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Hayumi is a pup with a broken past that goes from extreme family issure to blood and war.But when her pack is raided and killed by a close pack she escapes her close fight with death and is captured by Yellow Stone Park scientist named Mark and Steve.They soon put her into the reserve in Judo Pack territory.She is found and welcomed into the pack, but what has life left for her?

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My life began with pain, ended with it to.My life was full of twist and unexpected turns that lead to loss and heartbreak, no wolf should have to overcome what I did.Right?

I layed in my den as mother licked SiSi, my older sister.Her and I never got along to well, constant fighting made mother and father upset with me.I blinked a few times as I scanned the horizon of the territory that our pack owned, it wasn't as large as my parents hoped but of course they were greedy and selfish so I never truly learned when was enough and when you weren't even close until I was taken.My father came in and smiled at us, only to catch me playing with a bug he rolled his eyes in dissatisfaction "Why can't you be...normal?" He questioned me with a sigh, I shrugged unknowingly and snuggled closer to the wall that I ever thought I could fit.The den went quiet as my parents began to silently mumble to eachother, my father's eyes strict and stern looking, more than normal and that almost scared me.I pondered on different reasons on why they would be acting this way, was Alue's pack becoming to noticeable again on our territory, was a war near by?I soon decided that it was useless to think about the negatives since father would tell us soon enough.

A week passed and the odd stern look never washed from my Father's face, it was thicker than ever as he entered the den.I tried to make out the words they were speaking, but it was nearly impossible to do since I was never good at reading lips.As father went to turn for the exit mother stopped him and whined "Please Steep...Don't go." She whimpered threw her maw.Father's jaw tensed up like it always did when he tried to act brave "I'll be back Feather." He promised her, he said goodbye to my sister but left me in my corner to think more.I thought to much really, constantly trying to figure the world out.Father walked out and left for the edge of the woods "Mother...Where is father going?" I asked, the whole den seemed as tense as Father's jaw."Not now Hayumi." She scolded for my bad timing, SiSi stuck her tongue out at me, my head began to heat up with anger and frustration that I leaped onto her.I bit into her arm as she yelped for me to stop.My mother had to yank me off of her "Stop!" She snapped, I growled at the two of them and laid back down on my rock.I watched the door for the rest of the day, mother's eyes seemed to be locked on it also.She was constantly glancing at it, her eyes filled with worry but there was a spark of reassurance that he would come back.But soon enough it had been another week, no father.Mother had became so attached to the doorway that I had to find my own kill as she sat in the foot prints he last stood.My sister was a poor hunter so of course I hunted for her to, lucky I had a heart that day.That night I couldn't go to sleep, unsettling howls of pain and torture was echoing off from the mountains that made the border line of our territory.Mother seemed to know who it's was since she was sobbing quietly to herself, it was father.I dug my face in my tail for comfort since I knew mother would push me away.I didn't get any sleep that night, my eyes were hazy when my family awoke.I stepped outside and stretched, mother was more like a ghost than anything now.But my sister was perfectly fine, she raced along the stream with Babble, her friend.I didn't get along to well with the other wolf pups, I perfered the foxes and bears more.I thought about asking mother if I could go first but I knew I wouldn't receive a answer, she seemed to dead to even aprouch.I walked past SiSi and Babble, I heard them growling behind me.My leg tensed up, I began to walk faster but I was to late, Babble had me on the ground.He bit my leg as SiSi slashed my face.I let my body go, rage and anger overfilling my body now.I leaped over the two and bit Babble's neck, blood poured out into my mouth as SiSi began to step back in fear."Hey, Yumi...C'mon sis!We're friends right?Sisters?" She asked nervously, hoping for forgiveness but with my parents teachings I learned to never forgive.I rammed her into a tree and grabbed her leg and bit down, a large cracking sound was followed by a yelp.She laid on the ground, wincing in pain as I walked back into the den.It soon got dark and SiSi came home, her leg mangled from dragging it.She wasn't the brightest lightning bug in the world, she still didn't get the concept of limping yet.I buried myself in my tail again, I quickly fell asleep that night.

