(Aleu&Niju) major WIP/Crits?

Eska · **Posted:** Sun May 08, 2011 7:12 pm

-So in a nutshell it would be fanstaic to see some critisim on this image (before I ink it), and does anyone have any suggestions on how the new homelands (across the ice bridge that forms yearly) should look like?
I'm working with a blank slate here in terms of the background, I'm thinking something more green compared to the old homelands, but that's about it.
Click me for the image!

Troll Berserker · **Posted:** Mon May 09, 2011 3:51 am

I like it, but Niju looks like he have too long neck and I think that aleu should be a little taller too. If you want, I an make some redlines because I'm horrible at explaining xDD

Din77 · **Joined:** Fri Jun 11, 2010 7:29 pm **Posts:** 6

I really do like the picture, Niju looks fine just in the movie hes always hunched over and you dont see him sitting straight up, and i think for aleu make her taller like Sakujo said but also Aleu bottom jaw thinner Hope that helped ^^

Eska · **Posted:** Mon May 09, 2011 6:37 am

Eska wrote:

-So in a nutshell it would be fanstaic to see some critisim on this image (before I ink it), and does anyone have any suggestions on how the new homelands (across the ice bridge that forms yearly) should look like?
I'm working with a blank slate here in terms of the background, I'm thinking something more green compared to the old homelands, but that's about it.
Click me for the image!

Yeah, I think some redlines would be good. I'm afraid I don't see what you mean about the neck, he does have a larger neck, bu it expands into is over exaggerated chest, maybe one I ink t and color it a bit, I'll see what you mean. I did try to make it smaller, but then the rest of his body looked rather odd. As for Aleu, there is a size difference, but maybe I put too much?

@ Din77-I thought Aleu had a larger (as in noticeable) chin, but not nearly as much as Balto's. She doesn't have a chin like Jenna's does she? How much do you think I should shrink it,about?

Troll Berserker · **Posted:** Mon May 09, 2011 6:47 am

Here are some redlines on quick anatomy sketch:

That's what I meant. Even if he's stitting, his body still goes too much down without noticeable difference between neck and chest.

Din77 · **Joined:** Fri Jun 11, 2010 7:29 pm **Posts:** 6

okay so this is what i mean ^^
http://www.sumopaint.com/image/?id=1388061

Eska · **Posted:** Mon May 09, 2011 8:24 am

Sakujo wrote:

Here are some redlines on quick anatomy sketch:

That's what I meant. Even if he's stitting, his body still goes too much down without noticeable difference between neck and chest.

Okay, I think I get it. Are you asking me to follow the redlines? The bluelines would be more realistic, but agian- I'm going for Balto style.
Niju is standing on a ledge, by the way.
I'll try to exaggerate the lines.

As for Din77- I can't see the image. :/

Troll Berserker · **Posted:** Mon May 09, 2011 8:59 am

Blueline was just for me to make a quick anatomy sketch and show how it works xP

Din77 · **Joined:** Fri Jun 11, 2010 7:29 pm **Posts:** 6

Okay try it now ^^

Mighty · **Posted:** Mon May 09, 2011 11:20 am

I'm no good at this kind of stuff, but here. Sorry if this is no help.

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