Post subject: What do you think of this storyline?
Posted: Mon Jul 30, 2012 10:18 am
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I was thinking of writing a fan fic about a different version of simbas pride, where instead of kovu being the only friend of kiara, tojo and tama have son (yes i know tojo and tama arent in the movies but its just an idea) and kiara is friends with him too and he developes a crush on her when they are older but kiara is interested in kovu and so he gets jealous and has a hatred towards kovu.
Also I was thinking of making kovu not being such a "perfect" guy and cheats on kiara with another lioness in the pride and kills her because she tries to tell kiara.
Tojo and tamas son knew what happened and tried to tell kiara but she wouldnt believe him...................
and Im going to make nuka have a bigger part in the story, he doesn't die.
Post subject: Re: What do you think of this storyline?
Posted: Wed Jan 30, 2013 10:38 am
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I like the idea and if you'd write the fan fic then I'd totally read it but it's not really a Lion King styled storyline. Cheating just doesn't fit in (?) . But it's your storyline and you decide.
I like your idea of Kovu not being so perfect. I always thought his overnight complete change of character was a bit strange, and since betrothal seems to be a major thing in the Lion world, I would assume Zira might have even betrothed Kovu to a lioness. (I've actually heard rumors that Vitani was originally his future Queen). If you were to write it I would read it! ^^
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