, it is done.”
“We were too late to save Aleu though.” Saba thought.
“She has been faithful to me for a long time.” Aniu answered. “…even as she faced certain death her faith never wavered I think it is time that I rewarded her.”
Saba walked over near Aleu’s still form. A vast puddle of blood had spread beneath her sister, and Aleu wasn’t moving.
“How?” Saba asked.
“Put your paw on her chest.” Aniu said.
Saba did, and gasped as the holes that still pulsed blood, began to close. Soon, there was no hole at all.
Saba put her paw on Aleu’s leg, and watched, mystified as the same thing occurred.
“This is my act of repayment.” Aniu said. “This is her reward.”
Saba smiled. “Thank you Aniu.”
“Have faith my child, whatever happens… have faith.” Aniu said, her calming voice drifting slowly away.
Saba felt it now. Aniu was gone once again, for now anyway.
She heard a cough and looked down.
“Aleu?” She said, leaning near her sister.
Aleu’s eyes fluttered open and she stared at Saba. “Who… who are you?”
Saba smiled. “Aleu, it’s a long story.”
“Your voice… it seems familiar.” Aleu said.
Saba smiled again. “Aleu, it’s me. It’s Saba.”
A look of confusion crossed her face. “…but that’s impossible.” Aleu said.
Saba laughed. “Aleu, nothing is impossible. You must only have faith.”
Aleu smiled. “Aniu?”
Saba nodded. “She saved you.”
Aleu looked down and noticed for the first time that she was no longer bleeding.
She smiled. “All things are possible.”
Saba nodded.
Aleu suddenly looked around, franticly. “Where is he!?”
“Where’s who?” Saba asked.
“Shade.” Aleu said.
Saba laughed. “Aniu took care of him. You no longer have to worry about him.”
Aleu breathed a sigh of relief. “Then we can get the others. They can come back home.”
“Yes. Saba said.
Aleu stood, and walked toward the entrance of the cave.
“Come on Saba.” Aleu said. “We’ll go get the others, and then you have to tell me all that Aniu told you. I think I know why you’re back.”
Saba nodded and walked over to Aleu.
“Everest won’t recognize you now.” Aleu said.
Saba smiled. “Everest! My children, are they alright!?” She’d almost forgotten about them in the time she’d spent with Aniu.
Aleu smiled and nodded.
“Let’s go!” Saba said, running toward the entrance to the cave. “Where are they?”
“Follow me.” Aleu said.
The two sisters walked out of the cave together.












Chapter 14:

Tim walked as if he were blind, his intended destination the dog shed than more than one hundred feet from him.
Indeed he was blind to the happenings around him, blind not by sight, but by heart.
Tycha was dead.
This was never his intention, never what he wanted.
He thought of what Drake had said.
“The path to hell is paved with good intentions.”
Tim sighed and stepped through the door to the dog shed.
Junior stood as his father stepped into the room.
He could tell immediately that something was wrong.
Junior stood from his place by Jill and walked toward him.
“Dad, is… is something wrong?”
Tim hung his head.
“Dad?” Junior asked again.
“Your mother…” Tim stopped. “…she’s dead.”
Junior stepped back several paces and stopped, a shocked expression on his face. “…dead? How?”
Tears streamed down Tim’s face as he looked up at his son. “We were walking… in the forest… the man must have thought that… that she was a wolf… or that I was… he shot her.”
A tear rolled out of Junior’s eye. “No…” He shook his head and walked toward his father, laying his head on his shoulder. “No!”
Jill stood up, for clearly, all was not as it should be, and walked toward Junior, stopping by his side.
The three mourned Tycha’s loss, together.

Aleu stood beside Saba.
“I asked for you.” She said.
“What?” Saba asked.
Aleu smiled. “I asked Aniu for a way out… and you are that way.”
“…but… but why?” Saba asked. “You’re a great Alpha.”
“I know, and I enjoy it… but my children are growing up, and they’re doing it without me. With Shadow leading the teams, and me leading the clan… our family has fallen by the wayside. I don’t want that.”
She paused. “I asked Aniu for a way out… and she gave it to me.”
“You really want to give it up?” Saba asked.
Aleu nodded. “As much as I love it… yes. My family is more important.”
Saba nodded. “Alright.”

