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 Post subject: The Legend of Zorra: Zorro Returns (Wolf Paws and I)
PostPosted: Fri Nov 27, 2009 2:56 pm 
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WHOOO! I'M BACK AND BETTER THAN EVER!Sorry to the people that I left so suddenly :( Just been a bunch of issues. Anywho! I'm back and with a re-start to an old RPG Idea




Everyone knows the Legend of Zorro. The Black caped Cowboy of the MExican West, saving people and righting the wrong that was done in injustice! How Zorro disappeared for so many years, only to reappear again!

After the brutal struggle, Zorro triumphs, and peace is returned to Mexico at last... for now. No one knows how the caped Nocturnal Vigile Antie was save for few. His wife Ellena, the oldest house servant Jeff and his son, and Alejandro's (Zorro) himself.

Soon, the stories of his greatness had passed through his family into a fable story... and story turned to Legend... but no one knew Zorro's greatest secret.

Zorro was the first Animalian: The Black Fox as his name sake stated.

For now, peace ruled and Zorro was thought to have disappeared forever.

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Five thousand years after the Human Era, the Five Great Continents of the world (Save the polar Caps) have converged into one giant world... the Animalian Race no longer fears extinction for their powers and thrive as humans finally go extinct.

But all is not entirely well with the world...

In the Cactus Deserts that use to be Mexico, the old Lion King dies... leaving no heir to his throne and his wife had passed on. In his place a struggle for power heats up once more! The Nobles battle for who will become the rightful ruler and the people suffer under their childish bickering.

If something isnt done soon, War will rage between the Animalian Beasts... and there will be no stoping it this time... unless...

In the house of Noble Foxes, a young female She-Fox named Sorra rises in her powers... as the only Black Fox since the Human Era.

Nearrah isnt a noble in any means. She's a common Animalian and prefers it that way, working for her meals and keeping mostly to herself. Her Great Grandfather, whom raised her, Jeff is a Guard within the Noble Walls tells her of the struggles to see who will finally take full charge of the Desert Region.

She hears her family's legend about her ancestor,t he first Zorro of the Human Mexican West. At last, her path is clear, and like her ancestor before her, she must right what is wrong within the Deserts that is her home.

When one Noble named Rath becomes a higher issue within the courts, Jeff asks his only granddaughter to take up the manlte of Zorro. 'If Rath' he says 'ever gains full power over the Desert Regions, it will mean the end for us all.'

And so... The Legend breathes again!

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[b]Gender:[/b]
[b]Station (Noble, Common, Servant, Guard):[/b]
[b]Markings:[/b]
[b]Breif History:[/b]
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]Name: Nearrah
Age: 20 Summers
Breed: Fox
Gender: Female
Station (Noble, Common, Servant, Guard): Common
Markings:Silver streaks
Breif History: Sorra's parents died when she was a Kit, leaving her very old grandfather to care for her. Not really caring about nobilities, she speds most of her time in her work as a Horse Keeper in the feilds, as well as a Racer (An underground Horse Racing ring) at night. With the knowledge that her grandfather has told her about her ancestor, she's taken up the mantle and becomes the legendary Zorra.
Picture/Accurate description:ImageImage
Good/Evil: Good
Crush: A noble named Zerdo (will meet in the story)
Extras: The only thing of her parents she has is her father's ring and her mother's headband.

]Name:Jeff
Age: 316
Breed:Fox
Gender:Male
Station (Noble, Common, Servant, Guard):Guard
Markings:Silver/Gray pelt
Breif History: Whole family save for Sorra has passed on or was killed... that's enough for now.
Picture/Accurate description: Image
Good/Evil: Good
Crush: None, his LIfe Mate has died
Extras: Will pass his Guard Amulet to Sorra when he dies


Characters:

Nearrah/ Zorra: Common: Good: ME!
Jeff: Guard: Good:Me also
Zerdo: Noble: Good or Evil, your choice: Open
Rath: Noble: Evil: Open
Trenth: Unknown station: Sorra's best male friend: Good: Open
Deirah: Unknown station: Trenth's brother: Good or Evil, your hoice: Open
Kio: Good: Common Wolf Paws

