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 Post subject: The Alue's heritage (comic)
PostPosted: Sun Jul 12, 2009 3:52 am 
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Hiya guys !
Yesterday, i drew the first page of a comic about the continuation of Alue's story ^^
The story begin 4 month after the run away.

This is the spring and Alue wait babies with Ed ( her husband ). But Alue does not feel fit and think that it is not meant to be Alpha. Niju but is back and threatens to take revenge by killing all those who abandoned. Time is not Alue tears and created a plan against him. Alas, the most loyal warriors have more confidence in their Alpha because she does not think and talk too fast. They want another Alpha worthy of the name. Alue, desperate attempts to flee and leave room for her husband that he is against it. Alue learn to live alone and to protect those little about the world. But it should show bravery by running Niju ...

The first page ( no finish ) :

http://www.noelshack.com/uploads/160620 ... 072701.jpg

I MUST WANT AN ARTIST ( or not ) FOR THE BACKGROUND PLEASE !!!!! If you interessed, send me a private message !

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 12, 2009 11:05 am 
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Not bad, so far it seems to remind me a bit -too- much of The Lion King but it's not bad.

Also, her name is spelt "Aleu". ;] If you have Microsoft Word or something similar I suggest writing your script out in that and using the spell checker.
Check the Balto Character's pages for the correct spellings of their names.

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 12, 2009 1:09 pm 
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GhostlyVividDreams wrote:
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Not bad, so far it seems to remind me a bit -too- much of The Lion King but it's not bad.

Also, her name is spelt "Aleu". ;] If you have Microsoft Word or something similar I suggest writing your script out in that and using the spell checker.
Check the Balto Character's pages for the correct spellings of their names.


I was about to say the same thing but it is only a drea for Aleu. Are you going to color in your comic?I am too, thinking of making a Balto comic.


Yeah! I'm coloring the page ^^ ! I didn't know if is it "ALue" in english or "Aleu" ><

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