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Oh My Feeling
By Kodi husky

Rating: PG-13 For sibling love
Description: Saba has secret feelings for one of her fellow brothers.
Characters: Kodi, Saba, Shadow

P.S. this takes place after wolf Quest but before wings of change

Prolouge
Saba sat on the beach. her eyes closed. she took deep breaths enjoying every last second of it, But in her mind pictures of her secret love danced around. many a time she had tried to stop them, but they just kept coming.

"Saba you ok?" a soft voice startled Saba. she swirved around to see a pure black retriever. Staring at her.

"Yea Shadow I was just thinking that's all. Shadow sat by her friend and joined her in staring at the sea.

"Shadow!" A young girl with blond hair waved her hand and called once more.
"Shadow!" Shadow stood up
"Gotta go!" she called. as the young retriever walked away she smiled and giggled to herslef.
"Saba don't think I know who your thinking about."
Saba shook her head Shadow was just pulling her leg. then the visions swooped like a eagle back into her brain,and she uttered the name of her secret love.
"Kodi"

This is my first fan fic so I know it's not perfect I should get the first chapter up soon. please R&R

Sounds good so far. Keep it up!

Balto123

Hmm, short, sweet and simple. I think it's a good start! Is this the idea that you were telling me about? I like it!

Keep it up! The only way you can improve on your writing is to write! The more you write, the better it will get!

^___^ Good luck with the next part!

Just....

Well I thought that only one is enough now two Ouh poor me...

Looks like same what Juuchan write but bit diffrent... So I guess I can say same words, but for me 'Family(I don't say what I say in Finnish)' ain't so interesting in here

Chapter 1: Puppy games
Saba laughed .
“Kodi! Get of
f me you mangy mutt!”
“Wolfdog!” Yipped Kodi he was currently sitting on her and up till a moment was pretending not to know it.
“Oh you!” she yelped trying to wiggle out from under him.
“Huh?” asked Kodi
“Oh get of me.” SHE Yelped again.
“What ever.” Kodi reluctantly got off Saba .
“Where to old for this.” Saba barked
“ I don’t think so.” yelled Kodi as he jumped back on her. The two struggled in the sand. Finally Kodi pinned Saba down on her belly.
“OK you win.” shouted Saba howling with laughter.
“Ha, Ha! I win!” Screeched Kodi also letting out peels of laughter. He again got off her and let her stand up. She shook off the sand in her fur. As she turned to face Kodi, but as she did this she found herself nose to nose with her brother. Saba blushed she was sure that the cream colored fur on her face was as red as the red on the rest of her body. Kodi pulled away.
“Sorry about that.” she said softly and in a cowardly voice.
“ Oh now don’t get all wishy-washy on me.” Kodi yelled. Then he howled with laughter and literally it sounded like a wolf trying to howl and laugh at the same time, and while he gave such a wild laugh Saba sighed
“Don’t you get it?” she thought .
“You ok?” asked Kodi
“yea I’m fine.” she lied
…….To be continued

Ok first chapter big wheight taken off my shoulders! thanks for the R&R guys!

Yep sounds good if it is same kind of like Juuchans *pushes Juuchan* would be interesting when it would be same *smirks* still it sounds like it but diffrent way who knows, but good after all

Yea I know I sound alot like Juuchan but it get diffrent don't worry
Ok Now we get to here Kodi side of the story!

Chapter 2 : Surprise

“Saba come on we can play around!” Kodi joked
“ Shadow is older than you and she still plays like a eight week old pup!”
“Shadow is immature!” Saba announced
“Yea well so are you!” Kodi declared. His sister was so annoying ! Why couldn’t she puppy play like she used to? He rolled his eye’s.
“Your so headstrong you know!” yipped Saba as Kodi bit her ear.
“Ha let’s face it Alue will always have that title.” giggled Kodi . Then he bit her leg pulling her down and laughed as she yelped.
“Ouch that hurt!” she cried tears welling up. Kodi stopped laughing . He did not mean to hurt her! Just to play around. He trotted over to her.
“You ok!” he asked licking the salty tears that ran down her check.
“NO! I am NOT!” Saba screamed. Kodi took a step back
“Saba for a hurt leg you are over reacting.” he blurted out.
“It’s not that Kodi it’s something else!” she bawled. Kodi nuzzled Saba.
“ What’s wrong ?…..If someone hurt you ….. I will kill them.” He growled.
“Kodi it’s you!” she screamed.
“WHAT?” Yelped Kodi
“I think I’m in love with you!” Saba screeched . Kodi backed up a few feet this time. For if his sister liked him he surely did not like her, at least not like that!

To be continued….

Ok Now were getting someware yea!!!!!!!!

You've done a fantastic job so far,I hope to chapter 3 soon.

OK this was wChapter 3: getting though.

As all this was taking place Shadow was watching from a mountain not to far. When she saw Kodi’s worried expression she knew what happened. Of course Shadow was not going to but in she sat at the edge of the mountain. And sighed. Closing her eyes she felt something tug at her heart. She took a deep breath and sang
“I have a picture. Hangs on my wall”
“A image of you and of me and were laughing were loving it all.”
“But look at our life now were tattered and torn.”

Kodi heard Shadow’s song he knew what he had to do he too began to sing.

“Were fussing and fighting. were delighting in tears that we cry until dawn.”

All three canines Kodi, Saba, and Shadow finished.

“Hold me now“. ”Warm my heart”
“Stay with me!” “Let the loving start.”

Saba sighed Kodi fidgeted Shadow shook her head. Kodi finished it.

“I hate you Saba” He yelled turned tail and ran. Saba was left alone tears flowing so fast that she could make a river with them. Shadow sighed.

“You know Kodi you can’t run forever”
One of these day’s you will have to face the truth.” she turned to go comfort Saba.

The End?

Saba: Alicia Key’s
Kodi: Sean Austin
Shadow: Jodi Benson

Songs

Opening song: Lighting crashes : By Live
Shadow’s song: Hold me now: Thomson Twins
Closing Song: Wake me up when September ends: By Greenday

Why Me?

Commercial
Dingo sat on the step snoozing when Shadow ran down the street.
SHADOW: “Dingo I Can’t find Kodi!”
DINGO: “So he’s always gone.”
SHADOW: Yea Dingo I Know but this time I think he’s GONE! As in (Gulps) DEAD!
DINGO: Oh dear!
SHADOW: Romeo and Juliet case
DINGO: Huh?
SHADOW: Dingo I think Saba was pregnant and Kodi was the father.
DINGO: Ok now that just freaked me out. What do mean WAS?
SHADOW: I think they killed each other to keep it a secret.
DINGO: (Throws up.) Dude UKKKK! Come on let’s go find there bodies or them.
SHADOW: Let’s get going Onward always onward.

COMING SOON!

OH my! Now Dingo knows the secret!



weried chapter. but i hope you like it. Don't worry This will be continued!

errhhh ok that was weird I drop on the middle way of it, now I'm confused badly....

Whoah...
Didn't see that coming.
Poor Saba. I hope Kodi comes to his senses.

Write more! NOW!

That was . . . . differently . . . different.

I was surprised by that one. Nice. Please tell me there's more to this!

Was that commerical a joke... because it was a confusing joke...