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 Post subject: Re: The Legend of Zorra: Zorro Returns (Wolf Paws and I)
PostPosted: Fri Nov 27, 2009 3:10 pm 
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Name: Kio
Age: 22 Summers
Breed: Arctic Fox
Gender: Male
Station (Noble, Common, Servant, Guard): Common
Markings: Black squares around eyes
Breif History: He was the smallest out of his litter, so his parents wanted to just kill him off early so he won't have to suffer, so he has many scars from failed attempts to kill him. He soon ran away to find a better life for himself, and he found Nearrah's family, so he is now 'part of their family', but he falls in love with Nearrah, even though she has her eyes on Zerdo.
Picture/Accurate description: Simple design. All white with black squares around his eyes. Perfect blue eyes.
Good/Evil: Good
Crush: Nearrah
Extras: He is very understanding, and is a good friend.

Name: Ralton
Age: 40 Summers
Breed: Fox
Gender: Male
Station (Noble, Common, Servant, Guard): Noble I
Markings: He is dark gray, but has red and purple streaks and blotches from the incident. Read V
Breif History: He was a part of the royal family since he was a kit, but he was kidnapped when he was only 10 Summers old, and left for dead in an abandoned tattoo parlor. He got into the ink and was left with permanent red and purple streaks and spots that he still has.
Picture/Accurate description: All dark gray, with a big red streak on one side of him and a bunch of purple blotches on the other side.
Good/Evil: Good
Crush: Open
Extras: He is Nearrah's uncle.

Ooc:// There's nothing demonic in this Rp, right?

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 Post subject: Re: The Legend of Zorra: Zorro Returns (Wolf Paws and I)
PostPosted: Fri Nov 27, 2009 3:18 pm 
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Nope. Pure brute strength.

Name: Rath
Age: 419
Breed: Lynx
Gender: Male
Station (Noble, Common, Servant, Guard): Noble
Markings: Red rings around his eyes
Breif History: Power... that's all he knows
Picture/Accurate description:Image
Good/Evil: Evil
Crush: No one
Extras: Grr...


If I may make a suggestion? Why not make Kio one of the hero's of the story and create him as the Noble? It'd be hard to play a Zerdo character as well...

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Ooc:// Ok, so Kio is a Noble as well? But what about Ralton?

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((It was just a thought. *shrug* Perhaps brothers-lost-parents/best friends/rebel boys... idk. If you dont like it than you can go ahead and leave it as is. I'm not picky about other people's characters))


Grandfather must've had a tiring day... Nearrah thought, setting his food near his bed of straw. The older Fox was already deep asleep and snoring, making her smile. Thinking back to her kit years, she found it astounding that her great great grandfather had made it all these years when her parents hadnt. The thought twisted at her heart slightly... but it was immediately banished. I should get moving soon.

Going to the den entrance, she swept up her cloak around her shoulders and took her black as night stallion with her to the Racer Meet. A new challenger had arisen a few nights ago... a challenger that probably needed to be met.

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Kio was sitting on his bed, dreaming while he was lying awake. He wasn't tired, despite the hour. He prayed quietly, but all the while thinking about Nearrah. She was always like his sister, but now she was more than that. He finished up his silent prayer and got up to go to his old hideout in the abandoned racetrack. He knew that Nearrah was there, and he loved to watch her speed around the track like nobody's business. Kio tramped out of his room and followed Nearrah's pawprints to the track. He took a seat way in the back, so she wouldn't spot him.

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Nearrah looked around the track, several other Racers had come out, each of them greeting her with a gruff nod or wave. She spotted the newcommer and the hackles raised on her tail. It was another soldier. She knew him from her patrols as Zorra. Rath is really losing his touch. she thought to herself as she jumped down. "What are you doing out here, newbie?" she called out, catching his attention

The Soldier looked up, spotting one of the riders, a fox of some kind he deduced. But he was agitated that his whole night had been spoiled by going under these secret missions... he could be at the inn getting drunk with his brothers! "I would watch my tongue girl. I'll cut it out otherwise."

