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 Post subject: Cat critique?
PostPosted: Thu Dec 17, 2009 11:55 am 
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Well, I recently Decided to Have go at something other than canines and Started drawing Cats. This are (I think) My Best Drawings to date but Id still like Tips on how to improve.

What I want help on:

Anatomy.I Dont like the look of some of my cats features.
Perspective. The angle that its from, if I need some help on it.
Any Sort of CREATIVE critisicm.
Shading advice. (Yes, teh only shaded one here is airbrushed. i dont normally use it but eh, i had a free triak of something)

My Drawings:

Angry Feline (OC Cat): NOTE: These were with alot of help from my friend, So they arent quite as...Cartoony shall we say? as my other ones)
http://i50.tinypic.com/n50vop.jpg
http://i49.tinypic.com/66kyhe.png (With Glow)

laying cat (Lineat):
http://i49.tinypic.com/s4xe39.png

Two Cats (Sitting,Shaded):
http://i47.tinypic.com/330gxg9.jpg

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PostPosted: Sat Dec 19, 2009 11:42 pm 
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Very nice, to critique it, I would make the lines a bit smoother. They make the cat look a bit bumpy. But I really like the first two! I would love some critiques on my art!

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PostPosted: Sun Dec 20, 2009 2:32 pm 
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Not bad, but try to keep your lines smooth. Also, try and study up on cat pictures, as your cats kind of of look like dogs to me. Try to round your edges to make it more cat like.

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 15, 2010 7:22 pm 
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Not bad. But is it just me, or do the first two(the OC ones) look *cough* not your style? They don't look like you drew them, honestly. I'm not jumping to conclusions, just saying. And also, as said before, make the lines smoother.

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PostPosted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 4:28 am 
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MHP- The first two ones had a lot of help from my friend on That one, So they arent quite as my style as the others, Though I do understand that they dont look like my others. *goes to add thta*

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Pretty good. Like the other's said..Keep your lines a bit smoother.
Your anatomy is pretty good, but you could use a little bit more pratice with feline
anatomy, because in the "Two Cats" picture, they sort of look like dog or something, but
overall you did great.

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PostPosted: Sat Mar 06, 2010 6:07 pm 
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I'd suggest to slope your lines more, but overall they look amazing :) The glowing cat is great, and you definitely have been blessed with talent :]

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