My eyes popped opened as growls and barks entered the den and the neighboring ones.My mother stood at the entrance like stone, unable to move.They pushed her down and took my sister into a corner and killed her, the shadows hid the blood until they moved.My mother's weak eyes were filled with old bravery that showed as she still stood, waiting for her mate to come home in the doorway.But that all washed away as they knocked her to the ground.She kept the same face as they tore her into shreds, I ran in fear from the den, my tail tight between my legs as I raced for the forest.I ran threw, larger and more muscular wolves ran past me in great speed, my heart was going to fast for me to hear as I hid under a bush.I was hyperventilating for sure, my breathing became raspy as the once copious forest became deserted, but the same tortured howls I had heard the night before now nestled in my own territory.I heard metal clanging against itself as I snuggled deeper inside the brush.A familer smell clogged my nostrils, the scent burned as I scratched at my nose slightly.A large voice appeared as I did so "Wait.I hear something." The voice strictly spoke, his voice was so deep it even vibrated my paws and chest.I saw a paw infront of me, it was pure grey.I smiled, it was my father!I wanted so badly to hug him and tell him how I missed him so, but him and I would be killed since he would probably jump to.I stayed completely still like the paws infront of me, I tried not to breath at all but I snuck some silent breaths in every second or so.I soon watched as my prisoner father was taken away by some male in metal chains."You stupid rogue packs are everywhere!" The voice snapped as my father's head hung high in pride of who he was.I smiled sweetly as I quietly snuck farther, I ran quickly into the dangerous forest full of traps and larger wolves that were already attacking my small pack.

My paws beat the ground with fury, like it was the reason this was happening.I ran with great speed, my legs a blur as I felt my paws begin to bleed from the sharp sticks that might as well be a hunter's knife.I ignored the pain though, I had to, no stopping now since I had already began my journey that would change my life.My eyes darted around nervously, wolves ambushed from all around with large sticks with fire at the ends.They ran them into the trees, they instantly caught fire since most were dead.The heat radiated onto my fur, I was terrified of the thought of burning to death, a slow and painful death indeed.But the wolves passed me, not seeing me in the darkness of night, I heard constant howls and yelps of pain, I tried to block those off the best I could.I forced myself to race faster, which I thought was impossible, but I did it."Go Hayumi...Go." I whispered to myself silently, my legs burned from the over drive and from the fire that was nearing closer and closer by the seconds.It grew as I neared the end of the territory, my eyes wide with fear as I saw a large flame ahead of me, should I jump it?There was no other way, it was a 'only the strongest will live' kind of deal, and I guess I'm the strong because I took three steps back and ran full speed towards the fire, my legs stretching as I leaped over the flame.I felt the fire brisk my tail as I landed hard on my side, I hadn't realized how much pain I had inflicted on myself in the past hour or so, I had lost track of time.My paws were covered in blood and my shoulder ached as I limped quickly towards a small and abandoned fox den, my body was shaking as I layed down on a large pile of leaves that were left there.I looked towards the moon, the only thing that could possibly stay with me until the end "Good night moon." I whispered faintly, my eyes fluttering closed.

That night my dreams were full of death.Skeletons danced in the fire, tree limbs twirled around my paws in a swift motion as my sister's body was lifted into a hole by Babble and his younger sister Brook.I looked around the alien place that was once my home.The placed soon dissapeered and was replaced by my memories of my way out of my den when my sister was killed.I fell to the ground from the shock of the dissapeering vines that acted like cuffs.The wolves pushed my sister into the wall and snarled, harsh threats spat out of their mouth as I titled my ears back ,not wanting to hear.SiSi whimpered for my mother but she didn't budge, her ears back in dissbelif and fear that her mother and no one could help her now.She was completley doomed and she knew it completley.They grabbed my sister's leg and ripped it off like it was a rabbit's.My sister-Still alive-yelped in pain that shot threw her body quickley even though she would probaly perfer it being slower.The wolved then bit down her neck so she would be stiller as the others tore her body to shreds, blood splattered on the walls and my face.I flinched in fear, my body tensing in the dream and the real world.The whole time it felt as if I couldn't breathe, like I was under water.Then my eyes shot open as I gasped for air my paws dug into the bedding.The crumpling of the leaves made me jump in fear, I was on edge for sure.My head spun as I stumbled out of the underground den, my eyes squinting at the suprisingly bright day.'Bright days can decieve.' Garnle, the pack elder once told me.I walked threw the woods with a slow pace, my paws still aching greatly."L-Look." I could hear a voice pipe up, I jumped and growled feircly as a fox limped out of the brush."Skotta!" I smiled, my face lightening up greatly."I though you were dead!" He yelped in dissbelif, I shook my head "No, I was the only survivor I think, I ran as fast as I could outta there!I jumped over a big flamed of fire!" Soon enough our conversation became a rush of words full of excitment and glee.My friend smiled at the end of it all "Maybe my mom can let you stay with us?" He said with caution, like it was to early to ask but I just grinned "That would be great Skotta." He nodded as he spun on his paws to turn around "Cool trick, who taught you that?" I asked him, I've never seen it done before.Skotta shrugged "I did it on accident one day, I thought it was cool." His tone dropped down to his I'm oh so cool tone."Well, how do ya' do it?" I asked, leaning my head towards him.He grinned with pride, I normaly taught him stuff, not the other way around.He did the twisty thing again as he turned to look at me."You just keep these three paws on the ground and push of with this one." I tried it out and fell, my ears slanted down as the fox chuckled."Hey, not funny!" I snapped, standing back up and trying again and this time I succeeded.He twitched his tail to say 'Good job' and I smirked at him before we entered the den.