The other Racers gathered around, resounding awes. Nearrah wasnt one to be messed with... which was why she didnt have many friends. Or suiters for that matter, a fact that irked her Grandfather to no end. She narrowed her eyes. "Watch my tongue? You obviously dont belong here, newbie. I'll teach you hte respect for the Racers. Saddle up! Tenn, keep an eye out for any soldiers!"

"Yes sir, Nearrah."
The other Racers squickly saddled up, excited for the first race of the night.

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Kio heard Nearrah and a newcomer quarrel a bit before the race. He whispered to himself, Come on, Nearrah, show him what you're made of.

Ralton entered the arena and mounted his dark chocolate brown stallion and pulled on the reins, shortening them. Then, with a small kick to the sides of the horse, it trotted forward and stood next to Nearrah's stallion. Ralton leaned over and asked, "You think that new guy's any threat to us?"

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"Definately." Nearrah didnt beleive in 'maybes.' It's always 'Yes' or 'No.' She rounded her stallion, Tornado and tied back her black hair. Internally, she was excited, the thrill of hte race was always something that she looked forward to. But... even though she wouldnt tell anyone, she wished she had someone to share it with. She tightened her hands on the reigns, taking a deep breath. "Let's show 'em, right TOnrado?"

As if he understood her like another Horse Animalian, Tornado nodded and set near the Starting line of the ring. She looked up, though like normal, the stands were empty save for a few Racers who didnt want to compete this round. Of course, First Races had a fairly large Pot. This time had eight Rubians and six Ezmeralds. Enough for her and Kio to get by... Kio... her eyes softened.

"GO!" She instinctually kicked Tornado into speed, watching the new guy carefully... she didnt trust him. Her gut told her not to. And her gut, she always followed.



The Soldier grumbled as his somewhat overweight Gelding struggled to keep up. "If Zorra really is out here, than this whole place is her ring of operations!" he kept htinking to himself. "If I can expose it, it means Rath will finally give me that permotion I was begging for!"

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Ralton was a good sport, so he didn't freak out when Nearrah passed him on the track. He simply held his heels to his horse's, Nexio's, sides. He was neck and neck with Nearrah when he yelled to her, "Freshman! 2 o'clock!" Signalling that the newbie was catching up to her.

Kio cheered in the stands, paying no mind to the fans near him staring. Nearrah was a legend at this game, and he knew that she would win. A newcomer was creeping up behind her, though. He'd never seen this guy before, but he wasn't worried. It was just another challenger, hoping to become the new champ, but just wait 'till his dreams are dashed by one of most talented riders Kio's ever seen; Nearrah herself!

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Nearrah glanced at Ralton. "Thanks!" she nodded. People in the ring knew that if they kept ranks and made sure the newbie played fair, she'd split the reward somewhat... but they all knew that her grandfather, Jeff, was very old and sick. But still a very talented Guard for hte nobles. Ugh... Nobles. There were few she tolerated but others she absolutely loathed. Rath, being at the top.He was one threat that had to be delt with. Quickly.

"Come on you worthless slacker!" The Guard, Rore, cropped his horse again and again. No longer was this about his job. It was about his pride! This... female! He took out his frustrations on his gelding in hope to press him to the finish line first. "Well... if you dont succeed..." He took out a bunch of thistles and threw them at the female rider's horse.


Nearrah felt her breath hitch, startled as Tornado began to buck and run at the same time! Her Horsemaster training kicked in first and pulled him off to the outside of the group, turning to see what was wrong. "Oh... the rotten cheater!" Just as she picked the thistles out, something caught her eye... Smoke Signals. No... She knew those signals.

They were from the outer caves of the Noble Dens. Zorra was being summoned.

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Ooc:// So are they all humans right now, or foxes?

