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Velox · **Joined:** Wed Jun 03, 2009 7:43 am **Posts:** 23

uh yes well. i've been drawing so long and i feel like ... not improving though. =/ (it's the same with my english xDD)
soo. yeah. i wanted to ask for some critique, cause i never got some and it would be soo helpful if someone could tell me WHAT I'M DOING WRONG ALL THE TIME.
here we go C:

http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/ ... _velox.png

(IT'S A CAT. i know the muzzle and the paws suck. =/)
http://cave-velox.deviantart.com/art/Ho ... -154492810

sorry for those big files =/
(and i'm not twelve anymore 8DD)
WHATS WRONG WITH ME

Skotta · **Posted:** Sat Feb 20, 2010 6:39 am

Your art looks good but your style is way to much like Deni's style. It isn't really orginal in my option :/

Even your furson looks the same as hers...

Velox · **Joined:** Wed Jun 03, 2009 7:43 am **Posts:** 23

too much like deni's? HUM ... :C
well i always tried to make my style a bit ... different. every time i ... "improve" people are like "HOMMMMFG your stealing this and this and that style ffffff" Dx

too similar? 8DD

but thanks for your crit! i'll try to ... make my style different from deni's and from the 19034774799 other artists xD

Raven the lioness · **Posted:** Sat Feb 20, 2010 11:38 am

Yeah I agree it does look like Deni's maybe you should spice it up a bit but other than than it is good!

Velox · **Joined:** Wed Jun 03, 2009 7:43 am **Posts:** 23

hmm ok, i'll look what i can do, but my hair actually looks like this, lol
okay. thanks. ^^

Wolf Isaac · **Posted:** Sun Feb 21, 2010 8:22 am

Great works, really. I'm sad to say i agree with them but i confess i have the same problem. It all started because i used to (and still) admire a particular DA artsist. The first drawing i published on the web looked like a work of her but in a first time i didn't recognise it. Then i made a banner with it and this artist asked me privately if i had used one of her drawing for the banner and i just showed her my drawing, apologising about my style. I knew why i did that error. When you focus on a specific style you find yourself drawing in that way. I dunno if that happens to you too...
I think that drawing should be a natural action after many years of application and improvements, which i see you surely have. So if the way you draw is not natural...well i suggest you to change but if it isn't, that could be your style. It's strange to think that two persons could have the same style but sometimes i do.

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