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A story about sled dogs, since I'm so into them XD.


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So close... Stella was so close to her destination.
Her paws slipping on the ice and snow.
Gun shots were heard.
Finally, she let out a pircing howl,
she raced the wind, and bounded off ito the distance.
I'm free
She thought.
I'm really free
She ran and ran until she skidded into a rock.
Her harnes tore off from the team.
She slid down an icy hill, landing on a frozen lake.
The ice busted, and she she drowned.
Drown to death.
She was gone.

I like what you have so far, but you repeated a word, 'The ice busted, and she she drowned.'
Just something I noticed.
But keep writing!

(Rap) Oh yeah da ice bust bust busted and she she she she she she fell-fell-fell fell in oh yeah! Kick it up now ya'll! ( )