Ralton pushed his horse even harder, feeling that it was now his responsibility to win the prize money to take care of Nearrah's sick grandfather. "Come on, Nexio! We gotta win this!" he called, and, as if Nexio understodd, he hopped a bit, then bolted forward even faster. "Good boy!" Ralton cheered as he climbed closer and closer to the finish line.

Kio saw the smoke signals as well, and he knew what those meant. He jumped out of his seat, past the dumbstruck successors, and down to meet up with Nearrah. "Nearrah!" he called. He wanted to know what was going on with her horse. "What happened out there?"

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(Sorry, I didnt make it clear in the plot... my bad. Animalians are Human-appearing animals. They're called by their Animal forms, but have a humanoid form as well when needed *most of hte time* Think InuYasha Sorry... it's my bad on my part.)

Nearrah looked and saw Kio, clamping a clawed hand over his mouth once she reached him. "SHH! I cant say anything right now... I have to go." Not knowing that Kio may know her secret, Nearrah kicked Tornado swiftly in hopes of making a clean getaway from the ring.

Reaching hte cave, she morphed more into her Animal, hte Black Fox... Zorra. Her tail twitched at her side and her ears became sharper, mroe alert. Tying hte mask over her eyes and checking the sword and knives to see if they needed a quick sharpening. She mounted Tornado once more... and took to the cliffs.


The Guard crowed out in laughter, seeing as he made it second, before the female rider. "Well it's about time this horse was good for somethign!" he slapped his mount and dismounted. "Good race everyone!" eh tried, jolily... "Hey... where's that girl with the big mouth and attitude to match?!"

A young Noble sat at the caves, watching as Zorra rode up. She ran up and helped her down. "Zorra... oh thank the Heavens you came! Rath is planning an attack on the West Villages. If something isnt done, my sisters may die!" This young and loyal Noble friend was Treiya, a Leopard. She was considered low when it came to her class, but she was extremely good in politics and mad eher an asset to anyone who came for power... even Rath.

Zorra scowled. The West Viillages? what could possibly be there that Rath would want to attack for? She bent down to hte younger Noble and touched her head. "Hey... nothing bad will happen. You called me now, that's all that matters." Taking her mount, she rode through an old entrance into the castles... time to stir up trouble!

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Kio shut up immediately, for he didn't want to spoil Nearrah's plans for... whatever she was going for. He heard the new guy bashing Nearrah so Kio strode up to him and pointed. "Hey, I wouldn't trash the name that was about to beat your butt at this race!" Kio always stood up for his friends, even if they deserved to be trashed. But Nearrah never deserved anything bad. She never did anything so bad.

Ralton slowed down his horse as he crossed the finish line first, and when Nexio slowed to a walk, Ralton raised his fists in pride. He spotted Kio, so he cupped his hands around his mouth and called, "Hey, Kio! Not bad, eh?"

Kio looked past the newbie at Ralton and gave him a thumbs up. "Great run, Ralt! Teach me how to do that sometime!" he walked past the new guy. He wasn't worth it anyway.

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For some reason... Zorra had that sinking feeling that she had to go back to the Ring. She just felt it in her gut.

"I bash the people who deserve it! Where is seh anyway? Chicken out of the race?" He looked around sarcastically but stopped when he saw Kio look away. "HEY!" He marched up. "I"m tlakin' to you!" He punched him in the back of the head... well... tried to.

Zorra stopped at the cliffs above the Racer Ring. She narrowed her fox eyes and took an arrow from the saddle quiver, wrote and tied a message to it, and fired it at the Soldier. She smirked as it flew true and pinned his flying fist to the ground, him along with it.

"HEY!" A Racer named Torn called out, comming out to congradulate Ralton on the run but spotted hte black arrow. He looked up and nearly fell from heart attack. "Zorra!" He punched a fist in the air. He'd only seen her once before... when she saved him from his den burning several months ago. Untying the message from the arrow, he saw a Z etched into the wood at the sides and at the tip.

Soldier was printed in clear script. Crunching it, he cracked his knuckles. "HEy Kio, want first lick at a spy? He tried to knock your lights out!"

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