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Post subject: Warriors: Rise of New Fire (Me and Anaquine!) Posted: Thu Sep 02, 2010 3:51 am |
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Most of this RP will be played in ThunderClan just like in Erin Hunters Warriors series. But I'm also including clan descriptions for when they're needed.  It's been many moons since the four great clans moved from the old forest to the lake. Firestar, the great ThunderClan leader has passed into the paws of StarClan and his deputy Brambleclaw has taken on the leadership role as Bramblestar. Peace reigned throughout the entire forest, with the occasional scuffle between border patrols and prey. All was normal through the clans. Kits were born and raised to be apprentices, than into the Warrior Code became Warriors. Until one day... a new threat came to the Clans. Tigerstar reborn. StarClan, being ever prepared, came to Jayfeather with an ominous warning: Tiger prowels the land again. Blood follows cursed paws, Fire will save the Clan again.It wasnt long until Bramblestar received this warning as well... and a new kit was born within ThunderClan. Tigerkit, born of Dovefeather and Oakfur (new cats). Lionblaze, holding the powers of the Stars still in his paws, knows who this kit is and is determined to set him on the right path. But... what he doesnt know, is that young Tigerkit, knows exactly who he is... and is determined to succeed again. ****************************** ((Several moons later)) Bramblestar, having followed what Firestar told him, patrolled the borders one day and came upon a young kittypet kit... no bigger than five moons old. He stared at the strange looking kit, unable to make sense of this. Where was this kits mother? "Bramblestar!" A voice pulled him out of his thoughts. Sandstorm, his predecessors mate, graying with age around her muzzle and ears padded up to him. "All quiet near the Moon-pool bord-- A kit?" She bent forward, nosing the kit. "Not much of one," she told him. "Scrawny little thing..." it was true that Sandstorm still held her biting remarks and sarcastic tongue, but she was more tollerant of kittypets ever since Firestar came and lived within ThunderClan. "Smells like she survived the fire though, her paws are pretty badly burned." Bramblestar turned the kits paws over, revealing the scorch marks. Suddenly, a darkness surrounded his vision, leaving only the kit and himself. These were no ordinary burns, he noticed.
"Very good Bramblestar," Firestar appeared, his fiery pelt silvered slightly with starlight. "This kit is special. She holds Fire in her paws."
"Firestar!" Bramblestar gasped, "What do you mean?"
"She holds Fire in her paws..." he repeated and quickly faded away, his powerful scent the last thing to fade after him."Bramblestar!" A sharp jab in his side brought him back from his vision, Lionblaze, his adopted kin stared at him... with oddly knowing eyes. "We are going to take this kit back to camp and have her looked at by Jayfeather." Lionblaze looked at Sandstorm, who lifted her golden-silver shoulders and dipped her head. "As you wish Bramblestar." What they didnt realize were the golden tabby eyes that were watching them. A certain apprentice With dark deeds in his heart, saw the kittypet. *************************************** OKAY! RULES!!!!
[size=150]1) ABSOLUTELY NO GODMODDING! It's rude and its irritating.
2) Please keep up with your characters. Granted the RP will fluxuate and move to its own accord, but when other clan cats are needed, please refer to your character requests and keep up with them!
3) No extra special powers in other cats UNLESS APPROVED BY ME! It'll depend on how it'll effect the Rp.
4) When in Clan Battles, Please Message ahead if a cat is going to die! It's only polite.
5) A new cat can be introduced in the RP.But HAS TO BE APPROVED! IF NO APPROVAL, NO PLAY!
6) Have fun peeps!
If you've read and agreed to these rules, please post StarClan in the beginning of your character bios!
