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I want to improve my artwork, so if you could critique my artwork or redline it, I would be happy.

I tryed.. my anatomy isnt perfect, but I did the few things tht looked off to me..

Thanks, I try and work on that.

The canine is off balance. It looks like it's leaning to the side and with the paws so close together like that, it wouldn't be able to remain balanced and would just topple over. There are also some perspective errors, either that or the tail is very small. I'm not too sure about the ears as it looks like something has aught the characters interest and if that's the case then the ears should be pricked forward. The eyes are also a bit large, and the muzzle is too small and looks like it's been...hard to explain. Like pushed down. at an awkward angle. Finally the neck is a tad long and the chest is something to be careful with, as lots of people make this mistake. I've shown how it should be drawn in the 'line.

Keep in mind that my anatomy is not perfect either and the best thing you can do is reference from a real photograph.

Thanks you two. How's this?

Looks good. Though I don't understand why there is white grass...

It's light blue really. I was trying to make the grass look like night colors and match the picture.

Er, there's a few things I feel I should point out to inform you and keep Mighty from falling into any bad habits. The shoulder isn't aligned with the arm properly, and the legs are too close together to the point that the wolf would topple over. The tail is also unnatural too. No canine has a tail that long and it wouldn't twist right round the body like that. As always, I suggest photo reference.

I doodle up some more. red ink away! I need alot of work.

That's some very good work you have here, Mighty.

there you go^^ hope I helpred =)