Aleu stood in front of the clan, which was gathered below her.
“My family, I ask you to gather here because I have some news to impart to you.”
Aleu sighed.
“This will be my last address to you as your Alpha.”
A stir of voices began then, and Aleu waited for them to quiet down.
“I’ve enjoyed my time as your Alpha. You have given me much more than I could ever repay. The reasons for my stepping down are personal, and in no way the fault of any of you.”
Aleu turned to Saba, who was standing beside her.
“Aniu has sent you a replacement for me. I give you the new Alpha of the Talbourne Clan, Saba.”
Another stir of voices began at the mention of Saba’s name.
“Yes, this is the very same Saba who was in our midst recently, and who we had feared dead. She did die, but by the power of Aniu, she was resurrected and sent here to help us defeat Shade and to lead us.”
Everest tuned out the rest of Aleu’s speech to the clan at the mention of Saba’s name.
“Saba?” He thought. “It… it can’t be…”
He started to walk forward, unconscious of the fact that Aleu was still speaking.
“…I ask you to give Saba the same respect and honor that you did me, in my time as Alpha.”
Aleu turned to Saba.
“…and it is now that I step down… and pledge my allegiance to her as do all of you.”
Aleu knelt down in front of Saba, and soon every wolf in the chamber had followed suit… all but Everest.
He continued walking forward, unaware of the state of things around him.
He stopped when he stood face to face with the white wolf.
“Saba?” He asked, a look of confusion on his face.
She smiled. “Everest!”
“You… you don’t look like yourself.” He said.
Saba smiled. “There is much I have to tell you.”
“What… what are our children’s names?” Everest asked.
“Why do you ask me that?” Saba said. “Sunny, Rife and Tram of course.”
Everest smiled. “It is you, isn’t it? It’s really you! You’re alive!”
He nuzzled her.
Saba nuzzled him back and smiled.
“You’re all dismissed.” She said.
Aleu stood, and the rest followed suit. Aleu smiled. “Well, if this little family reunion is over, I think the wolves would like to speak to their new Alpha.
Saba nodded. “…of course.”
She looked at Everest.
“Shall we?”
He smiled, and the two walked down the shelves into the midst of the other wolves.
…her clan…
…the Talbourne Clan.

The last day had gone by far too fast for Balto. He and Jenna were walking to the old mill.
He could see a large crowd near the old mill.
Jenna looked up at him.
“It’ll be over soon Jen.” Balto said.
She looked back to the front and the two walked around the side of the old mill, toward the crowd of dogs, which parted to allow them to pass through.
Balto walked, Jenna by his side to Drake, who stood near the edge of town, just beyond the old mill.
Balto stopped.
“Jenna.” Drake said.
Jenna looked up at Balto.
He sighed and the two of them walked forward, stopping next to Drake.
“Jenna, you were tried and by your own admission, have been found guilty of kidnapping and attempted murder. As punishment for these crimes I have sentenced you to be banished from the town of Nome, Alaska and all of its members and affiliations. Today we are here to carry out the sentence. I will remind you once more that if you ever return to Nome, you will be killed on sight. These are the terms of your sentence. Do you understand?”
Jenna nodded. “Yes.”
“Then go.” Drake said.
Jenna sighed and turned, walking back toward the group.
“Jenna…” Drake started, but fell silent. Jenna stopped in front of Gemeni. “I’m sorry.” She said. “I truly am.”
Jenna turned and walked out of town.
Balto watched her become smaller and smaller as she walked toward the horizon.
Balto suddenly bolted past Drake and ran to Jenna. “Jenna!”
Drake sighed.
Jenna stopped and Balto caught up to her.
“Jenna!” He lowered his voice so that the others would not hear. “We are still on, right? You’re coming back?”
Jenna smiled and nodded.
A tear slid out of her eye.
“I said I do anything for you Jenna.” Balto said. “...and I will. I promise.”
Jenna nodded. “I love you Balto… and I will return.”
Drake’s voice cut off Balto’s response before he had the chance to make it.
“Balto…”
Balto looked back.
“I… I have to go back.”
Jenna nodded.
“I love you Jen.” Balto said.
“I love you too Balto.” Jenna said.
Balto raised his paw to her face.
A tear slid out of his eye. Even though he knew that he’d son be with her again, it hurt him to see her waking away from him, knowing that she could not return.
Jenna turned, waking away from Balto, his paw slid off her muzzle and she walked away. Balto stood there and watched as he slowly disappeared from view.


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Wow.

What a sudden change of events that was! (And I'm one of the first to comment to this? OMG, . . . I am shocked. :shock: )

Dude, you are like a master when it comes to suspense and sudden plot twists, I'll give you that. Who would have thunk that ending, really?

Keep writing, please! I want more!

(BTW, if you get any free time . . . you know, when you're not writing your next epic Balto fic or doing other things and whatnot . . . check out my latest fics and tell me what you think! Who knows?)

I think that you are one of the best Balto fic writers that I have ever read (yes, you are even better than me!), and you are such an inspiration to all other up-and-coming fic writer-legends in the making (and even to us old fanfic writers too)! Please continue your wonderfully dramatic and awesomely amazing works!