I also have a request! If you're taking a WARRIOR CHARACTER WITH AN APPRENTICE, PLEASE ALSO PLAY THE APPRENTICE! You dont have to but it's a kind request since there are so many characters ****************************************** Clans ThunderClanLeader:Bramblestar- LunaWolfSpiritDeputy:Lionblaze: LunaWolfSpiritApprentice: Winterpaw Medicine Cat: Jayfeather- AnaquineApprentice- Sunpaw- she cat Warriors:Cloudtail- (open) Sorreltail- She-cat (Open) Apprentice: Rainpaw Whitewing- (Open) Dawnclaw- she-cat (open) Winterstep- she-cat (Open) Silvertail- she-cat (Open) Rosethorn- (Open) Oakfur (open) Clawfoot (open) Stormfang (open) Apprentice: Tigerpaw Sunspots- she-cat AnaquineApprentice: Featherpaw- she-cat Queens:Dawnfeather- Mother to: Tigerpaw and Rainpaw Talonclaw- Expecting kits- Mate: Clawfoot Apprentices:Rainpaw- (open) Winterpaw- LunaWolfSpiritFeatherpaw- she-cat AnaquineTigerpaw-(open) Scorchpaw- she-cat LunaWolfSpiritSunpaw- she-cat LunaWolfSpiritElders: (will be played as needed) Squirelflight Berrynose (retired early due to eyesight) Brightheart Leafpool Sandstorm **** WindClanLeader:Onestar (open) Apprentice: Leopardpaw Medicine Cat:Ashfoot- she-cat (open) Apprentice: Dawnpaw ********************* ShadowClan (Played as needed) Leader:Russetstar Medicine Cat:Swifttail ***************** RiverClanLeader:Mistystar (she-cat) Apprentice: Turtlepaw Medicinecat:Frostbreath- she-cat Apprentice: Reedpaw Character Bios! - Code: Select all
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Post subject: Re: Warriors: Rise of New Fire (Me and Anaquine!) Posted: Thu Sep 02, 2010 3:56 am |
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((Again, I'm sorry for the Double and soon to be Tripple posts! I'm putting in my character bios for the sake of referance so we dont have to jump between forums. After this post, I'll be putting up my post from the Open RP and setting it up here.)) StarClan!Name: Scorchpaw Gender: Female Clan: ThunderClan Rank: ApprenticeColors/Picture/description: Breif history: Scorchpaw doesnt really remember much from her kittypet life since the fire. She remembers her housefolk home catching fire and running away to escape. She remembers her parents Rose and Thimble, but little else... she also receives dreams from StarClan Markings: Scorched paws (as her name states) from running on burning wood when she was trying to esccape. Crush: She hates to admit it, but she has a crush on Rainpaw. She's not use to the clan yet and she's determined to prove herself. Even to Rainpaw. Name: Bramblestar Clan: ThunderClan Gender: Male Rank: Leader Colors/Picture/description: Breif history: Bramblestar's life wasnt easy, especially when he was a kit growing up with Tigerstar's evil deeds hanging over his head. But with Firestars kind guidence, Bramblestar has risen to become a great and powerful leader. Markings: Tabby markings, normal. Apprentice: Will be Scorchpaw Crush: Squirelflight (still) Name: Jayfeather Clan: ThunderClan Gender: Male Rank: Medicinecat Colors/Picture/description: Breif history: He's half clan, Crowfeather of WindClan (his father) and Leafpool of ThunderClan (ex medicine cat) Markings: Blind blue eyes with the ability to see within cats minds and walk in other cats dreams. Apprentice: Sunpaw Crush: None Name:Sunpaw (named for her golden amber eyes, like suns) Clan:ThunderClan Gender:Female Rank: Medicinecat Apprentice Colors/Picture/description: Breif history: (can include paratage) Sunpaw is also daughter of Whitewing and Cloudtail Markings: Rainlike gray stripes in her white pelt. Crush: None ((Sorry for the double post, but I have another charrie that I'd like to adopt :3)) Name: Winterpaw Clan: ThunderClan Gender Male Rank: Apprentice Colors/Picture/description: Breif history: Born of Rosethorn and Whitewing, Winterpaw has some odd coloring... but he has a true warriors spirit. Nothing could ever shake him... or so he thinks. Markings: Spots on his back that resemble a leopard, otherwise white. Crush: Featherpaw Name: Lionblaze Clan: ThunderClan Gender: Male Rank: Deputy Apprentice: Winterpaw Colors/picture/description: Breif history: Born from a half clan half medicine cat pairing, Leafpool and Crowfeather (SORRY FOR SPOILERS!) Lionblaze was born with the power of the stars in his paws. He stands tall and proud, supporting his adoptive father, his past put behind him. Markings: Red/gold streaks in his fur. Crush: Sunspots
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Post subject: Re: Warriors: Rise of New Fire (Me and Anaquine!) Posted: Thu Sep 02, 2010 3:58 am |
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((I'm kinda pulling strings since this is an RP, so I'm saying about six moons? He's not THAT old. He's still fairly young, but he's not OLD OLD like Elder Old. He's a mature cat))
Bramblestar exchanged a few words with Scorchpaw, seeing that her paws needed some attention, he sent her to do some light work around the camp after getting bandaged up. He sat in his den and called Lionblaze to him to discuss the plans for the WindClan border.