I flinched as his mother's too cold of a glare struck me as we sat down."Skotta!I told you I don't want that mangy mutt in my home!" She snapped, I cluched the dirt below me in attempt to brace myself."But mom!Her whole pack was killed last night, she has no where to go!" My friend whinned in protest.But his mother wasn't taking it "I don't want a rouge wolf in my den!" She hissed, I went black as I felt myself lurch forward toward Skotta's mother."Stop calling me that!I don't even know what that even means!" I snarled as I opened my eyes to see rage and fear mixed together in her eyes."Get off you pup!" She spat into my face, small droplets of spit fell onto my face.A fox could tear apart a badger in this kind of anger, but I had pride and I was keeping it.It was the last thing I had to my name now.I lunged at her again as she attempted to push me off but with no result.I dug my sharp claws into her arms, I heard my pulse in my ear, a deep thudding that matched my breathing as I dug my teeth into the Vixen's neck.I could taste the salty red liquid go down my throught as I pushed my canines deeper in.I felt her body go limp and cold with loss of blood.I heard nothing, my ears shut off as the adrenaline pushed threw my body with great speed.But now it had all begun to die down as the faint sounds of screaming grew louder, I had forgotten my best friend was there.I turned bravley to look at him, he was curled up tightly against the wall, his chest descending the ascending rapidly at a great pace."Sko-Sko-Sk-" I could manage to speak his name, my eyes were wide with fear and dissbelif of what I had just done to his mother, no she wasn't dead but she could be.She wouldn't be able to hunt and Skotta would have to learn to hunt at a dangerous age.What have I done?I am a monster...."I'm-I can't belive you!" He muttered under his tail, tears flooded his eyes as I winced at his words that stung me."Why?" He begged for the answer "I don't know Skotta!I didn't know what I was doing!" He rolled his eyes in anger "You didn't hear me screaming no?" He spat in rage "No!I didn't okay?" I felt like crying, but I didn't have the time to do so, so I ran threw the door.Running was always a option when it came to my life.

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I looked around, I have never gone this far out into the woods.The forest began to seem thiner as more light came threw and there seemed to be a end at the once never ending home.I winced at the claw marks that Skotta's mother had left on my leg.I sniffed the air to try to figure out where I was, but no luck.I was totaly lost and with no where to go.I shook my head and pushed myself on, tail low."What have I done?I'm...I'm crazy." I muttered to myself, I just nearly killed my best friend's mother, my family and pack was just killed and I haven't shed a tear yet."How much more stranger can I get?" I asked myself as I kept walking.I sniffed the air again, this time picking up a sour smell.I began to run, what was this strange smell?I looked into the forest and saw a opening of light, I must be dead.I smiled, finnaly this torture would be over!I leaped into the light, my heart was beating with excitment, what would heaven look like?Who would be there to greet me with sweet smiles?I closed my eyes with a smile as I made it threw the air."Whoo-hoo!" I grinned, but my happiness was soon broken by the contact with the hard ground.I growled, I was alive and defintaly feelng it.The impact had shot pain into my already bad shoulder "Stupid!" I growled at myself as I limped forward towards the smell.Mother had spoken to me about strange two-leggers, but I didn't belive they were true until now.I looked up and there one was, right there.I snarled at his strange shape and it's very large paw, he chuckled as he bent down and grabbed me with warm hands.He was wearing a white lab coat, his eyes covered by plastic goggles as he carried me into the lab.Men looked at me "I'll get Mark.." One of them said, exiting the room.The man that had grabbed me placed me on a cold and hard surface, I watched his every move.His hand reached for a white bottle and white puff balls on sticks.He dipped them into the bottle and put them on my open wounds, I winced at first of pain but then of relif as I relized what he was doing.He was fixing me, I closed my eyes and tried to block out the pain but soon a loud noise came threw.I jumped up in shock, a large man came threw the heavy swinging doors."Hey Mark, I found this lil' girl outside all alone, maybe we can put her into one of the packs?" The man that was fixing me suggested to Mark.Mark nodded in agreement "We have a drop in the population, so she could be a big help.Thank you for finding her Steve." He smiled at Steve, I smiled slightly to.Mark ruffled up my fur on my head slightly as they placed me into a cage."Lets go ahead and bring her now, she doesn't seem to have any desease so she is ready." They both nodded as they jabbed me with a sharp object.I jumped up and yelped, feirce growls came from my mouth as I snapped as them "I trusted you!" I growled feircly, my eyes dialating as everything went black.

