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Sounds a lot like The Last Airbender

Very nice descriptions, and your writing style is very unique indeed

I see similarities between this and my "Hint of Grace" RP, where the grandmother died, leaving the main character something to discover/read after they died. I wonder how the letter relates to Ember! Keep writing!

I see how you can say that...though I wasn't even thinking of Avatar: The Last Airbender, when I thought of it. It'll be different though.

And thank you, Paws. If you have an criticism, I'd be glad to hear that too.

Ah, yes! How could I forget the review

There's not much to review yet, but I just can't wait to see how those two pieces tie together! The prologue and the chapter seem like two different stories- which is what you want your readers to think! You want to keep them interested, and you especially want them to say, "How could this be related to this?" because there's only one answer: keep reading!

Just a tip for the rest of this story- there's a fine line between keeping the readers interested and making them confused. Try to explain as much as you can, even if it's explained in a subtle way.

Anyway, I love the story, and good job with keeping me interested, because I sure am and I sure can't wait for the rest!

Hm....you've captured my attention with this, Wolfie! It's very intriguing, so far. Keep it up, I'd really like to read more.



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Thanks, Nattikat.

Once I get the inspiration of how to continue, (I do need to outline somewhat, you know) I may write some more. Hopefully soon, though I do have to work on Plummet as well.