Scorchpaw mewed sourly to herself, tail flicking as she cleaned up old moss and tossed it aside and started spreading new moss for a few apprentices nests. She stood, admiring her work and shook out her fur and went out to the elders den to help out. A bellowing caterwaul from the apprentices den startled her, turning to see Tigerpaw staring inside.
"WHAT HAPPENED TO MY NEST?!" Tigerpaw yowled angrily. HIs tail lashed, in the den for one day and his nest is already gone! Scenting the den, he spotted Scorchpaw, and his eyes flashed angrily, marching up to her.
"Who told you to change my nest?!"
Scorchpaw wrinked her nose, "It stunk worse than a skunk! Whomever used it before you didnt change it when the left. It's not just your nest I changed, Tigerpaw!"
"Kittypet! I can change my own moss!" he flashed his claws at her, but she ducked away from his swipe.
"TIGERPAW!" Stormfang yowled, marching over to him, his broad shoulders hunched and his fur bristling. "Do not attack your denmates! That is not how a warrior behaves! Scorchpaw did as she was told by Bramblestar, who outranks you. For your actions, you can join Featherpaw and take care of the elders. You are confined to camp until further notice. You will not take your fresh kill till the clan is fed first. Is that understood?!"
Tigerpaw hissed to object, but shut his jaws. "Yes Stormfang..."
"Good." Stormfang whipped around, tail lashing behind him. He stopped and looked hard at Scorchpaw, his earlier suspicions about her being a troublemaker not completely pushed away from his mind. But her intentions seemed true... he let it go and nodded to her, heading to the fresh kill pile for his meal.
Scorchpaw couldnt beleive her luck with that one! She breathed a sigh of releif as soon as Tigerpaws back turned on her. "Watch your back, kittypet! I wont forget this." she heard and she turned to go to Jayfeathers den, gathering more moss from his store and headed over to the Elders den.
Spotting Featherpaw, she nodded to her and began cleaning out the old moss.
Brightheart nodded to the apprentices, purring. "Hello young ones, fine day isnt it?"
"Yes Brightheart," Scorchpaw answered her, continuing to work.
"You dont have to be so formal Scorchpaw, you'll adjust well. Firestar did in his time, you will too." The old she-cat turned and groomed her chest. "Featherpaw? I have a tick on my tail that I cant reach, would you mind?"
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Post subject: Re: Warriors: Rise of New Fire (Me and Anaquine!) Posted: Thu Sep 02, 2010 3:12 pm |
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StarClan!
Name: Featherpaw Gender: Female Clan: ThunderClan Rank: Apprentice
Markings: snow bengal pattern with ice blue eyes. her tail still has its early-kit "fluffy-ness" to it, and her tail always looks a tad-bit "poofy". She can tend to be a bit vain when it comes to her good looks, but secretly she's selfconcious about it; she often rolls in a mud puddle before going on hunting patrol or border patrol.
Brief history: Featherpaw is Tigerpaw's sister. Although her brother is rude to her, she is quick to defend him from anyone, even Bramblestar. Despite this, she struggles to escape her brother's shadow, who's a prodogy in warrior techniques, and secretly envies him. She's a bit of a dare-devil (like climbing higher than everyone else in trees, or attempting to catch a raven), but she does this to create a reputation for herself other than "Tigerpaw's sister", even if it results in "Crow-Food" or "Mouse-Brain". She also displays a sharp tounge and looks up to Sandstorm (but lacks the sarcasim). Though she can be scatterbrained, she has surprisingly good common-scense when it matters.
Crush: Winterpaw
Name:Sunspots Clan:ThunderClan Gender:Female Rank: Warrior/Mentor
Markings: black fur with ginger spots between the ears extending to the back of her head, one large splotch on her back, and several other markings of the same color scattered spontaniously over the rest of her body. her eyes are odd-eyed (one blue, one green)
Brief history: Sunspots's mother died in labor, and her father was killed by a badger during a border patrol. Since early kithood, Sunspots knew that she would have to depend on herself, and she was often tormented by the other kits and apprentices due to her odd appearance. The elders and senior warriors were also wary of her due to her looks (thought to be a bad omen; that and her name didn't help). Because of all this, Sunspots has very minute tolerance for natural "beauties" like Featherpaw, but she later finds that she has a soft spot for the apperance-self-concious kit, leading her to request mentorship of the kit, and later making her the perfect mentor for Feathertail.
