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Balto122
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Post subject: Bloody Battle [Advanced] *Remake* Posted: Thu Jul 22, 2010 4:29 pm |
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This went dead some time ago, this is a remake of "Vampire Teen Clan"Plot:A clan of newborn vampires has been formed in Anchorage, Alaska. These vampires has been made without a purpose, by selfish and careless adult vampires, who has sense long moved on and left the youngsters wandering around pointlessly in the biggest city in Alaska. They are drawing attention to themselves, as they slaughter humans without mercy. A honest vampire has taken notice to this and has decided to take the matter into her own hands. She takes the newborns under her wing and learn them how to strain themselves. Just as the head vampire thinks that all of them are ready to set out alone, she encounters an old friend. This friend informs her that their kinds greatest enemy's, The Lycans, have challenged them. Vampires from all over the world are going to gather in a battle against their sworn foe. Will the bloodthirsty clan fight these creatures? Rp to find out.... Rules:1. Basic AS RP rules. 2. Minor cussing is allowed such as crap and "dang" 3. Be active! PM me if you will be gone long-term. 4. Fights are allowed. 5. Killing characters are NOT allowed unless the creator has given you permisson. 6. No godmodding. 7. Minimum per post is 5 sentences. 8. Maximum characters you can have join the RP is 4. 9. I you have read and understood these rules completely write "I READ the rules" above your entry. 10. Complete your bio's. 11. When a member join, read their bios and remember the names! It will be easier to interact with other then. Vampires:No SPARKLING!! NO SPARKS!! A vampire is the traditional! (altough a bit modernized) White skin, red eyes, human blood, and the always so necessary good looks. No wooden poles and garlic. can be in sunlight, it only makes their skin uncomfortable. Lycans/Werewolves:They morph only during fullmoon, can be killed by vampire fangs. The Lycans only appear during the big fight. Ranks:Vampire Leader~ Balto122Vampire Beta~ WindancerVampire Beta~ Pure_oneNewborn~ Balto122Newborn~ WindancerNewborn~ Hunter (the wolf)Newborn~ Pure_oneOld Friend~ Pure _ oneLycan Alpha~ Balto122Lycan Beta~ Hunter (the wolf)Lycan Beta~ Pure_oneLycan~ Lycan~ Lycan~ Lycan~ If the ranks run out and you still want to join, I will add your wished rank. Bio Form:- Code: Select all
Name: Age: Gender: Species: Rank: Mate: Personality: History: Picture(s)/Description: Test Post(write a paragraph at least 6-8 sentences): Other/Extra: My Bio's:Name: Evelyn Age: Looks 23 years old (300 lived years) Gender: Female Species: Vampire Rank: Vampire Leader Mate: Open Personality: Evelyn is motherly and kind, and feel responsibility for other people's actions who may or may not have been wise. Her gentle nature is a curse to her, being a nomad. She thinks that figthing and bloodshed can never be a good solution, but if she have to fight to defend herself or another innocent being she will battle to the last breath. History: At the age of 23 in the 17th century she was changed by a "witch" as they called the women then. She went from a beatiful nobility to a runaway girl in only days. She fled in fright of being killed and has sense then lived on her own killing silently and fast, she are always sure to make it quick and painless for her victim and then bless its remains. Picture(s)/Description: Evelyn Evelyn Other/Extra: NoneName: Lucy Age: 15 Years Gender: Female Species: Vampire Rank: Newborn Mate: Open Personality: Lucy is a hard working student and has her mind always at the studies. Her personality changed however when she was changed. She started to hiss and snarl more at people, she can easily get angry. She doesn't like when Evelyn constantly tries to get them to listen and how she acted like a replacement of their parents, as they could not return to their own. She has issues while trying to control herself, as her anger often takes the better of her. History: She lived in a boarding school, when she was changed she were home over the weekend. She laid in pain in a dark alleyway, and when her screams reached Evelyn she took her back to the clan hideout. Now she tries to control her bloodlust. Picture(s)/Description: Lucy Other/Extra: She has been found by Evelyn and has joined the clan.Name: Utine Age: 55 Gender: Male Species: Lycan Rank: Lycan Alpha Mate: Unknown Personality: Utine is a harsh leader who never backs down for a challenge and always ends a argument with blood and wounds. He rules over the Lycans with a iron paw and rules as a tyrant. He shows no mercy and would never hesitate to kill someone who has failed him. He sees everything as his kingdom and despises all creatures that arn't Lycans. History: He was born as the Alphas son, and sense birth he has trained to defeat his Father. When he challenged his old and weak Father at the young age of 22 he won and has ruled over the Lycans sense 30 years back Picture(s)/Description: Human Form Lycan Form Other/Extra: None
