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is this good so far(the teaher said it was awsome)
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 Post subject: Wolf City:a city rises and falls. 5th grade
PostPosted: Sat Dec 17, 2005 9:26 pm 
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I did this story in 5th grade for portfolio fiction.I cant find my copy so ill type what i can remember.

In 4th grade I loved wolves in 5th i still do but that year somthing happend to me that was unimangible.I was in science when a band of Wolf spirits came through the window when the first word( thats right word)came out of his mouth the whole class freked out and started screaming at that moment he used his mysticle wolf stone to freze time it efected everbody but me.(and thats all i can remember so far.


Edit ill post more when i find my copy (looks under bed)

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That's er creative. I used to have to write portfoio fics too but they were mainly stupid stuff

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That's er creative. I used to have to write portfoio fics too but they were mainly stupid stuff
I wrote this in fith grade of course im a freshman in high school looking back on it now it was pretty good for that age group.Heres some more that i remebered.

Aperantly the wolf packs leader was not very fond of the wolfs pack Shaman as the leader walked up to me he gave him a litle nuge to make him scoot over.Then the shaman began chanting words of some sort and I was transformed in to a wolf with coalblack fur yellow eyes and white paws.Ironcy you have wolf powers the leader told me.To fly Think fly its really straight foward.

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wolf powers to fly?

Well my mind wasn't so creative when i was in fifth grade. Most of the ones i wrote, the topic was provided by our teacher, one time she told us to write one about the alphabet (how gay is that?) and i just wrote the alphabet and turned it in.
That was a straight up F lol

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I like it. I think its very creative but it needs more of an explanation. Too mysterious.

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balto678 wrote:
wolf powers to fly?

Well my mind wasn't so creative when i was in fifth grade. Most of the ones i wrote, the topic was provided by our teacher, one time she told us to write one about the alphabet (how gay is that?) and i just wrote the alphabet and turned it in.
That was a straight up F lol
In second grade I hat to write a story about a king who coulden't stop laughing(Gay 'o rama) i was lucky to get good job couse you know no letter grades.well heres some more

And to turn intangeble think it said the leader.But what about my family how would i ever suvive I said.We already got them and turned them into wolves too.I flew outside still getting used to it as i began walking up to my parents i noticed my sister was on the ground sleeping i guss since she is so young it had a sleep affect.My mom was a snow white wolf with blue eyes my dad was just like me but older and larger and my sisrer was brown with dark brown paws.


Edit Phatom i was in the 5th grade what do you expect

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it's kinda wierd but mysterious is good. It makes you keep reading so you can find out the solution to the mysteries. Which is why i used to read alot of spy novels and murder case novels

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it's kinda wierd but mysterious is good. It makes you keep reading so you can find out the solution to the mysteries. Which is why i used to read alot of spy novels and murder case novels
Every time i try to write somthing sombody has alredy posted not on topic but still.

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sorry. I posted that then i saw you had posted more of the story.

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sorry. I posted that then i saw you had posted more of the story.
Oh im not blamin you it just gets on my nerves.Oh well heres some more.

That night it was extreamly cold I curled into a ball and put my tail over my nose to keep me warm.I woke up at 1:00 A.M. to strecth my legs then i saw aletter on the ground for me it read.If the profisy is correct then your the half-a I shoud have been and when you were turned into a wolf you unleashed it.at the bottom of the paper there was a claw mark in blood red ink.

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When I woke up I talked about the letter that i had "received". He said that it had to be his old nemisis what it mentioned about the halfa at Wolf city there had been whispers that history was going to repet its self.yor no longer safe here get to wolf city go inform your parents ill go with you. said the leader.when we got to wolf city my famliy and i moved into a wolf aparetment.the next day I went outside to explore I heard a howl that gave me a headahce I approched the sound through a ally to get a look.It wasa female wolf about my age When she stooped I went over.Hi My names Mark i said nerviously.Huh mark never herd of you you new.she said. Yeah i got here last night i said. You look kinda funny well im sure your normal alot of strang people have been coming your normal right.she said Riiiight i said. Have you discoverd your special power I have a sonic howl I can break stuuf with a single holw thats why my family keeps getting swed. Your a black wolf Sooooo think blen sure enough I was invisable. Have you met toby oh by the way my names Lucy.

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