Crush: Eventually Lionblaze.
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Post subject: Re: Warriors: Rise of New Fire (Me and Anaquine!) Posted: Thu Sep 02, 2010 3:14 pm |
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"Of course, Brightheart," mewed Featherpaw. She rehooked the bile-soaked moss with her claw and carefully squeezed out a few droplets with her free paw, but still managed to soak the elder's tail more than she intended. Featherpaw flattened her ears in embarassment, but Brightheart seemed not to notice. To her surprise, three ticks popped off from the bile-soaked tail. Featherpaw swiftly cracked each tick in two with her teeth and spat the sollution onto the bare earth outside the den.
Brightheart exhaled a sigh of relief. "Thank you, Featherpaw. My old tail will finally have some relief!" the elder purred with amusement.
"Umm, could you tell uh-er, Scorchpaw a Firestar story? She hasn't heard any of them," she stammered.
Brightheart's whiskers twitched with amusement. "Oh, for Scorchpaw's sake, eh? Didn't you know that you never become too old for stories?" A cracked purr rumbled deep from the elder's chest.
The apprentice dipped her bashfully and turned to finish her task. One other elder remained; Sandstorm.
"Are you going to run your grubby paws through me or not?" snapped Sandstorm.
Featherpaw dipped her head lower; couldn't she get anything right?
Sandstorm sighed. "Get anymore meek and someone might mistake you for a kittypet, Featherpaw."
At that instant, Tigerpaw entered, forcefully crashing into his sister. Droplets of bile splattered everywhere, some of which landed inside Brightheart's good eye. The elder yowled in agony. "Look what you did, you clumsy mousebrain!"
Anger erupted from deep within Featherpaw and spewed out as words loaded with venom. "Don't be ridiculous! You caused it by crashing into me! Ahrrgh! I don't have time to waist on you! Outa my way!"
She pelted out of of the den, a blinding white streak of fury, blindly heading in the direction of the medicinecat den. "Water!" she shouted. "I need water for Brightheart's eye!"
Too late did she realise that she had left Scorchpaw alone with Tigerpaw, for the elders had moved Brightheart outside the den and slowly towards Jayfeather's den as well.
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Post subject: Re: Warriors: Rise of New Fire (Me and Anaquine!) Posted: Thu Sep 02, 2010 4:36 pm |
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((just playing catch-up till Kittynator posts. I'm going to pause the RP in the Open forums. Reposting!))
Scorchpaw mrrowed in shock, her fur standing on end. Rushing out to go help Brightheart she shouldered forcefully past Tigerpaw to get to her. Seeing Winterpaw, she threw a ball of moss to him.
"go soak it! Quick!"
Winterpaw nodded, catching the moss with excitement shining in his eyes and drated into the medicine den, not taking a moment to respond to the medicine cats. He rushed and glanced at Featherpaw, who looked so distressed he almost stopped what he was doing to go comfort her.
Dawnfeather darted out of the Nurury, snatching the ball of moss from Winterpaw and looked at him sharply for hesitating and quicklytried to clear the mouse bile. "Wrrat happenered?" she meowed sharply past the moss.
"Mouse bile... there was a scuffle in the den, I didnt see who caused what," Brightheart mewed painfully...
Bramblestar shouldered his way through the cats that gathered around, mewing sharply. "Who started this?!"
Tigerpaw immediately poin ted with his tail at Scorchpaw. "She did!" She tripped me with her tail and make me fall into Featherpaw with the mousebile."
Cats turned and looked at Scorchpaw, questioning murmurs immediately making their rounds around the camp. Casting supicious looks at Scorchpaw, others looking skeptical.
Scorchpaw stared at Tigerpaw with wide eyes, struck dumb by his accusation. She didnt know whether to defend herself or submit... the accusing glares all around were assuffocating her.
Bramblestar narrowed his eyes, turning to his apprentice. "Well? Is this true?"
Stormfang shouldered his way through, his own suspicions growing. Twice now these two have been in trouble. "You two were arguing outside the apprentice den not two heartbeats ago."
More murmurs went around the camp.
