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http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/6686/img006yf.jpg
I drew something but it still sucks. If someone could give me some redlines or advides on this image I'd be grateful.

*I konw hands sucks so bad
*I won't draw genitales. This part will be hidden

Two things that stuck out to me:

- The hand that's further away looks like it's twisted in the other direction. I think it's mainly because there's a stray line separating the thumb from the hand, but I think adding a heel to his hand would help. The other hand actually looks pretty good to me.

- You said the genitals were going to be hidden, so is he going to have loincloth or something covering them? If so, this may not apply. I was gonna say his crotch looks a bit saggy, like it should be raised up just a little bit.

Other than those things, it looks really good! ^-^

Thank you^^ I never really care about hands in sketch and that's my bad because later they never want to look good xP