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pleaseleave a review these are myh first ever poems there based on my fan character Storm and his feeling towards his Dad Balto

This ones called: Be My Father, Not My Hero

You don't have to be My Hero...
Can't you just be there?
Or don't you care?
You dont have to be Balto....
You just have to be You...
So take away the Hero
Just for me....
And show me you care...
Because your never there
I can't remember when you last said my name
I cant remember when you trusted me...
Like you , I Have dreams
Can You belive in me?
No matter what happens youll always be my Hero..
But can't I see the real you?
Or will I never know
What you think of me
Can't you see?
I don't need you to be a winner
You'll always be the best
So give the act a rest..
And just look at me...
Just once..thats all I ask
So When tears roll down my face
And you see me and walk over...
Don't Be My Hero...Be My Father

and this is called: In your eyes

When I think of what weve been through...
And what you said to me..
It doesnt add up, I cant find the answer..
The days we spent together..seems far away..
And day by day I fade away into the darkness
And when Ilook at you, you turn away
Why can't you see?
What your doing to me?
I don't need a Hero..
I need a father....
I dont want this end
So try to understand..
Your my hero, that will never change..
But I need my father..not my Hero..
I need a shoulder to cry on..
Someone to cath me...
When I fall...
So can't you see?
What your doing to me....
Please Oh Please
Won't you hold me in your arms...
I need a Father not a Hero
I need a hug not a smile
I need my Father, Not My Leader..
Do you see me as a burden?
Can you feel my misery?
So before I die
Call me by my name..
Please Oh Please Dad
Just once,just once
Can you tell me...you care......

These poems are similar to the lyricks of "You don't have to be a hero" from Balto 3. Did you copy?