Scorchpaw ducked slightly under Stormfangs quiet reprimand, ears pulling back. She opened her mouth to protest but Bramblestar lifted his tail for silence.
"Enough. Scorchpaw, I want the truth. Speak up!" He commanded, his amber gaze level, but demanding.
Scorchpaws fur grew hot under his stare. "No, I didnt! I swear Bramblestar! Tigerpaw shouldered his way in and..." she thought fast, Featherpaw was in enough trouble as is. "And I bumped into Featherpaw by accident."
"So. You didnt trip Tigerpaw, but you did run into Featherpaw." Bramblestar repeated.
Scorchpaw nodded, her fur growing hotter, not liking to lie at all.
"A warrior must learn to keep her balance even in the toughest battles. You shall look after Brightheart till she's well. Understood? You will feed, change her bedding and fetch medicine when she requires it, including your camp duties. Understood?"
He flicked his tail after Scorchpaw nodded in agreement and the cast dispursed. He nodded once and returned to his den.
Tigerpaw smirked in triumph, that should keep the kittypet out of his fur for a while!
Scorchpaw shifted her paws, looking thruoughly emberrassed. She looked at the halfblind she-cat and went up to her. "A--aare you in any pain?"
"Of course she's in pain," Dawnfeather snapped. "Go ask Jayfeather for poppyseeds!"
Scorchpaw dipped her head and quickly went across the camp as fast as her paws could carry her.
Winterpaw stared after his denmate, thinking. It was true she was here only for a day... but to cause such a ruckus like that was an unwise choice on how to make friends. He moved over to Featherpaw, "Are you okay?"
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Post subject: Re: Warriors: Rise of New Fire (Me and Anaquine!) Posted: Thu Sep 02, 2010 4:52 pm |
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"Scorchpaw... Why did she do that? It wasn't her fault..." Featherpaw dumbly brushed past Winterpaw, her paws and head feeling lighter than air, her insides like lead.
She pushed past the crowd that had gathered gathered around Brightheart. She caught Tigerpaw's smirk; gravity returned to her body. "Scorchpaw is not the only cat at fault here!" she yowled. "If she is, then I am as well. 'A warrior must learn to keep her balance even in the toughest battles,'" she quoted, icy eyes boring holes into her brother. She turned and defiantly faced her clanmates."If you can blame Scorchpaw for Brightheart's eye because Tigerpaw blundered into her,"
Tigerpaw uttered a low hiss.
"...then you can blame me as well. I was the one who lost my grip on the moss that held the bile. Bramblestar, please allow me to help care for Brightheart," she concluded. Her eyes flashed, uncertanty nagging at the back of her mind for an instant. She quickly brushed it aside; it wasn't fair. She couldn't let Scorchpaw take the blame for what Tigerpaw did.
Featherpaw quickly glanced at Sunspots, hoping that she'd understand.
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Post subject: Re: Warriors: Rise of New Fire (Me and Anaquine!) Posted: Thu Sep 02, 2010 4:57 pm |
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Bramblestar stopped, turning in surprise at the apprentice. He stared at her for a long time before saying, "Very well. That is very mature of you Featherpaw, a mark of a true warriors spirit. You are confined to camp till Brightheart is well enough as well."
Scorchpaw stepped out just in time to hear her mentor and Featherpaw. She felt her fur grow hot for the third time that day. She padded over to her denmate and touched her shoulder with her tail in a quiet appology, going to Brightheart and giving her the seeds.
Tigerpaw hissed softly, 'Well... a bitter blessing,' he named. He saw Stormfangs peircing glare, sensing there was more than what was told. But he lifted his shoulders and padded to the fresh kill pile to take food to the queens.
Winterpaw padded up to Featherpaw and Scorch paw. "I dont get it," he declared after a moment. "What really happened?"
"Tigerpaw's fur is still ruffled over me changing the bedding in the nursury. Whatever his problem is, I'd rather him deal with it quick!" Scorchpaw meowed, ears flattening slightly.
"So he purposly pulled all of this? Granted Tigerpaw's prickily but I doubt he'd try something like that. What do you think Featherpaw? He is your brother anyway..."
"Thankyou for the seeds, apprentices. I should be fine for a whiles rest. Go get your fresh kill," Brightheart dismissed them with a surprising air of command. She went and laid out in a patch of sunlight, shutting her 'good' eye to rest.