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Post subject: Re: Bloody Battle [Advanced] *Remake* Posted: Thu Jul 22, 2010 5:38 pm |
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" I READ the rules" Name: Ryan Age: 14 years Gender: Male Species: Vampire Rank: Newborn Mate: None Personality: Tends to be quiet and mysterious History: He was living a normal life until the day he walked home from school and everything turned bad. A vampire attacked him. But they never got the chance to finish, so he turned into one himself. He hasn't been one for long at all. He hasn't even lived more than 4 months as one yet. Picture(s)/Description: (has blonde hair and blue eyes)Test Post(write a paragraph at least 6-8 sentences):Ryan walked along the sidewalk, kicking a rock as he did. School just ended, and once again he was walking home alone. He adjusted his backpack so that it slung over one shoulder. Suddenly, he heard something on the other side of the street. Before he even had time to say "What the heck?", something crashed into him, throwing him on the floor of the alley beside him. The figure was dark in the alley. He could barely see it. But it looked like a woman. She had blue eyes and fiery red hair. But in less than a second, it felt as if his entire neck was burning. And after a minute, his entire body. He fought and struggled. He didn't scream, though, because he wasn't one to scream. He was quiet and didn't speak out much. He finally found the strength to kick the rock hard woman off him. She hissed, blood all over her fangs, and sped in the opposite direction. The damage had been done... As Ryan rolled on the floor, in more pain than all his other injuries combined, he was slowly changing into something different...Other/Extra: None Name: Zac Age: 17 years Gender: Male Species: Lycan Rank: Beta Mate: Open Personality: Tends to like the fun side of life. Loves to make jokes, etc. But when the times come, he can be serious, hardcore, and deadly History: Was dared by a few of his friends to go into the woods, so naturally he couldn't refuse. He went into the woods and was attacked by a lycan. Just one swipe of the lycan's paw caused his whole life to change. Picture(s)/Description: human/ lycanTest Post(write a paragraph at least 6-8 sentences):Zac walked around the edges of the forest. Having been dared just earlier that day, he was going to have to go into the woods at night. And so he did. Once he was in pretty deep, he began to hear the bushes brush. Little did he know the doom that waited him as he walked towards the source of the sounds. A black figure pounced on him, holding him to the ground. It roared, making him deaf for a moment. And as soon as it started, it ended. But not without first leaving three huge gashes along his back. He yelled in agony as something began to happen. His skin turned to fur, his face became long for a snout. He soon became just a giant wolf. One that could both walk on four and two legs. His curse had been set. His destiny, faded.Other/Extra: None
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Post subject: Re: Bloody Battle [Advanced] *Remake* Posted: Thu Jul 22, 2010 8:33 pm |
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"I READ the rules!"
Name: Shay Nickname: N/A Age: 18-19 Role: Beta Gender: Female Personality: She is often distant and independent, seemingly in her own world. To those who manage to become her friend, she is extremely loyal, almost over-protective. She has no qualms when it comes to killing or violence, and will never do anything if ordered to, only if asked. She is brave and curious, though it shows manily through her actions rather than her words. Powers: She can control fire. Picture/Description: Shay has blue, almost turqiouse, eyes. Her black hair has a slight wave to it, contrasting nicely with her pale skin tone. She often wears it pulled back, though when hanging loose, it brushes her shoulders. Test Post:
Shay was glad years of practice as she walked through the streets, exercizing control. If she felt as if she was about to give in, or even thinking about it, she would retreat into the dark shadows of an abandoned alley, and make her way quickly to the sheltering forest, which had a significant lack of humans. She pulled her hood further over her face. Even a small glimpse would cause people to stare, either in jealousy or attraction, a fact she hated. The sun started to set, the irritation faded from her skin as the sun finally sunk below the sky.