I shivered as I awoke to a cold breeze."Wha-Where am I?" I muttered, my head tilting in confusion.I smelled a thousand wolf scents, my nose burned with the amount of them all that I placed my paws over it.I looked around, the alien sorroundings were to much that my heart began to beat like a humming bird's wings in my ear, tears ran down my cheeks "Momma!Momma!Daddy!" I yelped for them, I knew they wouldn't or couldn't come.They were all dead and there was nothing I could do about it."Momma!Daddy!" I sobbed, ears back as a franticly smelled for their scents."Please mommy....daddy?" I Whimpered, running forward into the feild of thick and soft grass.My nose couldn't seperate the scents from the rest, my parents hadn't taken me that far in training yet.But I could smell that I was in a pack's territory, but I didn't care.I stumbled onward until I reached a forest that reaked of a strange and unfamiliar scent, I smelled for a single one and soon I found it.A large horned and furry creature passed by me "Thats a moose." A voice sounded behind me, I jumped around as a large female wolf stepped closer with a sweet smile."Young one...Who is your pack?" Her voice was like honey as I shrugged "They are gone...All gone." My breathing was heavy as I had a sudden urge to hug her, I just needed a saftey blanket.The wolfess nodded in understandment, she picked me up by my scruff "My name is Re, I'm a Den Mother for the pack of Judo." I could feel her smile form as her lips moved upwards."I-I-I'm Hayumi..." I smiled weakly as she began to run.Her body seemed to twist and turn threw and past the intertwining vines that blocked her way.She leaped up and slipped down to get to where she was going, her grace was amazing as we made it to a opening."This is our home." She spoke, emphasis on the word our.I smiled, pups played happily as the adults talked.The pack was made of atleast twenty, my pack was just ten.Re put me down onto the ground as a older female came towards us "Aniu, this is Hayumi." Re said to the tall white female, a darker grey and equaly old male came behind her.The white female named Aniu dipped her head towards mine, smelling my head as I smelled her snout in curiousity.She laughed as did the male "She seems strong, where is you pack young one?" I looked down as she asked me this "They were raided by another pack and killed..." I frowned as Re felt the pain I was feeling and nuzzled me.I was praticly sitting on her paws as Aniu smiled sympatheticly "Well I am the leader of this pack, Aniu.And this is my Beta, Nava." The male smiled proudly."Surley we would like to have you here, we are low on hunters." Re nodded "She can be a apprentince by tommorrow!Firetail needs one anyways, hes been bored out of his mind." She laughed, Aniu and Nava followed and I had the need to also."How old are you?" Aniu asked "Six moons." I choked up, she nodded "Shes ready." Re picked me up with care as she and Aniu walked to a large rock that over looked the group of dens and wolves."Everyone!" Aniu called, all eyes instantly locked on her as she stepped forward "We have a new comer, her name is Hayumi and has lost her pack sadly and is now staying with us!" She called, I was set down next to Aniu's large paws."Please welcome her with a warm heart since she has been through alot." The wolves nodded in agreement, but one snarled "Why do we accept this stray?" The voice uproared "Shes probaly a rouge!" I flinched as I felt rage rush threw my body quickley.I leaped from the rock and slashed the male's face, Aniu watched with ancipitation on what I would do next."I'm not a rougue!" I snapped, the male lunged forward at me but I jumped above him and he rammed himself into a rock, shock on my change in position he stammered forward.I rammed my head into his side, he tried to get up but I bit him."Gah!" He yelped as Aniu nearly laughed."See my fellow wolves, she is stronger than Niju!" The pack nodded and laughed, I jumped back onto the rock with Aniu.The sun was already setting as Aniu told her pack mates goodnight."C'mon Yumi...Lets go to sleep."She carried me into a den with her, the bedding was very soft, softer than the grass that I ran threw this afternoon."You won't be sleeping here tommorrow night, you will be sleeping with the other apprentinces." I nodded at her words as I curled up next to her, she was very warm and comforting to be around."Goodnight." She whispered as I drifted off to sleep.

