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 Post subject: Nightmare with a Blue Eye
PostPosted: Fri Apr 02, 2010 9:08 am 
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Okay, so I'm bored and decided to write another Sonic characters story..But this time, it's out with the old and in with the new. I do not own Sonic, Shadow, Silver, ect. But I do own Sparks, Isabella, Toby, Logan, Maria, Haze, April, Mist, Skye, Riley, Pearl, Krystal and Rush. Anyways, thanks Paws for the good title.

Chapter one: Introducing Some of the Characters


The air was crisp and cold, the moon shone brightly in the dark sky, the only sound was the sound of wind rustling through the trees. A young female wolf/dog/hedgehog stood all alone, until two more figures appeared. One she recognised as her mother, and the other she did not know, for the shadows hid his face. One thing she did notice about the other figure, was that he had one brown eye and one blue eye. As the unknown figure started suffocating her mother, the young wolf mix started crying. And soon, her mother fell to the floor dead... THUD! Isabella awoke lying on the floor, there was a terrible pain in her head. She rubbed her eyes, noticing that there were fresh tears on her cheeks. She must've been crying in her sleep. 'That horrible nightmare...It keeps haunting me.' Thought Isabella. Her thoughts were interrupted when her father, a wolf/dog with red eyes, entered her room. "Izzy, are you okay?" He asked. "Yeah daddy." Replied Isabella.

Sparks noticed that his daughter's cheeks were soaked by tears, he sighed. "What's wrong Isabella? Why are you crying?" He asked, kneeling down beside his daughter, who was now sitting up. "I-I miss her daddy..I miss mom." She replied, burying her face into her father's chest and continuing to cry. Sparks gave a small smile and gently pulled his daughter away from him so she could see his face. "I do too, but we have to move on, she would want us to." He said softly. He checked his watch. '9:30 am.' He thought. “Why don’t you go outside and play with your friends?” He suggested. Isabella smiled and hugged her father. “Okay daddy.” She replied. Isabella was twelve years old, almost thirteen, yet she had a habit of calling her father ‘daddy’ instead of ‘dad’.

The young wolf mix slid on her shoes, gloves, her favourite top and a pair of shorts before running outside. Her friends always met at the park whenever it was a Saturday, and it was a Saturday. She soon arrived at the park, yet all her friends weren’t there yet. The only ones that were present were a light blue hedgehog with green eyes, and a white hedgehog with blue eyes and red streaks on his quills. The light blue hedgehog wore shorts and a white top, and the white hedgehog wore blue jeans. “Hey Rush, hey Logan!” Called Isabella, running over to the two hedgehogs. “Hey Izzy, what’s up?” Asked Rush, accidentally kicking a soccer ball in her direction. Logan caught the soccer ball before it collided with Isabella’s head. “Oops, my bad.” Muttered the light blue hedgehog.

“Thank you Logan.” Said Isabella, looking into the white and red hedgehog’s cerulean-blue eyes. “No problem.” Replied Logan, kicking the soccer ball back to Rush. “Where’s everyone else?” Asked Isabella, looking around. “To tell the truth, I don’t know.” Replied Logan. “Anyways, where’s your brother?” Asked Logan. “Helping Tails in the workshop.” Replied Isabella. Her brother, Tobias, was great with machinery and so liked to help out Tails. “So umm, you busy tomorrow or do you wanna hang out with me and Tobias?” Asked Isabella. “I can hang out with you guys 1:00 till 6:00...But after that I have to babysit my little sister while my parents go to some concert with uncle Sonic and aunt Amy.” Replied Logan. “Hey guys!” A distant voice could be heard.

“Hey Mist.” Greeted Isabella as a dark grey female hedgehog with golden-coloured eyes and purple on the tips of her quills walked up to them. “Yo, Misty!” Said Rush in a teasing sort of tone. “Don’t call me Misty.” Growled Mist. Everyone except Mist laughed, then they all began to play soccer. It was a boys vs. Girls game. At 5:00pm they all went home.

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 Post subject: Re: Yet another story...
PostPosted: Fri Apr 02, 2010 2:03 pm 
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Maybe you can call it:
It's the Nightmare with the Blue Eye
The Image That Haunts Me
What Can I Do To Make It Go Away?
Too See Her Again...
I Can't Forget... It's Just Too Hard To
Get Out Of My Head

Just some suggestions :wink: And I like the story, though very depressing in the beginning, it's cool.

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 Post subject: Re: Nightmare with a Blue Eye
PostPosted: Fri Apr 02, 2010 10:07 pm 
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Thanks, all those titles are really cool, I think I'll go with the first one and shorten it a bit. Also, in Sparks' story, thats not really how Melody dies. You see, just before Isabella's story (this is Isabella's story) Sparks keeps feeding his kids lies about how Melody died, because he doesn't want Isabella or Tobias to hate him. So that's why Isabella has that nightmare, it's because of all the lies threaded together into one. Anyways, Chapter two will be up soon.

Preview of Chapter 2:

Logan stared at the living room wide-eyed. "How could one kid make so much mess..She completely wrecked this place!"
"Well, we should try and catch her before she gets into more mischief." Said Isabella. "That would be completely impossible." Muttered Logan. "My dad always says, "Nothing's impossible, it's just difficult, so all you gotta do is try."." Replied Isabella. "Now lets catch her before she wrecks anything else." She added. The two suddenly heard the sound of plates crashing against the floor. "Oh no..not the kitchen!"

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