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PostPosted: Thu Aug 06, 2009 7:54 pm 
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Ok so I've been working on my art/drawings and I sketched this up this morning, and I wanted to know what you think I should work on. I sort of reffed off a picture of one of my own dogs :lol:

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 06, 2009 8:32 pm 
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Well what you could work on is the dogs legs, some you made skinny and others you made way to huge.
The head looks to small from the body, and you could practise a bit more on your paws. If you would like i could redline it for you?

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Well what you could work on is the dogs legs, some you made skinny and others you made way to huge.
The head looks to small from the body, and you could practise a bit more on your paws. If you would like i could redline it for you?


Ok that would be helpful, Thank you

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Okay here yeah go. I put it up twice so you could see it next to your lines and without your lines. ;)
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Ok thank you I'll work on this

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One thing I would like to point out to both of you is that the tail is a continuation of the spine and should connect as such. Sorry I don't have time for a better description or a redline

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One thing I would like to point out to both of you is that the tail is a continuation of the spine and should connect as such. Sorry I don't have time for a better description or a redline


That's ok and thank you

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One thing I would like to point out to both of you is that the tail is a continuation of the spine and should connect as such. Sorry I don't have time for a better description or a redline

Oh jeez! How did i mess up on that :lol: Sorry hahah was drawing it to fast ><

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Aside from moving the eyebrows a wee bit higher, looks very nice!

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Better than the first one you put up...see you're improving already. Just takes practise and patients. :D

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Thanks to everyone for all the help, I really appreciate it

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