My dreams were full of fire, but a icey pain stung my face.I ran through a endless feild of war, but I didn't seem to notice the dying wolves around me and they didn't notice me either.My ears were tilted forward as I saw a large white and black male.He gave off a radiation of evil, I instincivly growled at the male.My haunches raised as I felt the hair on my back follow it, the male's eyes scrutinized me exremley with a cold glare but mine looked suprisingly more deadly.I leaped onto his body, my sharp canines inserting themself into his skin, claws embedding deeply also.Blood splattered onto the nearby wolves' faces and mine.The male dropped to the ground and everything became fuzzy, I grunted as the thick and moist air awoke me, my paws begged to stay in place but Re was looking at me like she was waiting for me."Goodmorning!" She smiled cheerfuly, my heart racing dream faded in importance as I stood up in the large den and stretched "Goodmorning Re!" I smiled back, a few small pups were just two squirells away from my nose so I tried to keep a good distance from them.Re must've noticed my glances at the pups because she spoke up "They are my first litter, aren't they cute?" She smiled, her eyes glittered in pride as the beautiful wolfess licked a pup's ear.I nodded in agreement as a strong howl echoed threw the pack, the whole territory could hear it!I looked at Re and she smiled, we instantly bounded off towards the group.A was sat with the other pups, I sat by a large built male that was the color orange.He smiled kindly at me "I'm Dingo, nice to meet ya'." I smiled back to be polite "I'm Hayumi, but you can call me Yumi." He nodded in agreement as a female sneered at me "Stupid rouge.." She spat to another female sitting close beside her, the female didn't answer but instead watched her leader take place onto the rock."My fellow wolves of Judo!" Her voice rung out to the heavens with strength and confidence towards her pack.I grinned in the way they all were not scared of her, unlike my pack."As we know, we have a new pup in our pack." I heard some grumbles of anger from the wolf that I bit the day before."She will be Firetail's apprentice, please treat her with the same respect you would treat any of the other pups in the pack." She spoke carefully, but even her words didn't make me belive that the criticism would cease until I trully proved myself to them.Their smiling faces turned to sneak glances at me, some filled with care and love, some fear or anger, others excitment.I smile at all, trying to be sweet and kind.

A chocolate male with a red patch on his eyes and a red dipped tail and legs looked over at me and smiled, he must be Firetail.After the pack fled back to their duties I walked towards the male, he did the same to me.I toutched his shoulder with my nose respectfully, he nodded "As you know, I am Firetail." He smiled kindly, bravery constantly painted on his eyes."Today we will be training near the Ragged Rock area and in the woods near the watering hole." He explained to me, I nodded even though I had't a clue what he was talking about and he laughed."You will learn our ways soon young pup, Aniu doesn't take so kindly to most rou-," He cut himself off, remembering what had happend to Niju I guessed "stray pups, so you must be special!" He smiled again as we nodded and took off towards the exit in the pack, we ran under and leaped over branches that sorrounded the camp for protection I guessed."You keep up well!" He mentioned to me, his large muscles flexing with each stride he made."Oh, thanks." I shrugged, I wasn't going so fast was I?"Lets speed up shall we?" He smirked playfully, testing me.He quickley sped ahead of me and I followed, our legs stretched in time was we ran at our top speed."Wow..." He he panted, stopping the race.I stopped also and sat down next to him "Your fast!" He laughed, I shrugged "Hmm, I don't think so, I'm probaly not as fast as you though." I hinted, he nodded "One day you will, but at this rate you will be the fastest wolf in Judo!" He laughed, pushing me over playfully, my wounds didn't feel all that bad anymore so I could withstand the playfull blow.I stayed on the ground for awhile, waiting for him to come and sniff me."Um..Hayumi?Are you okay?" He asked as he stepped closer.I twisted around and leaped on his head, he flung back as we landed on our back in laughter.We were getting along great, hopefully everyone else was like him."Okay, okay lets get to work you silly fox." I giggled, I even knew that foxes were tricksters, along with coyotes.We trotted along the sharp stones that bundled together dangerously."This will test your grace." He explained to me, my stare was uncertian as I leaped on the first rock.The top dug into my pad as I yelped quietly "Your pushing down to hard!" He called to me, I nodded and let myself relax, the pressure was less but still there.I leapd across the sharp stones with ease.I then looked ahead, a rock was a bear cub length away, how could I jump that."C'mon Yumi, you can do it!" He called from below me, I nodded once again and croutched down, I sprung up on my back paws and landed on the rock.My balance wasn't all there, I felt myself tipping four different ways at once.I began to panic, I needed to turn around but how?A flash back rushed threw me, Skotta's face painted itself on the back of my eyelids, it was when he taight me the twisty thing."Its no time for slumbering Hayumi!" He scolded slightly, I opened my eyes and did Skotta's trick.I smiled as Firetail nodded in agreement "I have never seen that done before, but nice move!" He called proudly toward me.I gleamed as I jumped back to him.

