LionLover2546: You need a plot for this to follow the rules, and it would be smart not to post until others have joined. Double posting is also against the rules.
And you aren't using the correct format for roleplaying either. I would suggest taking a look at some of the roleplaying guides we have here on the site; they're stickied at the top of the General Roleplaying section.
Instead of posting like this;
LionLover2546 wrote:
Delgado & Bear:: They walk ahead of the others. They were lookouts, guards, and Delgado was alpha. He loved his family and would do anything for them.
Shelly & Samantha & Angel:: They walk behind the boys. Mango walks with Samantha. He liked Samantha. He thought she was his mother at first but he soon realized Delgado was his only parent.
You should post it more like this;
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Delgado walked ahead of the others, Bear following closely. Delgado was the alpha, but they both served as lookouts and guards. Delgado loved his family, and would do practically anything for them, alpha or not.
Shelly and Angel walked behind the two males. Samantha followed, with Mango at her side. He rather liked Samantha; he had first thought she was his mother, but soon realized Delgado was the only parent he knew, and instead forged a close bond with the German Shepherd.
Hope that helps some.