Sorreltail padded into teh camp, her apprentice behind her. "Rainpaw, take that to Bramblestar than get ready for patrol after you've had your sunhigh meal," she ordered, taking her mice and vole to the fresh-kill pile. Behind her, Dawnclaw and Winterstep brought in four rabbits and a few mice as well. Though, to their surprise, Stormfang padded over and filled them in.
"So I suppose theyre not going to the Gathering in a few nights?" Sorreltail stated.
Stormfang nodded, "Yes. I've already asked Tigerpaw not to go as well. He's proven himself unworthy for his first visit."
"You were always a hard cat to please Stormfang..." Sorreltail mewed quietly as he walked away.
Scorchpaw padded over and took a small mouse from the pile, not really having an appitite after todays fiasco and sat away from the other apprentices. Noting another apprentice comming into the camp, she nodded once to him and returned to eating, pointedly turning her back to Tigerpaw.
Tigerpaw smirked, still reveling in his victory. 'Two birds with one swipe. All too seasy.' He lifted his shoulders in an uncaring shrug. "Hey Winterpaw! Rainpaw! Want to come eat with me?" he called over
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Post subject: Re: Warriors: Rise of New Fire (Me and Anaquine!) Posted: Thu Sep 02, 2010 9:28 pm |
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Rainpaw glanced at his friend. "Um, no thanks," he quickly replied. "We both have to go on patrol once we're finished eating." He puncuated his point by quickly scarfing down his portion of the vole he and Winterpaw were sharing.
Tigerpaw flattened his ears, lashing his tail angrily. This isn't how it's supposed to be! Last time, I was "Mr. Good-paws" to those fools...
"Chill out, Tigerpaw! What's the matter, fleas on your rump? You know, you've been cranky even for yourself lately," mewed Featherpaw. She placed her shrew next to Scorchpaw; she didn't have much of an appetite either.
"You'd only wish!" he growled lashing an unsheathed claw out towards his sister's face.
She side-stepped, avoiding the attack easily. Featherpaw poked Scorchpaw lightly on the arch of her back with her paw. "Never turn your back to an enemy. It gives them the advantage, and lets them know that you consider them your enemy," she murmured for her den mate's ears alone. She released a dry chuckle; she felt surprisingly powerful after "standing up" to Tigerpaw.
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Post subject: Re: Warriors: Rise of New Fire (Me and Anaquine!) Posted: Fri Sep 03, 2010 5:25 am |
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Scorchpaw looked up than picked up her mouse and turned around grudgingly to face the other cats, pointedly at Tigerpaw. Pulling at her mouse, thinking about the past couple of days. 'Learn from your mistakes...' she thought to herself. But so far, her mistakes couldnt've been helped.
She glanced at Brightheart, checking to make sure she's okay and than around camp.
Winterpaw glanced up at Featherpaw, noting how well she dodged for a first-time apprentice. Of course, Tigerpaw was always tempermental, but the way she moved already hinted she'd be a powerful warrior that no cat would want to meet in battle. Catching Tigerpaws eye, he quickly looked away from the she-cat and returned to the vole he chose, quickly scarfing it down.
Lionblaze stepped out of the leaders den, stretching in the sunlight of greenleaf. He yawned and shook out his fur... Glancing around teh camp he padded over to the warriors den and selected a thrush and sat near Sunspots.
"exciting couple of days, huh?" he asked, trying to make conversation witht he she-cat.
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Post subject: Re: Warriors: Rise of New Fire (Me and Anaquine!) Posted: Fri Sep 03, 2010 9:08 am |
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Sunspots shrugged."I suppose," she replied, trying to hide her tension from the senior warrior, and failing; the fur along her arch fluffed up more than usual.
"Could you give me some advice on how to be a better mentor?" she blurted. Her fur fluffed up more; she forced it to lie flat.*** Featherpaw noticed the glance cast in her direction. "If you're pounced on everyday, eventually you develope reflexes," she said casually.Tigerpaw clicked his tounge irritably.OOC: Sorries about the short post. 
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Post subject: Re: Warriors: Rise of New Fire (Me and Anaquine!) Posted: Fri Sep 03, 2010 9:19 am |
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(('Salright!  )) Winterpaw nodded, finishing his meal and swiped his tongue over his lips and looked around, seeing the patrol gathering... and Sunspots talking to Lionblaze?