My pads hit the ground, no blood was shed from the rocks.It had been two days since my last outing in the woods with Firetail since he was on a mission."I'm very impressed, but even the most quickest and gracful wolves can't hunt the best." He noted, he lead me threw the thick forest once again "This is Ram Woods, each part of the forest in our territory is named after the prey that mostly inhabits it." I nodded, that made since, it would be easier for hunting.He walked me along the scent trail that blocked Ram Woods from Pronghorn Meadows."What do you smell now?" He asked me this every stride it seemed "Three ravens, two rabbits, and one Ram." He nodded with me in agreement "And what else?" What had I missed, I captured every smell it seemed.I sniffed again, my nose picked up something. "A badger!" I barked proudly, eyes big and shining as he praised me "Good!" We ran side by side like kin, we even looked alike even though I was gray and black and he was dark brown and red."I want to see your hunting skills, sometimes Aniu will send only one of us out to gather food so you need to learn how to hunt as a loner." I nodded in agreement with his words.I croutched down in the tall grass, large Rams ran right past me, Firetail cocked his head in confusion.I stalked a single one, he was sitting alone, he was bulky and could feed two large wolves.I figured that he was a good pick, so I croutched even lower to mask my scent from him.He didn't seem to notice me until I leaped, he tried to run away but I was to quick.I leaped onto his back and bit into his jugular, blood loss made him collapse and I soon gave him another bite to finish him off.His eyes were glazed and shocked loking, I grabbed the carcass and brought it back to Firetail."Wow Hayumi!You are a skilled hunter!No wonder Aniu was so fond of you!" I blushed under my fur as I drug the Ram back into camp.The other pups looked at me, astonished."Good job new girl." The male named Jackal said to me, I blushed yet again as I put it into the storage.

Okay guysthanks for all of the veiws already *luff yew!* I know my story isn't the best, but I'm only 13!But please leave atleast one comment or I'm not posting anymore, I realy want to know what you guys think about it!

I opened my eyes, a gray sky hun low over the tree tops.Howls echoed in the far distance."Up!Up!" The wolves ordered us.We leaped into the opening, my eyes went wide as the moon, legs shaking under me as I looked down at the clearing."No.No, no, no, no!" Meeko growled as he leaped into the battle, his large paws made dust fly up as his apprentince Dingo followed him quickley.I saw Re and Happa's backs in the mother's den, protecting the pups.
Firetail stood next to me, Claw next to Jackal, Petal next to Fenny, and Stream next to Riah.We looked like a real pack alone, our muscles large and visibale."Its going to be okay..." I heard Firetail whisper into my ear.He stood a ground hog away from me as his voice echoed threw the trees "Go!" He called.And we did.

We raced down the hill and into the battle, I couldn't find any apprentinces to fight so I figured I could go for the younger warriors.I found a black female, red markings that looked much like scars were on her back and head.I smelled her fur, a stingy scent filled my nostrils to where I gagged.What animal was this?I smelled again as I bit into her fur.As I relized what she was I flinched.Coyote.
My eyes widened in shock of what I was fighting, Coyotes were known for their slyness and quick thinking in a fight.The female reached her back paw up and clawed at my face, trying to get me off.But I just peirced in harder, and harder, and harder.She let out a terrible yowl of pain as I began to shake my head, ripping a clump of skin and meat off of her body."Get...Off...Rou-" As she began that word I had her pinned.She reached her back paws up and began to rake my stomache.I could feel blood dripping down my forhead and into my eyes.I wipped it off and lunged at her neck.This time she pushed her paw up to my throught and I flew past another pair of fighting canines.

Oooh!Cliff Hanger!lolz