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RGC
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Post subject: Idea for a story  Posted: Tue Oct 26, 2010 1:33 am |
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My TaleSpin story would be about Baloo and Kit get stuck in the middle of the ocean when the Sea Duck's engines mysteriously busted up. They quickly notice glowing eyes in the water. But turns out it was a submarine. And it belongs to Captain Memo.
I was inspired by Jules Verne's classic sea tale "20,000 Leagues Under the Sea".
I called it "Terror at 1,000 Leagues" or "Fathoms Below" for short.
I don't know it will fit in the Virtual Season project.
Last edited by RGC on Tue Oct 26, 2010 4:39 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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JerRocks2day
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Post subject: Re: Idea for a story Posted: Tue Oct 26, 2010 6:01 am |
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Hmmm...it's a start. Although there's room for improvement.
Question is, who does the submarine belong to?
Why are they in the middle of the ocean?
A plot like this would kinda fit as long as it gets more detail.
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Godzillawolf
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Post subject: Re: Idea for a story Posted: Tue Oct 26, 2010 6:03 am |
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It's defiently a good start, but you need to hammer out the details. It has promise, most certainly, it just needs more contruction.
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RGC
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Post subject: Re: Idea for a story Posted: Tue Oct 26, 2010 4:37 pm |
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I'm still writing it and I will improve the story to make more sense.
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