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Here is the first section of my latest fanfic, i need to know what you guys think before i go further, hope you like it.
The sun was rising over Nome and the mountains cast endless shadows upon the little town. The trees sat on the mountains feeding off of the sunlight which was making it's way up the mountains. A wolf named Ukara lived in a den just beyond the peak of the mountain. She was sleeping when a howling went up over the snow.
She ignored it ,she heard that howl nearly every morning, but soon she decided that she had better go and feed off of an animal nearby, she looked everywhere but she couldn't find an animal anywhere. She finally decided that she had to go into the town to find food in the bins. She carefully made her way towards the little town of Nome, she would walk a few yards then she would lift her head, sniff the air for danger and carry on walking. She continued this pattern until she finally entered the town, the sun was now high in the sky and shining straight down on her, but she wasn't concerened about that she was looking for an alleyway.
Eventually she found one and she began to feed out of the bins, suddenly a twig snapped over in the darkest corner of the alley. A massive dog of some sort crept out, with him came two other scruffey dogs. Before Ukara could say anything she was surrounded, and the dogs were chatting.
"What do we do now Kinae"
"We kill her of course"
"But why she means us no harm"
"She will make a good meal"
and the biggest dog began to advance on Ukara, Ukara was stuck there was nothing she could do, she shut her eyes and braced herself for death.
What do you guys think so far
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