It's getting late...I should get back to Evelyn, she thought. A subtle edge of disappointment crossed her face for a second, but it soon faded, leaving the usual indifferent mask. She slipped into the alley, and followed her secluded path to the forest, soon under the leafy canopy.
Name: Theresa Age: 15 Gender: Female Species: Vampire Rank: Newborn Mate: N/A Personality: She has a fiery personality, and often acts without thinking. This can be considering bravery to some, but when confronted with an actual life or death situation, she isn't brave at all. She is independent, persistent, and stubborn, and can be very prideful. No where near perfect, she does try to be helpful, though succeeding is not easily achieved. History: She was an orphan ever since infancy. She was raised in an prohanage, never adopted, until she ran away at age 13. She did manage to live on the streets for around a month, but soon was reduced to begging. A couple let her stay with them infinitly, and she surprisingly lived there until she was almost 15. But then she left, unable to be aburden to the now poor couple any longer. She was wandering down an aleeyway, when she was bitten. Soon a vampire, she tumbled upon Evelyn's group, trying to fight the confusing and strong bloodlust. Picture(s)/Description: Theresa has red hair that is often curly and tangled, and ligtht green eyes to go with it. Like all vampire's, she has pale skin, and good looks, seemingly emphasized by her small, tiny build. Test Post(write a paragraph at least 6-8 sentences):
Theresa bit her lip, squeezing her eyes shut. Instead of helping, it only seemed to make the scent of blood stronger. Her stubborn personality refused to allow her to give in to the bloodlust, which was both a blessing and a curse at the same time. Her shoulder still ached where she had been bitten, a mixture of burning and aching. She rubbed it unconsiously, opening her light green eyes.Why did this have to happen to me? she asked bitterly, biting her lip harder. She could tell it would leave an imprint in the pink flesh.
The scent of warm, fresh blood fillled the air, and she retreated, trying to reach the forest before she lost control. She pushed her way into an alley. After a few paces, two bulky males confronted her. Theresa let out a small cry of frustration, which the humans seemed to take as a sign of fear. "Back away," she growled, her mouth already salivating. Wiht simultaneous grins, they ignored her, coming closer. A snarl ripped through the ai as the temptaion became overwhelming. "I said back away!!" she snarled, her fangs apparent in the sunlight, which irritated her pale skin.
Their grins turned into expressions of idenctical fear. Unable to stop herself, Theresa lunged at them, sinking her fangs into the largest, and closest, one. She could feel his heartbeat slowing as she drank, and a frusterated cry escaped her. The bloodlust had taken control, and when he was dry, she turned to the other, who stood clammy and frozen with fear. He too, was soon sucked dry. When the bloodlust had finally receded, a sob broke out of her, though no tears followed. I'm a monster.
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Post subject: Re: Bloody Battle [Advanced] *Remake* Posted: Thu Jul 22, 2010 9:07 pm |
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Windancer wrote: Since I was in the old one, do I have to post a test post?
I was in the last one too and I wrote a test post. I think it'll be just to test if you can write decent paragraphs ;]
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Balto122
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Post subject: Re: Bloody Battle [Advanced] *Remake* Posted: Fri Jul 23, 2010 3:25 am |
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Moki, accepted! great bios from you both. I would like you to write test post Windancer, sense Moki did it too.
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Windancer
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Post subject: Re: Bloody Battle [Advanced] *Remake* Posted: Fri Jul 23, 2010 11:28 am |
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I edited with a test post.
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Post subject: Re: Bloody Battle [Advanced] *Remake* Posted: Fri Jul 23, 2010 11:37 am |
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Great, Windancer! Accepted!
