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Description : this is going to be a series of stories based on my wolfs rain character Kira and about her relationship with Toboe, fights with Tsume and her fight with darcia after he almost murders one of the other wolves, ( i wont say who!)

WARNING: rated PG may go up in later chapters because of violence AND contains mager spoilers for those who havent seen wolfs rain.

without further ado chapter one.......

Gravity P1: new generation

Ch 1 : Tsume sulks

Kiba, Tsume and Toboe sat behind a large bolder, Tsume was asleep, Kiba lay wide awake with Cheza’s head resting on his back as she slept peacefully, and, Toboe sat alert waiting for Hige,

“He’s taking ages! Do you think something’s happened, maybe darcia caught him, but then again, maybe he could be lying at the bottom of a ditch bleeding to death after a vicious attack by rogue wolves!” toboe whined,

“Don’t talk like that!” snapped Kiba, but taking care not to be to loud.

A brown wolf came around the corner sniffing the ground; she looked up to see Toboe’s huge face hurtle towards her.

“Oh Hige, your alive!!” he panted leaping around the fallen wolf

“Get away from me, idiot! You nearly broke my neck!” said the she – wolf in annoyance,

Toboe’s happy look became a horrified one as Tsume crept up behind him and screamed in his ear,

“That’s not hige!!!! Look what you did!!!” he snarled as Cheza groaned
Tsume was just about to kick Toboe (he was in human form) when the female leapt, grabbed his arm, drew blood and hit the floor landing on her feet,

“your not the only experienced fighters here!” cooed the she wolf mockingly, then began to laugh when she saw toboe rolling around the floor giggling.

“Hi, I’m Kira, Hige’s daughter,” she said simply

the small pack gasped mouths gaping,

“How come your not chubby then?” snickered Tsume, the she wolf was on him in an instant,

“if you insult my family again, you might find it’s the last thing you’ll do, coz you’ll be kibble before you can yelp for help!” she smirked when she saw Tsume glare, walk off and sit in the corner muttering to himself.

Toboe saw his chance, "HAHAHA! TSume was beat by a giiiirl!!!" he chanted,

"SHUDDUP!" shouted TSume glaring at them all but blushing at the same time,

this just made everyone laugh harder,

"I SAID SHUDDUP!" he said baring his fangs just as Hige arrived

"Whats so funny?" he asked then turned white as a sheet when he saw kira

"KIRA!!" he shouted

"DAD!!" shouted kira running, leaping, knocking him over and licking him.

wuhuhuhuuuuu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (blows nose)
why wont anybody comment!
am i that bad at storys!!!!

Reasons what I can type in:
-Too lazy for it
-No interest
-Too boring


Those are the few things (You can't steal the tittle of mine!)

There wasn't much of a plot to the fanfic story,and try to be a little bit more patient,someone would've commented.

Oh for goodness sake!
I only asked, besides, ive only wrote chapter one, so i dont see how you could judge it so soon!

Come on, everyone! Don't be so rude and naive! It's not bad, it just needs some body to it, some flare maybe.

Heh same I have wished for few of my stories never getting one so I deleted it ^^ no mind

i am not stealing!!!!!

I never intended to be rude or offensive,it is a pretty good fanfic.

sorry to go off toppic, but pirrka, is that supossed to be a gun pointing at aleu in your avi?

what? ohh my Avi (oh and you tried to steal the tittle of worst writer from me^^) Yeah it is what it means in my Avi

okay!