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Kind of a disney style story here!

Plot: The circus is a fantastic place of wonder and excitement. When a pair of twins, Tammy and Taran visit one focusing on fantastic tricks performed by animals and the ring master, Adrian, performing magic for the crowd, they are ecstatic and decide to sneak back later to see the dogs. However, all is not as it seems, the dogs and other animals seem too sad and upset, their eyes too human. They’re discovered by Adrian, who isn’t happy they’ve snuck in and reveals the circus’ horrible secret. Adrian is a warlock who curses people to become the circus’ dogs and soon does the same to the twins.

After being cursed, the twins meet several other victims of the insidious Adrian, including a Golden Retriever named Martha, who was formally a teenager. However, along with Martha and some of Adrian’s other captives, they manage to escape the circus and discover that Adrian’s evil powers are of Native American origin, thus only a native Shaman can undo the curse, there’s a reservation not too far away, and they decide to try. However, Adrian isn’t ready to let his show be shut down so soon and pursues them with animals that he’s enslaved with his magic. Can they reach the Shaman in time to avoid the sinister circus master, or will Adrian silence them forever?

My characters

Tracy
Martha
Adrian
Michael (a German Shepard)

Here are my characters.

Name: Taran
Age: 16
Role: the twin brother
Breed: Greater Swiss Mountain Dog
Appearence: Human and Animal

Name: Joy
Age: 15
Role: one of the circus animals
Breed: Poodle
Appearence: Animal and Human

Name: Sadie
Age: 16
Role: one of the circus animals
Breed: Australian Shepherd
Appearence: Animal and Human

Name: Trey
Age: 17
Role: one of the circus animals
Breed Canaan Dog
Appearence: Animal and Human

And here's my two minoins.

Dasha - Animal
Shane - Animal

It's ok, but the twins become dogs.

Nice otherwise though!

Okay, would you mind if I just switched Taran and Trey's animals?

It can, but it's in the plot humans have only been turned into dogs. Presumibly because he can't control humans like he can animals.

My bios!

Name: Tracy
Age: 16
Role: Twin Sister
Appearance: Human, tall, brown hair, wears a lot of blue. Animal: http://leahreagh200.tripod.com/sitebuil ... _brown.jpg

Name: Martha
Age: 18
Role: Circus Dog
Breed: Golden Retriever
Appearance: Human: Tall, blond hair, blue eyes. Animal: http://falconcrestkennels.com/GoldenRetriever.jpg

Name: Michael
Age: 16
Role: Circus Dog
Breed: Malamute
Appearance: Human: black hair, green eyes, wears black. Animal: http://i721.photobucket.com/albums/ww22 ... -00101.jpg

Name: Adrian
Age: Unknown
Role: Main Villain
Appearance: Tall, average build, wears a white suit with a blue tie, as well as a blue cape with a top hat. However, when he reveals his true nature, it changes from white to black and blue to blood red. He’s a handsome, calculating man.

I changed Taran's animal.

Are we ready to start now?

Yeah, we pretty much start with them arriving at the circus, who should start?

I think you should.

"Alright, Taran, here we are," said Tracy, walking into the circus main area, a large number of people walking in along with them. "Wow, the big top," she said, looking at the huge tent. "First time we've been to a circus, wonder what it will be like."

OOC: Sorry, not much to do with one character introduced.

Ooc:// That's okay. We can build on post length as we go along.

Bic:// Taran walked into the large tent behind his sister, pushing a few people aside so he could stay a few steps behind Tracy. "It can't be much different than we've seen in all the movie," he grumbled, still yet to be impressed by the circus. It wasn't his idea to come, but it Tracy wanted nothing more than to see a circus, he supposed he could sacrifice one day of his life to please her.

"Yeah, maybe..." said Tracy, before the lights went down. "Oh, it's starting!"