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Post subject: Re: Bloody Battle [Advanced] *Remake* Posted: Fri Jul 23, 2010 7:37 pm |
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I READ the rulesName: Cody Age: 190 (looks 30) Gender: male Species: vampire Rank: Vampire Beta Mate: open Personality: tends to be quiet but once you get him going he's a chatterbox, nice, friendly for the most part until he has food in front of him History: doesn't like talking about it Picture(s)/Description: http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_qrs64agzT6o/S ... racula.jpgTest Post: Cale was walking in a densely populated street during the night of a full moon when he seen a Lycan. He though it was the ugliest creature he has ever seen and it was just a worthless foe that was standing in his way. The Lycan growled at him challengingly and he hissed back at it in acceptance. The Lycan and Cale circled each other and when the Lycan charged Cale cleverly dodged and bit it's leg, seeking poison into it's leg. It started limping on it's hind leg and charged at Cale again. This time it wasn't so lucky because Cale brought out his dagger and struck the Lycan on the head with it, killing it in it's tracks. Cale picked up the Lycan one last time and bit it's neck to make sure it was dead. He left it in the streets and ran.Other/Extra: none Name: John Age: 17 Gender: male Species: vampire Rank: Newborn Mate: open Personality: open-minded, friendly, understanding, caring History: none Picture(s)/Description: red hair, tall, muscular Test Post: John was playing a video game when he heard a knock at the door around midnight. He paused his game and got up. He looked out the window which was positioned next to the door to see who it was before answering the door. He didn't see anyone so he went back playing his game. When it came again, he got up and went to the door in supernatural speed. He opened the door but there was nobody there. He looked around and seen that it was just a limb from a tree hitting his door because of a gust of wind that was blowing that night. He shut the door and sighed when it happened yet again. He decided to go to bed.Other/Extra: none Name: Tom Age: 33 Gender: male Species: lycan Rank: Lycan Beta Mate: open Personality: cold History: doesn't remember it Picture(s)/Description: tall, very muscular, brown hair, black eyes, tan skin http://angryjoeshow.com/avatars/c_11629 ... knight.jpgTest Post: He sniffed the ground during a full moon night and looked around for the vampire that he smelled. When he couldn't find it, he sniffed again and smelled that the scent was fading which meant that the vampire was fleeing. He went after it and when he caught up to it, he growled threateningly. The vampire turned around and hissed. It said "I'm going to kill you, you bloodthirsty monster." He grinned and cocked his head questioningly. It hissed and charged at him because it was upset that he didn't take full notice of it. He easily pulled out his sword and blocked it's attack and countered swiftly, killing it. He grinned at his victory and howled victoriously.Other/Extra: none Name: Cale Age: 300 Gender: male Species:hybrid if not then lycan Rank: Newborn Mate: open Personality: Will reveal in RP. History: Cody was Evelyn's friend for a very long time until one night during a full moon when they were running through a pitch black forest, a Lycan attacked them and he fought it back away from Evelyn. Before he killed it, the Lycan and himself went over a high cliff and the Lycan bit him, infecting him with it's curse as well as his own. The body of the Lycan and himself fell into a river and he was washed away never to be seen again until he told her about the challenge. Picture(s)/Description: http://www.takalo-raasakka.kannus.fi/en ... %20boy.jpghttp://s.bebo.com/app-image/7963596278/ ... _Beast.jpgTest Post: Cody walked up to a vampire and said "Hi brother."The vampire smiled and said shyly, not knowing what I was, "Hi. You smell funny." Cody smiled and said "I smell food."The vampire shook his head and said "I don't." Cody chuckled and said "That's because your the food." He attacked and killed the vampire easily. He bit the vampire and drained it's unnatural blood and prayed for it's soul to reach heaven. He sighed and said "I'm sorry for killing you brother but I had to."Other/Extra: none
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Post subject: Re: Bloody Battle [Advanced] *Remake* Posted: Sat Jul 24, 2010 12:02 pm |
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Accepted Pure_one! Now lets start! people can join along the way too.
Evelyn swiftly made her way down the crowded street. The humans walked past her without the knowledge that the beautiful women were in fact a death machine. Her pace seemed rushed, and her facial expression showed worry. As she left the crowded town square and entered the abandoned part of town her speed increased into a supernatural sprint. She didn't slow down until she reached a house. The house laid outside the city, in the Alaskan woodland. The snow had just melted away the day before and acknowledged that the two months of sun had begun. Her expression changed just before she was about to walk in the door. The hallway was crowded with shoes and jackets, but they were nicely displayed. Evelyn took off her sneakers who she always found most comfortable and hung up her jacket. She walked pass the stairs that lead upstairs, and into the living room. Lucy sat on the couch with a bitter gaze, reading a book.
