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Sardonyx
 Post subject: Critique?
PostPosted: Wed Aug 05, 2009 5:33 am 
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Hi!
I'm looking to improve on my drawings, and I wonder if any fellow artists can tell me what I need to improve on and what I am doing well. You can always do a red-line to get your point across =]
I attached my drawing so have a look and please comment ^^


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 Post subject: Re: Critique?
PostPosted: Wed Aug 05, 2009 5:45 am 
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First of all, the snout needs to be "wider" and "longer".
Also, the tail is too perfect. It needs to have furry, creased sticky-outy bits.
And same with the legs.

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 Post subject: Re: Critique?
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Ah OK ^^
It's really hard to do fur with a mouse though T_T
And I will work on both the things you said
Thanks!

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 Post subject: Re: Critique?
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Sardonyx wrote:
Ah OK ^^
It's really hard to do fur with a mouse though T_T
And I will work on both the things you said
Thanks!


You're welcome, Sardy. <3

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 Post subject: Re: Critique?
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Could you possibly red-line the work for me?
If not, then that is fine ^^
I'm only asking because I want a clear idea of how I should draw.

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 Post subject: Re: Critique?
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I think this is what they mean ;]


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Ah... I see!
Thanks, this is really helpful ^^

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Allow me edit Diego's version 83
Hope that's okay bud


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 Post subject: Re: Critique?
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Hi Rex (GSD)!
Thank you for your contribution, this will help greatly with my drawing skill ^^
I really love your art by the way =]

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Thats fine Rexy ;3 My art is a bit dodgy because drawing with a lap top touch pad ain't easy xD

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Okay i did another version for you.
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I didnt add the paws in because im kinda busy. XD But i did a basic shape for you real quick. What you need to do maybe to improve more on shapes is look at dog/wolf pictures.
Hope it helps.

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