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Rate my art
Like every artist, it needs some improvement 23%  23%  [ 3 ]
It's horrible! 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
You should stop drawing. 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
It's awesome! 8%  8%  [ 1 ]
It's okay. 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
You're the best artist I've ever seen! (thanks!) 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
Practice more! You're getting better. 46%  46%  [ 6 ]
You're good! 23%  23%  [ 3 ]
Teach me your ways!!! (umm... I might) 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
Post a tutorial!! I need it. (if you REALLY need it... study anatomy.) 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
Total votes : 13
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CrashKeys
 Post subject: Critiques and comments for improvement...
PostPosted: Thu Dec 31, 2009 12:22 pm 
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Well, I'm looking for improvement since my last topic was made a year ago; and it has helped (thanks for those who did comment!). I want to get better though, since I want to improve.

Here are some things you can critique on:
Shading
Highlighting
Anatomy (I draw both wolf and dog, so I will tell you with a picture.)
Backgrounds (OKAY, THIS IS THE ONE I HAVE PROBLEMS WITH)
If you want, anything else... you may rate my art...

You can redline!! I would prefer it if you did!!

Some examples:


Attachments:
File comment: This is a trade for a friend on DA.
Ranu (c) Nini-Tan
Ranu is a wolf. (Yes, he has a thunderbolt tail)
Ranu (gift).png
Ranu (gift).png [ 148.1 KiB | Viewed 514 times ]
File comment: This is a headshot of a dog. XD
Fantine (c) Me
Fantine Headshot.png
Fantine Headshot.png [ 14.31 KiB | Viewed 514 times ]
File comment: Litonya is (c) to WWM
Ion is (c) to Me
These are dogs.
Ion + Litonya ^_^.png
Ion + Litonya ^_^.png [ 255.65 KiB | Viewed 515 times ]

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 Post subject: Re: Critiques and comments for improvement...
PostPosted: Thu Dec 31, 2009 12:33 pm 
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Some more:


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File comment: This is a picture of a dog... the shim belongs to DakotaWerewolf now.
Poaris picture (2).png
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File comment: Lineart of a Jindo dog, YOU MAY NOT USE IT.
Empty Lineart.png
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File comment: this is the lineart of a dog, YOU MAY NOT USE IT.
lineart.png
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