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By this time I'm sure you understand why Saba had to "die" in All Good Things, so I won't go into that... on that topic I have only one thing to say.
You've got to trust me! :D
I appreciate your kind words. You describe me as much more than I actually am. I'm just a Balto Fan (although a dedicated one) who happens to enjoy writing, nothing special. Writing is learned. Everyone can do it, just few decide to.
My next story will focus on Balto and Jenna's problem (obviously a pretty big one) and the beginning of Saba as Alpha of the Talbourne, as well as continue the romance of Blaize and Astarre, and the healing process that takes place with Tim.
I plan to start it soon, maybe tomorrow.
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I'm...not sure what to say. That was simply awesome. Really, excellent job. I think you're selling yourself short. Yeah, pretty much everyone could write. But not everyone could write WELL. I mean REALLY well. You never fail to amaze me. And I guess I'm gonna have to start trusting you, 'cause you sure knew what you were doing with this one.

I'm infinately happy that you're gonna keep writing. I knew you had said that before, but I kinda wondered, "Maybe he's just getting tired of Balto." :lol: Silly me. Can't wait to see how you resolve the whole Balto, Jenna situation. But I trust you! :lol: I'm sure it'll be GREAT. Please, keep us posted.


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Rotramel the Writer wrote:
By this time I'm sure you understand why Saba had to "die" in All Good Things, so I won't go into that... on that topic I have only one thing to say.
You've got to trust me! :D

Oh yeah, I understand that much better now! And when I think about it, I think it was better this way to have Saba lead instead IMO, but I guess we'll all patiently await your next fic!

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I appreciate your kind words. You describe me as much more than I actually am. I'm just a Balto Fan (although a dedicated one) who happens to enjoy writing, nothing special. Writing is learned. Everyone can do it, just few decide to.

You're welcome. I feel the same way sometimes too. I love to think of interesting ideas, and yet I can't pass a college English class. I just do it for fun and for the love of the Balto fandom too!

I guess you could say that we are quite alike? :D

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My next story will focus on Balto and Jenna's problem (obviously a pretty big one) and the beginning of Saba as Alpha of the Talbourne, as well as continue the romance of Blaize and Astarre, and the healing process that takes place with Tim.
I plan to start it soon, maybe tomorrow.
Hope to hear from you soon!

- Rotramel the Writer

Sweet! I can't wait!

(I haven't found the chance to read your previous works (the first one I read was "Balto: A Forbidden Love", because I was curious to see how you would use the concept of an incestuous love in your stories! (We just love using Saba, don't we? ^__^) Of course that time, I was your inspiration, which surprised me! I'm still very honored that you were so interested and used that concept to make such a heart-wrenching and romantic story!), so hopefully I will check those out!)

I do hope that things get to be better for Balto and Jenna, especially after what just happened . . . . and Saba as leader - that's going to be strange to see (especially with all of the new changes and all). Wow. Good luck on it! I'll be waiting for it!

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All I can say is that I really, really hate Drake now. I would say more but, I don't think this board will allow me to swear. :lol:


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All I can say is that I really, really hate Drake now. I would say more but, I don't think this board will allow me to swear. :lol:

You know, I feel the same way. I mean . . . what could he be thinking? Sure, he's "trying" to uphold the law, but . . . . . I dunno. Maybe it's best that I leave this blank.

Perhaps this will be answered in the next fic? :D

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Words cannot fully express how I felt when reading this, so I'll use simple emotion changes.
1) shock :shock: (Aleu and Shadow)
2) sadness :( (Tim and Tycha)
3) surprise and hope :o (Aleu and Shadow again)
4) total disbelief :shock: (Jenna and Jason)
5) more sadness :( (Tycha and Trina) "By Aniu, must you corrupt everyone!?"
6) depression :( (Jenna and Balto's conversation / Jenna's fate and then Blaize and Astarre)
7) deeper depression :( :( (the General and the wolves)
8 deep, horrible agony :cry: :cry: (Jenna's trial)
9) practically shaking with a mix of despair and rage :( :x (the troops at the cave)
10) awed by a sudden ray of hope :o (Blaize, Astarre and Astarre's father)
11) back to sorrow :( (Tycha in the blizzard)
12) disbelief and more disbelief :o :o (the General, Aleu, and Saba) Incredible portrayal of Aniu's power here! Bravo!!
13) happiness (the General's end and Saba's begining) (I really liked this part, I thought the General's end was kinda funny!)
14) complete and unparralled disbelief, shock, rage, and agony :o :shock: :x :cry: :cry: (the end)

You are the master of emotions, Rotramel. You play with our heart strings, and often break them. You take even the most innocent characters and transform them, corrupt them into something no one would recognize were it not for their name. (Jenna... Why, oh why Jenna??) Every time I think you've given us (the readers) a break, you hit us harder! (Emotionally that is.) Aaaaannnddd.....

