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 Post subject: Our Own Twisted World (Bryna101 and Wölf Päws)
PostPosted: Tue Mar 29, 2011 7:06 pm 
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To Bryna101:
Ok, so what have we got so far? I'm rewriting my piece, obviously XD it sucked. Wanna type everything you have in a reply, then I'll give you my rewritten part (since I'm still working on it)?


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 Post subject: Re: Our Own Twisted World (Bryna101 and Wölf Päws)
PostPosted: Tue Mar 29, 2011 7:13 pm 
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okay so i think this is how i reply XD lemme just get on mahh big pc and ill start typinng!!


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 Post subject: Re: Our Own Twisted World (Bryna101 and Wölf Päws)
PostPosted: Tue Mar 29, 2011 7:22 pm 
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Coolness! Can't wait :3


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 Post subject: Re: Our Own Twisted World (Bryna101 and Wölf Päws)
PostPosted: Tue Mar 29, 2011 7:35 pm 
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Hi. I'm Emily Corynn. if your wondering who i am your not going to get an answer, not because i'm trying to be rude it's just that i dont exactly know who i am yet. I can tell you that i'm a sixteen year old girl, who likes skateboarding, guys who play guitar and the simpler things in life. Im also a giant kltuz, i thought as i was carrying a box labeled "Emmi's stuff" to the moving van out front. My shoe hit a rock on the stone path and i fell forward letting out a small yelp as i did so. "Whoa there Emmi! Better watch your step!" my dad exclaimed as he caught me. "I will." i muttered grumpily. I then proceeded to trip again and fall on the stone path scraping my jeans. "MY BABY!!!!" my mom shouted as she dropped a box of books and fran over to me. "Are you okay? Where does it hurt?" she questioned staring at me. "I'm FINE mom." i muttered trying to shurg her off. i got up and dusted myself off. "KLUTZ!" my dad coughed winking at my mom as they walked inside to pick up more boxes. i grabbed my box and threw it into the truck and then stomped up to my room to grab the last box. i stood there for a moment holding the box. just a few days ago it was so full with my posters, letters from seth, picture of us in every stage of life and all my other stuff. i sighed and walked out, but turned back and went to go sit on the window seat. i leaned out the window to hear my parents honking the horn and yelling for me to stop procrastinating and get a move on. i ran back down trying to ignore the fact that now some unknown stranger would be living in my room, with all of my memories not even seeing them. putting their new memories up there and hiding mine beneath the surface. i threw the last box in the back and then reluctantly climbed in after it, then i jumped onto the couch and relaxed. Then the truck started moving. i looked out the giant window on the side and watched my old home, all my memories, my past... fade into the distance. i started rotating my gauges. i had gotten them a couple weeks ago for my birthday. i woke up at ten a.m. to a text from seth saying "HAPPY BIRTHDAY YOU PHYSCOPATH!!! if you look out your indow at 10:30 you'll get a surprise! :)" i hurried and got dressed and made myself look somewhat presentable I threw on a blue tangtop and green half vest with black skinny jeans. then at ten thirty i looked out my window to see seth leaning against his car. i ran out and he gave me a giant birthday hug and told me he wanted to take me somewhere. when we were in the car he


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 Post subject: Re: Our Own Twisted World (Bryna101 and Wölf Päws)
PostPosted: Tue Mar 29, 2011 7:45 pm 
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said "you know how you wanted to get gauges?" i nodded. "Well get ready!" he smiled. i started crying, i dont know why i did but i did. i was really happy but also terrified, and when we got to the store i really freaked out. seth gave me his hands to hold, which was his mistake, and i squeezed so hard his hands turned white and he claims they were numb for an hour. later we went to a photobooth and took tons of weird pictures. i have one of those photostrips as the first page in my photo album. the best part about that day though was when we went back to seths place and watched a movie. i fell asleep half way through but it was fun. my ears were in pain so we put icepacks on them but i was too sleepy to hold them up. so seth took one and put it on his shoulder then he put my head on it. i woke up the next morning on his bed and himin a sleeping bag on the floor.we do that alot after all since we've known each other from birth it wasnt that big of a thing to have a sleepover. later that day my parents told me we were moving. "This is the end of my world." i thought. I just stood there shocked telling them not to joke around like that, when they claimed they werent i ran to my room and cried. i dont know how long i was there, just sobbing, soaking my pillow with tears and eyeliner. i only looked up when my cell phone started vibrating violently on my desk. i stood up and rubbed my eyes then walked over and check it. it was a text from seth. i clicked the open button to see the words, "I have horrible news. meet me by the entrance to the beach in 10 mins :(" "Cant b worse then ive got." i replied. i looked in the mirror, staring at my face. My eyes were puffy, my nose was red, and hair was messed up. i ran a brush through it, threw on some make up


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 Post subject: Re: Our Own Twisted World (Bryna101 and Wölf Päws)
PostPosted: Sun Apr 03, 2011 6:52 pm 
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Arg sorry I'm taking so long! I'll get my parts up ASAP! Thanks for being so patient X3


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