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PostPosted: Sun May 07, 2006 4:21 pm 
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Newcomer

Rated PG-13 for mild language, violence, and mild sexual content.
Description: A new dog has moved into Nome. At first everyone just sees him as a wise talking street smart New Yorker. Then the kitten Melvin, comes across the Mutt’s evil plan. Now it’s up to Balto and the gang to stop him before it’s to late.
Claimer: Melvin, Bity, Jack, Dodger, Anna, Dauline, Ruby, Jenny, Elise, Tyler, Jordan, Ava, Flow, and James are © to Frightfull
Disclaimer: Balto, Jenna, Kodi, Dingo, Saba, Steele, Dixie, Sylvia, Dusty, Ralph, Star, Kaltag, Nikki, Rosie, Doc, Boris, Aniu, Dipsy, and Mel are © to Universal

Part one: The Arrival

It all started on a beautiful Tuesday morning in June 6 1926 (6-6-26). Balto was resting on his home the wreaked boat, When Boris ran up the ramp of the worn out ship.
“Balto wake up!” He seized The wolf dog shaking him violently till he opened his eyes.
“What is it Boris?” The hybrid lifted his head half heartedly. Obviously he did not care to much.
“A new dog in Nome.” Boris announced.
“Oh really?”
“Yup.” In Nome not a lot of new dogs moved in, so when one did it was the talk of the town.
“well Dixie, and Sylvia are happy.” Balto yawned.
“ Why?”
“Well a new dog means new things to gossip about.” Balto explained. Boris’ facial expression told Balto he understood.
“I see.” Boris sat down.
“Hay dad.” Dingo the young hybrid and son of Balto jumped on the boat.
“Hay Dingo.” Balto smiled at his son.
“Dad you’ve got to meet this new dog.”
“I do?” Balto sat up. “Why?”
“Man he’s strange!” Dingo exclaimed. “He say’s he’s from New York wherever that is, and he wise cracks a lot.”
“What’s his name?” Balto was suddenly curious.
“Bity, and his friend is this other mutt called Jack.” Dingo replied. Balto nodded.
“New York huh?”
“Yup.”
“I see.” Balto got up. “I need to see this dog for myself.” Balto couldn’t believe this dog sounded so rude. He walked off the ramp fallowed by Dingo and on Dingo’s back was Boris.

“Hay Ralph!” Dusty the petit husky dogged the large husky’s paw. “Why are you so slow?”
“I’m not slow!” The husky shouted. He turned and swiped at a light built hybrid. His name was Kodi.
“She’s got a point Ralphie boy.” Kodi ducked avoiding the huge paw.
“She does not!” exclaimed the husky whose name happened to be Ralph. All the running had tired the poor husky out. He dropped down into the soft and cool sand.
“Told you he wouldn’t make it past nine minutes.” Kodi muttered. Dusty giggled.
“What so funny sweet heart?” The dogs turned to face a strange looking mutt. He was a terrier looking dog with a black large spot on his back. Gray fur covered his face except his muzzle which was white. His front paws were gray as well. Around his neck he wore a light blue bandana.
“Who are you?” asked Ralph.
“The true question is who are you fatty?” The mutt replied, then decided to answer Ralph’s question.
“Names Bity.”
“Well mine’s Ralph not Fatty.” Ralph shot back.
“I see, and whose the little doll, and the jack *** over there?” Bity inquired. Kodi growled under his breath.
“My names Dusty, and that’s Kodi.” Dusty spoke up.
“Kodi, you’re one of those butt ugly wolf dogs aren’t you?” Bity asked. Kodi growled even louder.
“Yes.”
“Well then I’ve got every one’s names, Fatty, Dusty, and Hybrid.” Bity replied. He looked at Dusty and gave a faulty smile.
“Nice meeting you.” with that he spun around and ran off, leaving the three canines alone to ponder his rude behavior.




In part 2: Balto will meet Bity. Jack and Dodger will be introduced. Saba and Kodi discover a kitten. And more!

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PostPosted: Sun May 07, 2006 8:15 pm 
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I like your style keep it up!

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Hybrid Misfit wrote:
I like your style keep it up!

Thanks. I'm not much of a writer,but I like to try.

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PostPosted: Sat Sep 02, 2006 8:15 am 
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IT WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO AWSSSSSSSSSOOOOOOMMMMMMEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :shock:


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That was what do say um yeah that was totaly out of the lost, and found COOL! Like the story :D . Keep up the work!

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very good are you going to put it on the sit
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