Lucy heard approaching steps and the door slamming shut. As Evelyn were the only one of them who were allowed outside at the moment, she knew that it was she who was taking off her shoes and jacket. She stared even harder at the text in her book as she was going to try and ignore Evelyn as she walked in. She walked in and smiled at Lucy. "Hey" she greeted, the smile being noticeable in her speech. She stroke her cheek as she walked pass. As lucy couldn't feel the caress she didn't look up or cared to answer her superior.
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Post subject: Re: Bloody Battle [Advanced] *Remake* Posted: Sat Jul 24, 2010 1:02 pm |
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OOC: Is it okay if since Ryan's a newborn I make him meet the others? If not, I'll edit my post.
Ryan walked along the sidewalk. He pushed through the enormous crowd of people, being tossed around a bit, as were almost all the other people. When he finally managed to get out of the heavy crowd, he went into a nearby alley. There, he saw a gang member, alone. He grinned, showing his fangs, and immediately ran after the man. He was able to grab him and drink all the blood before the human even had time to scream. After finishing, he threw the body in the dumpster and wiped his mouth. He put his hands in his pockets, the thirst in his throat satisfied at the moment. He kept walking, and eventually came in front of a house. He stood in front of it, almost being drawn by it. But he still stayed outside, not knowing who exactly lived there.
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Post subject: Re: Bloody Battle [Advanced] *Remake* Posted: Sat Jul 24, 2010 1:15 pm |
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As Evelyn were about to go and check on the others. Her senses tensed. She felt the smell of a vampire outside of her clan......a newborn.
Lucy threw the book to the floor and tensed. Evelyn passed her and walked into the hallway. Lucy were at her heels.
Evelyn stopped sudden. She felt the smell of fresh human blood.
Lucy felt the scent a thousandfold more then Evelyn, and were struggling to control herself. "you better stay inside" Evelyn commanded her.
Evelyn pulled on her sneakers in a haste. And said without opening the door, as she knew that whoever was there, could hear her. "Do you come in peace?" she asked.
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Post subject: Re: Bloody Battle [Advanced] *Remake* Posted: Sat Jul 24, 2010 1:24 pm |
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Ryan suddenly heard footsteps and he was about to turn and run, but as he smelled the air, he realized they were of his own kind. When they asked if he came in peace, he laughed. "Uh, sure I guess?" he replied. His hands were still in his pockets as he didn't know what to do with them at the moment. He looked around the area, seeing the forest towards the east. He leaned to one side, waiting for the vampires to come out. He'd never met anyone of his kind before, thisides the monster that attacked him in the first place.
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Post subject: Re: Bloody Battle [Advanced] *Remake* Posted: Sat Jul 24, 2010 1:30 pm |
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Evelyn gave an amused smile at the strangers laid-back answer. She opened the door and took a step outside, all in human pace, to be sure and not startle the youngster. "Welcome, stranger" she beamed at him, it seemed as if she was glowing in some strange way, as if her eyes and body radiated of hospitality and unlimited kindness. "I'm Evelyn. The leader of this clan. Of whom am I having the pleasure of greeting?"
Lucy heard Evelyn calm musical voice outside as she sat down gracefully and once again procceded to read the book.
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Post subject: Re: Bloody Battle [Advanced] *Remake* Posted: Sat Jul 24, 2010 2:00 pm |
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Ryan tilted his head, wondering how this vampire could be so motherly and kind. Just by her voice, he could tell she was kind and caring. He briefly thought about his experience with that monster. He winced, noticably, at the memory of his encounter with death. It showed, even though he tried to make it unoticable. "My name's Ryan," he said, trying to break his thoughts.
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Post subject: Re: Bloody Battle [Advanced] *Remake* Posted: Sat Jul 24, 2010 2:15 pm |
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OOC: paused until Pure_one and Windancer posts.
"Ryan, would you like to step in for a while?" she gestured to the open door with a beam on her face.
Lucy heard this a growled. Letting a stranger in after two senteces to each other? didn't seem like a great idea. She stood up and was about to burst through the door as Evelyn pushed her back. "Lucy. I gave you an order" She gritted her teeth at her clan leader before diappearing up the stairs, full with rage and anger.
"Excuse her, she is not herself at the moment" Evelyn said as she nodded towards the livingroom to direct him to follow her before walking inside.
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