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 Post subject: Critique plz. Have I improved?
PostPosted: Thu Sep 22, 2011 2:41 pm 
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Hello. I realize that 'Improvement' topics had spread all over the Balto Fan Art board, butttt I kinda realized nobody comments the improvements in the topic of Penny's, so I decided to make another topic x3

Here is one of my oldest drawings that I made when I was about seven. I cringe just by looking at it because there's no such a thing as anatomy, perspective or proportions in there. *shudders*

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(I apologize for the poor quality, my hands are too shaky to hold a camera)

Then there is this slightly newer but not much drawing I made of a character I used to own but don't anymore, Wenolla. I was about 10 or so when I made this, maybe even 11. I dunno.

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And this is one of my newest sketches, a sketch of a fox. Made about a week ago.

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I realize I have improved, but how much? And please, critique my current drawing. I want to improve even more. I'll also link to my gallery so you can see a wider variety of my pictures so you'll pick up the mistakes I do better: http://www.animationsource.org/balto/en ... display=18

Thanks and please stop by to critque :3


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PostPosted: Thu Sep 22, 2011 7:35 pm 
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Wow! You've improved quite a lot from you're starting point!

You're current picture shows you've got a really great grasp on anatomy and i think you've got a real good style as well! :3

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PostPosted: Thu Sep 22, 2011 11:06 pm 
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xWolfPrincex - Yay! Still, I realize that even if I have a pretty strong grasp on anatomy, are there any flaws that you have noticed so I could improve? :D
I'm probably going to update this with more pictures a little later :3


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PostPosted: Fri Sep 23, 2011 5:52 am 
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Wow!! This is amazing! Yes you improved a lot! Keep That awesome work ;)


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PostPosted: Wed Apr 25, 2012 10:28 am 
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Thank you Mini~

Guys, I decided to update this topic, or rather, you can view it as a bump of sorts. Basically I'm beginning to doubt my dog/wolf abilities at the moment since I have only been drawing humans for quite a while. I would love if someone would point out any flaws in my anatomy or really anything since I grew blind to canine anatomy with time and I have a hard time seeing mistakes *sigh*

HELP ME.

Here have a completely new, recent drawing. It's a doodle, yes, but it includes a full body wolf so it's good for comparison.
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 29, 2012 10:12 pm 
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Dude, you've improved dramatically. I absolutely love your style!

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PostPosted: Tue May 01, 2012 1:10 am 
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Moki - Gahh, thank you! :D I'm not very confident about it these days. I'm pretty sure there are some pretty obvious flaws in my last picture but I have trouble pointing them out :I Maybe the head is too big? Helpp!


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Honestly, the anatomy looks great! The only thing I'd be able to point out is that the paws in the back should be at least slightly bigger than the ones in the front. :3

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PostPosted: Thu May 03, 2012 1:14 am 
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You have improved a heap! You have anatomy right {though i don't know that much about anatomy...i just play it lose^^} and i love your realistic style. Your really good at profile wolves, but you need a tiny bit more work on the angle between front on and profile {Does that angle even have a name?}

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