Because of your unbelievably emotional and gut-wrenching stories, I declare you General Anthony Rotramel, commander of hearts, leader of stories, and bringer of suspense to this literary forum.

Okay, now, I need to go write something happy... Oh wait, that means I have to start something new. None of my stories will help with this... Gaaa!

May you write as long as you so desire! Rock on.

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Words cannot fully express how I felt when reading this, so I'll use simple emotion changes.
1) shock :shock: (Aleu and Shadow)
2) sadness :( (Tim and Tycha)
3) surprise and hope :o (Aleu and Shadow again)
4) total disbelief :shock: (Jenna and Jason)
5) more sadness :( (Tycha and Trina) "By Aniu, must you corrupt everyone!?"
6) depression :( (Jenna and Balto's conversation / Jenna's fate and then Blaize and Astarre)
7) deeper depression :( :( (the General and the wolves)
8 deep, horrible agony :cry: :cry: (Jenna's trial)
9) practically shaking with a mix of despair and rage :( :x (the troops at the cave)
10) awed by a sudden ray of hope :o (Blaize, Astarre and Astarre's father)
11) back to sorrow :( (Tycha in the blizzard)
12) disbelief and more disbelief :o :o (the General, Aleu, and Saba) Incredible portrayal of Aniu's power here! Bravo!!
13) happiness (the General's end and Saba's begining) (I really liked this part, I thought the General's end was kinda funny!)
14) complete and unparralled disbelief, shock, rage, and agony :o :shock: :x :cry: :cry: (the end)

You are the master of emotions, Rotramel. You play with our heart strings, and often break them. You take even the most innocent characters and transform them, corrupt them into something no one would recognize were it not for their name. (Jenna... Why, oh why Jenna??) Every time I think you've given us (the readers) a break, you hit us harder! (Emotionally that is.) Aaaaannnddd.....

Because of your unbelievably emotional and gut-wrenching stories, I declare you General Anthony Rotramel, commander of hearts, leader of stories, and bringer of suspense to this literary forum.

Okay, now, I need to go write something happy... Oh wait, that means I have to start something new. None of my stories will help with this... Gaaa!

May you write as long as you so desire! Rock on.

"Must...find...happy...!" :wink:
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I couldn't have said it better myself! (because my reviews suck . . . :lol: )

I second that declaration, man.

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I agree with you completely, Aljan!
Drake has become obsessed. Kind of like Javert in Les Miserables, except Drake wonders at his decisions sometimes, whereas Javert does not. Oh, and now, Drake is on my *censored* list. (Time for another cheery condemning...)
Cursed are those who judge with the authority beyond their grasp, for they will be condemned to the final, emotionless judgement that they have placed on so many others.
Oh, and I doom him to life in *censored* too, for what he's done.
Doom, do you hear me?Doom!


Happy thoughts, Lone Wolf, happy thoughts... Love, peace, children... That's better. Now leave, before you read it again.
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Are you still here...?!
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LoneWolf isn't in a band camp... he lives in a mental ward camp. :lol:

I still hate Drake now... better watch out or he might find a White Dragon behind him... :wink:


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It was sad, suspenseful, and happy at times. I did get kind of confused when Jason's name turned into James a couple of times, but it was perfect otherwise.


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I third that declaration Lone Wolf. And I second your feelings on Drake. Very well put.


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Greetings!
Glad to see you enjoyed the ending of this story.
I want to know something... How many of you thought that I was really going to kill Aleu, not once, but twice in this story?
I can understand your newfound hatred of Drake, but I ask you this...
What would you have done different in his position?
The law IS the law after all, and a judge can't make exceptions based on his relationship with the accused, indeed can't even let this enter into his mind.
Don't worry though, Drake is about to undergo a change, Balto is going to orchestrate a series of events that will let Drake know exactly how Jenna felt, and maybe then he will understand.
I have a title for my next Fic, it will be #23, "Balto: Though We Be Apart".
This will continue a bit about the story lines from where "...Must Come to an End" left off. Of course there's Balto and Jenna's problem to reslove, but also Saba's new job as Alpha, Aleu's new job as a mother and not leading everyone, Tim and Trina, and Blaize and Astarre's continuing relationship.
Should be another good one! I plan to start it either tonight or tomorrow.
I guess that's all I have for now.
Thank you for all the kind reviews, and have a great day!

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