A sudden burst of blue smoke appeared in the center of the circus tent, the lights concentrating as the smoke faded to reveal Adrian standing in the center of the circle. “Hello one and all! Welcome to my little circus,” he said, smiling, his voice refined. “We have a wonderful show for you all tonight! Now, please sit down and relax as we turn down the lights and we step into my world! You won’t be disappointed,” he said, smiling as the lights faded.

“Now, just take a step into my world, don’t be shy! I promise you’re in for a big surprise!” Adrian sung, upbeat music starting up as the lights followed him. “Now stay in your seats, you’re in for quite the treat. Relax, sit back and watch. You’ll love this, I have a hunch!” he sung, “In this world, magic is real, that much you can be sure! Quiet now, just let me have the floor,” he sung, taking out some seeds and throwing them high into the air were they exploded into glowing spots of multiple colors. The audience began to applaud but he raised his hand to stop them “Now don’t just applaud just yet, take a look at what’s inside my hat!” he sung, taking his hat out and a huge number of doves flying out and through a hole in the roof, earning a huge applause. “In this circus tonight, we’ll leave you mesmerized, now watch as I vanish before your very eyes.” He spun around, vanishing into a blue smoke.
“Now that you’ve stepped into my world, don‘t be shy. Little things here can hold a huge surprise!” sung Adrian, reappearing on the roof a small clown car as it drove up. “Now I know what you’re expecting, but I’ll have you second guessing. For in this tiny space are the real stars of this presentation! Now please clap without hesitation, ignore this humble mage as the real leads take the stage!” he sung, the doors opening and a great number of dogs dressed up in circus attire coming out and bowing, though the most intense spotlight remained on Adrian.
“Now you’ve stepped into my world, don’t be shy, but in this world you must always be ready for a surprise!” Adrian sung, vanishing in a blast of blue smoke and reappearing in the center ring. “Things you once thought were true, in here are just not the case! For you see in this circus, I’m indeed the only human face!” he sung, running his hand in front of his face, smiling dramatically, making sure he was the center of attention as the dogs ran around with ribbons of all sorts of colors in a great display, but primarily coordinated to direct attention to Adrian. “In this world, you must be prepared for anything! Now hang on as I take you under my wing!” he sung excitedly, throwing out his arms as fireworks exploded behind him, taking the shape of wings, but if one looked closely, they’d see they were shaped like bat wings. “As you step into my world with me, don’t be shy, sit back one and all as we show you why. You‘re in my world now, don‘t be shy, let‘s have fun and keep your moods high! Come on now take a seat, this is a time that can‘t be beat! Stay in my world awhile, don‘t be shy! I promise you‘re in for a big surprise!” he sung, ending as fireworks shot from his hands as he held out the last note, exploding into the air, earning a great applause. He laughed. “That’ll get them hooked,” he whispered with a smirk as the lights went out.

OOC: I don't know if this counts as a Villain Song, as he's not particularally villainous at the moment, though I tried to make him look egontistical, what do you think?

Ooc:// He definately has an ego. XD

Bic:// Taran found himself staring in deep concentration at the whole set-up, nearly jumping out of his seat when the lights suddenly went out. He clapped pitifully compared at the wonder he was feeling inside, but the rest of the crowd was exploding with cheer until they went quiet in expectation to what Adrian had planned next. "This might not be as bad as I thought it would be," Taran whispered to his sister.

OOC: Yeah, he does. But just wait for the dark reprise later.

Tracy had appluaded heavily for Adrian's act. "That was awesome! If the rest of the show is as good as that, this'll be amazing!"

The lights came back on and Martha stood ready on a tightrope above the ring. "Ladies and gentleman! This lovely creature is Martha, she will perform the pearlious tightrope for you, please be quiet, she needs to concentrait," he said. "But oh, this isn't your average tightrope walk, my friends, she will walk through these flaming hoops!" he announced, snapping his fingers and making several flamming hoops incircling the tightrope to appear. "Now please, silence.

Martha slowly walked across the tightrope carefully, the fire making her sweat heavily as she walked through the hoops. She nearly slipped twice near the end but finally made it to the other side, panting but then bowed, earning a large applause.