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PostPosted: Thu Jan 05, 2006 4:12 pm 
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i wrote a story about balto's puphood, i know its short but i couldnt be bothered to write anything else, without further ado, the story......

Balto: an outcast from the beginning

A wolf pup sat at the top of the hill outside his cave waiting for his father’s return.
His name was Balto, he was a wolf-dog, his mother the beautiful white wolf Aniu had had pups with a husky named nick.
They had had two pups, himself and his sister, kira.at that moment nick emerged from behind the hill with a link of sausages around his neck,
“Everybody dig in!” he shouted as the two pups began to tear the meat up,
“Hi Nick!” said aniu emerging and nuzzling him.
Later she to ok him to one side and asked,
“Where have you been getting all this food, I was out earlier and couldn’t find anything, have you been stealing it?
“Um….well……um…yeah from the butcher in the town” he admitted
“You stole it?” she asked again in disbelief, just then a shot was heard and nick fell to the ground,
“Nick!” screamed Aniu,
“Get the pups and Go!” he whispered, but aniu wouldn’t leave him, the pups made a run for it and with a little persuading so did she.
The butcher aimed but missed, he aimed again but hit his target.
Aniu fell to the ground and the pups leapt into the long grass.
Satisfied the butcher left the poor animals.
Balto came out of the long grass, kira was long gone, she had run away ages ago.
He crept over to his mothers body and realised she was still alive she had only been shot in the back leg!
She awoke to find balto staring down at her,
“oh Balto your safe, Thank goodness”
he helped her up and she carried him into town,
“Now Balto I must leave you here, remember, do not let the other dogs push you around, you are gifted and don’t let them make you think otherwise!”
“I love you child, maybe we’ll meet again someday,” with these last words she dropped to the ground.
balto howled in sorrow then left to explore.
Balto wandered around town exploring until he bumped into a black and white malamute,
“Watch it mutt!” he snapped,
“You bashed me as well!”,
“Do you have any idea who you are talking to?! Nikki, Kaltag, Star, get him!” three dogs chased balto out of the town, as he was running he bumped into a Russian goose,
“Hey watch where you are going dog!”
Balto began to cry
“I’m sorry for yelling, let me introduce myself, I’m Boris, who are you?
“I’m Balto, Nice to meet you”

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 05, 2006 5:03 pm 
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Why this sounds so familiary? :lol:

Yeah I have read many Balto fanfics what are just like same kind...I don't know but You should try to get some kind of other, this sounds JUST like B678's fanfic :P

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please no one say i'm copying of someone else becaus i'm not.
if anyone says i am copying i shall be anoyyed! :evil: :x

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kira-wolf wrote:
please no one say i'm copying of someone else becaus i'm not.
if anyone says i am copying i shall be anoyyed! :evil: :x


I'm not saying that ya Copy I just say that it is same kind of one....

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Feel like I've read this before. Have you posted it anywhere else. Also, great story.


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