"Huh... that's unusual," he commented."A better mentor?" Lionblaze blinked. "You're doing fine, Sunspots. Bramblestar has alot of confidance in you. I remember with my first apprentice I was as nervous as you. You'll fall into sync soon." He got up after finishing his meal and stretched again.
"Well, I'm on ShadowClan patrol. I'll see you around? Maybe when Featherpaw's off punishment, we can take them out to the training hollow."
He smiled kindly and trotted off towards the entrance. "Winterpaw!"Scorchpaw watched the goings on, the next patrol leaving. Her paws itched with anger and envy. If Tigerpaw hadnt been a badger and started the mess with brightheart, Featherpaw would be on her battle training and she would've probably gone... with them?
No... not till her paws heal. Shaking her head, she licked her paw and swiped it over her ear.
She's an apprentice now, it's time she started acting like one!
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Post subject: Re: Warriors: Rise of New Fire (Me and Anaquine!) Posted: Fri Sep 03, 2010 11:34 am |
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Featherpaw nudged Scorchpaw gently. "So how long does Jayfeather say you have until your paws heal?" she inquired. "I'd bet it'll be a relief to have those bandages off for good! Well, at least being confinded in camp les your paws a chance to finish healing."
Tigerpaw sauntered up towards them, his swagger reeking of smug superiority.
"Uhg. What does he want now...?" Featherpaw grumbled.
"Aww, the goody-four paws and kittypet are stuck in camp, bored, with nothing to do..."
"You're stuck here too, remember?" pointed out his sister.
"Maybe, but my punishment will be over long before yours!"
"Your point is...?" came Featherpaw's dry response.
"You'll lag further behind, mousebrains, and I'll become a warrior long before you could ever dream of becoming one."
"Really? Is that all? My my, Tigerpaw, aren't we pathetic today. You know, we're not kits anymore; that sort of thing isn't going to work on me anymore. Come on, Scorchpaw, let's go visit Jayfeather; maybe he'll have news on Brightheart," she said, leading her friend away from the vile apprentice.
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Post subject: Re: Warriors: Rise of New Fire (Me and Anaquine!) Posted: Fri Sep 03, 2010 12:15 pm |
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Scorchpaw nodded, getting up and padded with Featherpaw, only to yowl out as her tail was suddenly yanked back.
"OW!"
Tigerpaw immediately let go. "Woops, sorry about that! Seems I stepped on yourtail," he called loudly, getting attention from the other cats. The corner of his mouth smirked as he watched the kittypet limp away.
"I should put fleas in his nest next time!" Scorchpaw hissed, throughly annoyed.
"I'd go with a tick, personally," Sunpaw answered, whiskers twitching in amusement. "I saw what he did. With the way he's going, he'll be an apprentice for a very looong time. Here for your pads? Jayfeather's out and about gathering herbs with Clawfoot."
Scorchpaw purred shortly in amusement, though still annoyed with teh tabby apprentice. Holding out each paw for the white she-cat to see, she sat down on some soft earth by the entrance.
"Featherpaw? Pay no mind to the bully you call a brother. He should've be named 'Bullypaw'" Sunpaw purs softly, going and getting fresh poltuice. "Scorchpaw, you're healing well, but you're slowed down from todays patrol. But I'd think you'll be fine in a few days. By then, Brightheart will be well and you two can start your training officially."
"That's great!" Scorchpaw sighed in releif,hearing that Brightheart will be okay. Her eyes brightened at the news and looked at her paw. If she could toughen them up even alittle bit, she'd be nowhere as slow as today.
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Post subject: Re: Warriors: Rise of New Fire (Me and Anaquine!) Posted: Fri Sep 03, 2010 7:34 pm |
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Featherpaw narrowed her eyes. "He may be a bully, but he is still my brother," she replied, her tone sharp. She glanced at Scorchpaw.
"Well then! At least your paws will be better around the same time as Brightheart's eye," she said, changing the subject. "I hope our mentors let us battle train together. I would like to get at least a few attacks under my paws before the next border patrol. What about you?" she asked her denmate.
*** Sunspots awoke from a brief nap in a now-fading patch of sunlight outside the warriors' den. She blinked sleepily, and for a moment saw two Lionblazes coming towards her direction with a squirrel clamped between his jaws while she waited for her eyes to refocus.
"Am I still up for evening patrol?" she asked the deputy, suppressing a yawn.
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